Unromantic Fantasy World

Ten years of non-experts ("unromantic fantasy world spontaneous research experts" referred to as "unexperts") came uninvited. This book is written very interestingly and with great care. You can feel the author's efforts in conceiving and the thoughts that he wants to convey underneath the story. This is a very rare thing. It is a pity that this book has become unpopular due to various reasons. If more people can be attracted and can tolerate some seemingly forced developments in the previous text and occasional punctuation errors, plus typos, they will also like this book. . [1 Let's start with the introduction] [1.1 Partial explanation of the content of the introduction] The interest in "Unromantic Fantasy World" comes from its interesting introduction. The introduction describes a quasi-utopian city that is really unromantic and seems to be very repressive (let me use the word "nature") that has reached the point of going too far. It is obvious that Lane (the male protagonist) has a good foundation and has normal desires and standard moral concepts. It is worth looking forward to what kind of sparks he will have when he collides with this city. [1.2 Supplement to the introduction by the main text] Brica City, a multi-racial city, has established certain rules for every race that may and already lives in the city. Rules have become the core of the operation of Brica City. But we always believe that rules were originally formulated to serve "people" living in society. But when the rules become more important than people, the rules become a kind of oppression, and people become accessories to the rules. There are many rules in Brica City. Even when taking a bus, there are hundreds of rules. Every time the bus reaches a stop, the "people" on the bus must pay attention to each other's identities and then rush to give up their seats. If you give someone the wrong seat, you will be imprisoned. Lane (the male protagonist) has a normal moral concept. When faced with people in need, he will lend a helping hand when he is able. But acting bravely is a serious crime in Brica City and will result in at least a life sentence. What's interesting is that the conflict between the two concepts also applies to the world of superheroes. ——People long for heroes to save themselves from danger, but if new troubles are caused in the process, some people will hate the existence of heroes. Great men are despised for small stains, but evil men are understood for one good deed. Sometimes people do something with good intentions, but end up doing bad things with good intentions. This will certainly make people angry and worried, but if it bans the spread of kindness because of choking, and makes everyone become a puppet under the rules, just waiting for the Brica Guards who are too late to come and solve all troubles, then a city that lacks human touch and morality will be nothing more than a cold machine. From this, the first layer of conflict between Lane (the male protagonist) and this unromantic fantasy world also emerged: the conflict between personal moral concepts and unkind rules. And this contradiction will continue throughout this book. . [2 A simple analysis of the content] [2.1 The arrangement of the forced plot has profound meaning (warning: contains spoilers)] The plot at the beginning of the book, aside from some slightly unrefined ideas of Ren (the male protagonist) (which may be a bit off-putting to some people, but in my opinion is actually quite cute), gives readers a serious sense of forced drama in the development of the plot - this arranged feeling makes it clear that Ren (the male protagonist) is like a puppet, walking on the path arranged by the author, which also reduces the sense of substitution. Not only that, it will even reduce the refreshing feeling - being arranged by a superior being can even make people feel frustrated. And this is also one of the taboos in online articles. Most people in fast food culture only want to seek short-term excitement. The most important thing is that the story is interesting and refreshing. This has also become a threshold for reading this book. I don't know whether this part of the forced plot is not in the best condition of the author or is intentional, but the overall reading is very good. This shortcoming can be said to be like the one at the end of the first volume of Lord of Mysteries. It was not until the secret was revealed at the end that I felt that the forced coincidences and contradictions in the plot were all foreshadowing. Lane (the male protagonist) has always been arranged. Regardless of the supreme existence of the author, his actions in the plot are also arranged by the bosses. He was literally a puppet controlled by others, performing whatever they wanted him to do on the stage. After Ren (the male protagonist) puts on the armor, he is transported to some places, and then performs the actions he wants to perform. On the surface, it is his own choice, but in fact, someone is pushing him forward. And when he performs beyond his expectations, he will be abandoned without hesitation. He puts on armor and is a paladin who brings hope to people, but his escaping behavior tears apart the facade of maintaining superficial harmony and stirs up the interest chain of vested interests. His behavior will no longer be regarded as justice. Instead, he truly becomes a sharp knife that the people behind the scenes want to test and pierce the world's superficial peace. A knife is just a tool. And Ren is also a tool. [2.2 The experiment naturally has a purpose and wants to be