Journey Through the Immortal Martial Plane

It doesn't feel very engaging; everything is too bland. If you want to play it safe, you could add more details and refine the logic, but you haven't done any of that. It feels only slightly better than a diary entry. If you don't change, it's likely to fail.

After reading a few pages, this novel is really boring.

It is indeed plain and uneventful, but it is not necessarily stable. The way of doing things is rather idealistic, lacking both the characteristics of the times and the personality of the character.

You don't know anything about the plot, what kind of time travel are you talking about? The protagonist is like a complete idiot.

You can't learn any extraordinary skills, you don't want any beautiful women, you practice martial arts all day long, but your skills are mediocre. I don't know what kind of nonsense you've written.

From the very beginning of *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*, the moment someone starts telling others they're from another world that they can travel to the next, ugh! It's so incredibly addictive!

Dear author, the writing is really bland and doesn't feel very engaging. Also, sometimes the tasks are a bit abrupt; I almost strained my back.

They created a main god space, what the hell? I don't want to watch anymore. Bye.

Appearing in Putian, Fujian, and then immediately at Shaolin Temple in Songshan, Henan.

The author must have graduated from a finance and economics university! The novel is just a long, rambling account! What a talent!