The Bright Moon Is Long

Big change. The writing is so bad that I have to rewrite it. Please move to Work Related to read the original text. We apologize for any inconvenience caused, thank you!

Oh my gosh, there are so many comments on this novel that no one has read for years, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! So happy

2019.11.26 The novel finally has a cover. Let us remember this great and difficult moment. This is a small step for our Makihara Ergouzi (Inujiro). But it is a big step for all book lovers. Let us raise a toast together and cheer! (Applause)(Applause)(Applause)(Applause)(Fracture)

This bright moon is long... A bit magical.

This book is no longer available. Please read the new book "The Lamented Song of Evil Spirits in the Dark Night"

Emmmm, it's a big deal this time... I was actually selected to participate in the recitation

I'll bookmark it and ask for a return visit.

I wrote a new book called "Li Yuan's Magical World"

🙂🙂🙂🙂

Come on, author, come on (just the wording is a little wrong, why are there question marks in the book)

Come on author. Try to sign a contract👍

Come on! (=^▽^=)

The chapter title should be a bit suspenseful, not about the appearance, just some purpose.

Collect masterpieces, please do your best

🙏Thank you boss for the flight tickets

I have read three chapters and have collected them. Let me make some suggestions, personal opinions (=^▽^=) First of all, as I said in the article, I think Da Da may be a little contradictory to the character of Yuezi. For example, it was said earlier that Yuezi is a really indifferent child, and later it was written that Yuezi was domineering and willful. I understand that the character I want to portray is probably the growth process of a super powerful, innocent and willful young master who is doted on in every possible way. In this case, don't write about his indifference. The innocent young master may become indifferent when he grows up, but he should not be able to do it when he is young. Secondly, the starting point of the protagonist Yuezi is too high, and it is most likely that he wanted to write about the joy he felt when he was growing up. But if you think about it, why do traditional male fantasy films write that the protagonist is initially at the bottom? One is for the reader's sense of immersion, after all we are all ordinary people, and the other is for fun. You think, if a person who is originally at the bottom gets more things by defeating his opponents through hard work, and then grows up little by little and goes out to abuse people who are inferior to him with a superior person, I think everyone will definitely think that the chosen person is very annoying. 😂 Let's talk about it one more thing, I saw that the writing style was not good, so I overturned it and started over again, right? Actually, I don't know much about writing, but I think writing is not just about putting in so many good words and sentences. Many of the best novels we read use all kinds of good words and sentences. I originally thought this was good, but later I found that when I first started writing, I couldn't actually incorporate good words and sentences into it. This would make these sentences appear very abrupt and affect the coherence of the overall plot. I am also in the urge to overthrow everything I wrote before and start over again, haha, but I heard an editor say that you should not always overturn and start over. If you really want to make changes, just wait until the entire book is finished before making major changes. I think it makes sense. Ha ha. The above is purely personal opinion. (*^ω^*) He is from the author of Jun's Salted Fish, please come on! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