achieved] Ren (the male protagonist) is the experimental tool of the person behind the scenes, so the people behind the scenes who promote all development naturally have their own goals to achieve. One of the purposes: to verify the rationality of the rules. The symptoms of the city of Brica due to the lack of food and excess are not just that when Ren (the protagonist) who first entered the city feels weird, depressed, and uncomfortable, but also people of all races living in the city will have inconveniences. Because rules are more important than the sky, no one cares about the lice under the gorgeous robe. But city managers are, after all, living people, not the city. They will reflect on various situations in the city, and will naturally discover the flaws. So whether the rules are the most important, they will also conduct repeated verifications. The second purpose: to destroy the existing situation and make breakthrough changes. Maintaining stability and breaking away from the past must have their own supporters. When the necessity of the rules is verified, there will naturally be people who want to completely break the rules. The third purpose: to be a tribute to God/an opportunity to fight against God/a game between God. There are "gods" in this game, but there are currently not many settings for gods: ① Gods are regarded as legends. The truth should be that all the gods in the past have been buried in the river of history, but there are still a small number of people who can retain their influence through fossils, totems and other items. ② Most of the images of gods are primitive and rough creatures, such as wolves, spiders, and owls, but humanoid creatures are not excluded. ③ It shows certain characteristics of Cthulhu. Even if a high-ranking existence has only a little breath, it will make people fall into madness and lose their rationality. If they gain a little strength, it is difficult to fight against such a powerful existence even if they have the intention. God seems to be a certain concept that relies on tangible items to influence the world, but the area it can cover is limited. Some of the people behind the scenes who pushed Lane (the male protagonist) to act were deeply affected. Perhaps the author has more considerations. This is what I speculate at the moment. . [3 Analysis of the image of Ren (the male protagonist)] [3.1 The dreaming puppet] In the previous part of the plot, Ren (the male protagonist) is just like a chess piece in the game of the bosses, and also a puppet on their carefully arranged stage. They do not allow Ren (the male protagonist) to have his own ideas, and only need Ren (the male protagonist) to follow their script. This kind of Ren (the male protagonist) is like Alice in Wonderland, confused and confused. [3.2 Don Quixote Hero] Gaining power, putting on Paladin armor, and executing justice is a dream that many people have had when they were young. When there is a real opportunity to be a hero, how many people can pick up the sword, shoulder the responsibility, shoulder everything, and open up light for others? Heroes exist because of the justice in their hearts and the simple desire to save others. Because someone is asking for help, he goes. No matter what the result is, the person who has such a heart and takes action at this moment is a hero. What kind of hero is Don Quixote? In the eyes of others, he is a clown who can be used for fun and fun. He was just an ordinary man who got carried away by chivalric novels, and his behavior was so funny - but this man had a righteous heart, his world was derailed by others, and he was treated unfairly because of it. In the end, he "woke up" and he died. Renn (the male protagonist) is so similar to Don Quixote. They have the same heart of justice and the dream of becoming a hero. When Renn thought he was executing justice, the world he saw in front of him also changed into the "romantic fantasy world" of the past. The evil he fought against was evil, but he was also not understood. [3.3 Saitama-sensei-like hero] There are so many works about superheroes. Regardless of the heroes in history and European and American superheroes, the one who left a deep impression on me is Saitama-sensei. As of the latest plot of 2020.4.17, Ren (the male protagonist) is not as invincible as Mr. Saitama, but he has understood what kind of situation he is in, and has broken free from certain constraints and gained new allies. He clearly knows what kind of happiness it brings him to save others and do righteous things. He understood this and had a firm belief. It's just that he has no future goals, nor is he absolutely powerful, so it is difficult to jump out of the chessboard and still be controlled by others. But despite this, I think I will also remember how relaxed and happy Ren (the male protagonist) was when he foolishly rushed towards the robber with the knife. Just as Mr. Saitama loudly declared to those who doubted him, "I didn't become a hero because I needed your comments, but because I wanted to be." In that way, the real strength of human beings is self-change. Ren has changed, he has grown, and will get better and better. . [4 Summary] I know that many book friends will say that it is too long to read, so I will sum it up by saying that the book "Unromantic Fantasy World" is really good! The male protagonist is a growth type! The plot is reasonable, there are many foreshadowings, and the structure is interesting. It is a rare masterpiece among online articles! Please read it, book friends! Anyway, there are so many free chapters, so it's not a bad idea to read them!

