Start with the Extraordinary

You said you've traveled through time, isn't it embarrassing to still have a game-like approach to dealing with things around you, and the plot can't be skipped? Don't you think it's forcefully reducing your intelligence? If you write like this, why don't you just write about games? You have to travel through time and survive by playing games, and write game articles by writing them. You can read ten lines at a glance without using your brain, but it will be awkward for older bookworms. The writing, plot and themes are all good so far, but the writing is very awkward. It seems very stupid and poisonous to treat reality as a game and watch the cutscenes according to the plot in the game. After writing a novel, you should also read it carefully. It's not just about feeling happy.

Well written, but updates are a bit slow

It has always been reasonable. The problem is that the fourth level of the Church of Original Sin has come, and where are the official fourth level people. . . I just can't figure it out, official organization. . . What is an official organization? Only those who control the greatest violence are called official organizations, instead of looking at justice and evil. There are no senior standing personnel in small cities to understand. The problem has been known for so long in advance. You didn't call anyone. You are just kidding. . .

Update

The book I supported is gone, but I've given you seven recommendation votes.

The first few chapters are of a very high standard. But the first three chapters have a good pace, but the next one or twenty chapters are too slow. There are too many background explanations in the chapters, which greatly slows down the pace. For example, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into setting various professional names and magic modification history. But long and lengthy writing is very boring. The protagonist went to the auction and wrote for a long time. He wrote N chapters in order to find out the missing results. The appearance of transitional equipment is dense and out of time, and the writing is too detailed for two weapons. The archbishop hasn't come for a long time, it's already been chapter 40. The plot is still dragging on. The first dungeon has been so long since I backstabbed a younger brother, which is a small climax. According to this rhythm, it is impossible to finish the big BOSS in two chapters. From the time he appears to the end, it is another ten chapters. This rhythm has exploded. I haven't joined an organization yet, and then according to the author's urine, there are ten more chapters, joining the organization, accepting tasks, the setting of the organization, the golden finger's foresight and foreknowledge, these psychological activities are over, it is estimated that the next plot (conservative estimate) will start in Chapter 60-70... So... The details should not be detailed, first-class writing, third-rate rhythm, second-rate script (copy). I'm not here to be evil, I really feel that the decisive and prophetic rhythms were wasted, almost all of them are interspersed with background settings and some inexplicable useless details (many of which are long descriptions that hardly affect the plot) The first copy, time travel, identity positioning, three chapters. Initiation, conversion, (Chapter 3-5) Black market, archbishop news, scavenger news (Chapter 4-6) Backstab, baptism, preparation (battle 1-3, +2-5) In other words, the content should be about 22-30 chapters now. The rhythm is so good that it is difficult not to become popular with this writing style. I really don't know what I'm writing. The setting is perfect, but too many magic changes and settings are missing (too dense), some details are too long and detailed, and the rhythm is stretched too long, which is a disguised form of water. But setting and magic modification are ten times more difficult than water injection, and the details are also difficult to write. This is a typical thankless task, my dear author. Is there any novel that dares to kill a small BOOS at the beginning of the 40th chapter? While it's still early, you can still change it... There are few chapters, so it's easy to delete them to compress the rhythm. It just depends on whether you want to let it go. Attention, you are not slow to gain momentum, but your rhythm is broken. You are not happy enough, your career plan is not clear, and your future plan is also not clear enough. Suppose you want to rely on the Federation, and you let the protagonist comment on the good and bad in a psychological way, and write it out to let the readers know, well, you won't even mention it, so let us default to it? Even if it is a slow-burn writing method, the blood will collapse at the beginning. Can you persist in ordering hundreds of orders on the shelf? Will the readers have the patience to see that?

Your writing is very good. I would like to apply for your position as Operations Officer. Full order, reward, please stay tuned for a few days! 🙂

Others dispatched a fourth level, but the government organization was unable to even dispatch two or three fourth levels. What kind of official organization is this weak? How to maintain stability? Reasoning with a cult? The author certainly doesn't know much about the official organization. Just like in the police station. In addition to regional police officers, there are also mobile special police officers. It's impossible for something big to happen and there's no one to deal with it. Moreover, the government has the largest human resources, and it is impossible to have fewer combatants than a secret cult. It is impossible to maintain stability if you are unable to overwhelm others. I hope the author can give more thought to this aspect

This is a good dish as described by the official strength. One cult's level 4 can kill and injure everyone. There are so many cults. I can't figure out how the official can do it.

I originally imagined a lot of subsequent plots, such as the scene where the protagonist wears the robe of the Holy Son as an undercover agent in the dark camp. I was looking forward to it, but now it's a pity. See you again when you have a chance.

The game's alien world, aura recovery, and sequential professions are all my favorite elements. The protagonist understands the plot, there is a golden finger game panel, a unique meditation method, and a dual-system professional master. These are all very enjoyable to watch. I look forward to the author writing the story of Luther, a bottom-line youngster and a truly experienced player, to the end.

It's been a few days... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting... There's still no update... Hundan →_→ Update ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

This book would definitely be popular if it were updated properly

The boss is awesome. I wish the new book will get better and better. Get up early and become a god.

Every book is TJ, author, are you sorry?

It feels so good that Jingran is dying! Where is the doctor's scalpel? ?

Awesome, I'm sorry to say that I've started a new book, but I hadn't been browsing the comment section of "Come Like a Lion" and saw you clicking on it. Okay, I hope you can write well. To be honest, you are considered a relatively famous author. If you want to make money by writing books, don't ruin your popularity.

It's very reasonable so far. Come on, support with recommendation votes.

Blood Ludwig? The church's first hunter?

The writing is quite good, (I think) but this update makes me have no intention of following it!

Is the author going to close the book? I found that it was all forced to end.

{"NickName":"Qingying","UserId":313221776}Sorry, I used the wrong number when replying to your message. I wanted to delete it and reply again, but accidentally deleted the entire post. 😂 Character memorabilia, it is better to record the character's greater opportunities or beliefs, life, and identity changes. And the major events shall be based on the first one that passes each chapter. Do not post repeatedly, it is useless, and it will not be published even if it is passed. I don't know if there are sensitive words in it or what, but it didn't show up after I posted it several times. If you see the trouble, say thank you.

If you hadn't stumbled across this book by chance, I wouldn't have known you were reading both books! ! ! Superman please add more