I just saw Dragon Slaying. This book feels good, but I don't know if it's my problem. I think the author's description of justice is far less than the shaping of the book's social outlook. I felt that the protagonist did not solve the problem at all, but just continued to destroy, breaking the rules without giving a reasonable solution. This kind of simple destruction is like a terrorist. However, no character in the book pointed out this, which made me feel that the protagonist will not get better in this regard. I don't know if this is cool or not, but it's hard for me to accept. People eat pork, and the pigs suddenly feel fear and anger one day, so the protagonist kills the meat-eaters? This is not solving the problem, nor is it justice, it is just destroying a balance.            Balance is not an insurmountable problem, it is just full of needs and compromises, and it is constantly changing and developing. Foresight can solve most problems, and the consequences of short-sightedness are also interesting. Turning a blind eye is the most unacceptable to me.          ，，，， The middle school boy complains about his fate, but achieving extraordinary things with an ordinary body is truly extraordinary. As for slaying the dragon, there is no problem in killing it, but solving the problem is better than killing it. Rather than killing evil people, at least for me, I hope that evil people will live with repentance. Thoughts are far more powerful than strength, especially when it comes to a book. Elves will not destroy the survival laws of the forest, help dying predators capture prey, or help prey escape predators. Ecology is never beautiful. Demands and compromises, that is, balance, should be dealt with beyond the strong and weak. Only in this way will there be no injustice and only justice. In short, the behavior can be absurd, the characters can break the rules, and the protagonist can be imperfect, but I hope that what is described in the book is not the upper limit of the protagonist, but just paving the way for his growth.

In reality, there is a kind of tree called yew. Because the yew contains a substance, it has been heavily cut down by humans, causing the yew to be almost endangered. However, the green environmental protection organizations dare not even let go of it. Do you know why? Because that substance is called paclitaxel, it is a specific drug for treating many types of cancer.

A masterpiece! A masterpiece! The absurd and comical writing depicts a heavy reality. The cold reality turns into a romantic legend. It reminds me of Don Quixote, a fool who challenges windmills, a madman who challenges reality. Even if it is regarded as stupid by the world, Even if no one understands it, the romance and justice of knights are still our standards. Wish not to forget the original intention

When I had nothing to do, I opened this book and read fifty chapters. Comments and book reviews said what the book was satirizing. This book is not a satirical literature, and the writing technique is not skilled enough. I can only say that the writing is smooth, but there is no big frame, small frame, foreshadowing, or echo. Either the author is lazy, or the author is an amateur writer. This book is basically similar to the writing style and creative ideas of Ruo Xinghan Xingkong. Unfortunately, the writing style is not as good as the second time, but as a novel for passing time, it is considered thoughtful. It is not necessary to travel back and forth. It is actually better to start the book with the natives and then narrate it slowly. It is much more reasonable to slowly learn about a fantasy world from an indigenous perspective than it is for a sudden traveler to understand the author's imaginary world in a few days. The overall evaluation is still Liangcao. Maybe teenage children will like this tone and think this book is a satirical novel. But in essence, this book just fictionalizes a utopian world, and the narrative lacks an outline, small structure, etc. The author did not take the time to build the world and plot in his imagination in advance. A pretty good fantasy world only has a big conflict at the beginning but no climax, which is very boring. It is recommended that the author try to build a small structure in the story, and then move on to the beginning, foreshadowing, conflict, and climax. Magic Forbidden, Spring Mono, Goblin Slayer, I guess I have read these single-volume light novels based on the author's writing style. I can randomly pick out a volume and see how the authors of these island countries deal with small frameworks. I can practice using similar structures in my own novels. Once you get used to them, you will definitely be able to apply them to the next time. The author's writing style and imagination are just okay, but his ideas are too confusing, he lacks the spirit of a bastard, and he can't write with a sense of immersion. If the author's conception and writing skills reach a certain level, he can try the complex structure of overlord. The big frame invades the world, the small climax involves the intrigues between the guardians and the natives, and various unexpected and reasonable foreshadowings and recycling. Overlord has a volume of 300,000 words and a maximum of 800,000 words. It is very suitable as a structural reference for online novels and is very suitable for practicing the structure of online novels. Overcome my weaknesses and write good novels, so that I can get rid of my book drought, please.

This book gave me the feeling not only of Don Quixote, but also of Monk Daoji. It has been a mess for sixty years, from east wall to west wall. Now that I have returned from cleaning up, the water and the sky are still blue.

I seriously feel that the author's book has begun to form a style, and maybe he should stop and think carefully about whether to invest more energy in creation. Otherwise, the effort will not be proportional to the gain, which would be a pity. There is such a good prototype, so it would be a pity not to give it a try.

Today, I suddenly thought about the Porcha Gold Hammer. I originally thought this part was very ridiculous and did not connect with reality. But today it was discovered that the so-called Porcha Gold Hammer is actually a reference to the diamond ring in reality. You can't get married without a diamond ring (gold hammer). Isn't this a reflection of reality? Since when did a diamond ring become a wedding necessity? Do diamond rings really represent love? This is nothing but brainwashing by the capitalists (the spiritual fathers of the land). It is very sad that even if a wise couple realizes this, they will only be ostracized and not understood by all the poor people in the world who are facing exploitation like them. This is the horror of capital consumerism and the tragedy of us.

The author writes well. It can be seen that the author wants to write a "chivalrous man". When the world blindly follows the so-called truth, remember that everything is false. No rules are true justice, and in such a society, vigilantes who violate the rules represent evil. But is this really evil?

They only focus on the trivial problems of various races, rather than paying attention to actual class oppression. Isn't this an allusion to the pluralistic theory of creation of the beautiful country to combat class theory?

This protagonist has no strength, no determination, no progress, no thinking, and like most books nowadays, they like to write about a silly person who complains. He is a bit tired of aesthetics, has no own characteristics, and is passively pushed into the plot. This is probably one of the reasons for the average performance of this book. I have also read books with similar plots and patterns, that is, he suddenly travels through time, suddenly gains power, and his identity is unknown, and then acts chivalrous and finally saves the world. But the plot of this book is really too passive. The protagonist lacks charm. He knows his own shortcomings but does not make up for them. He relies entirely on the armor. This kind of passive, silly and easily threatened protagonist really has the same aesthetic fatigue as before.

Well. . . Maybe it's because I don't have enough writing skills, and I want to write something a little different to attract people. As a result, the writing style was not enough, and the writing was chaotic and abrupt. . .

A very good novel, I really like the feeling of absurd literature, fairy tale opera and Don Quixote. Being a Don Quixote in this unromantic world, the world thinks I am crazy, but I insist on my romance and follow my justice. The parts I have seen so far are also good. Some chapters can be called fairy grass, and most of them are at the level of food. But the flaw is that the protagonist is led by others, and he can only hit people while wearing armor. Knights should dare to charge towards fate and wield their swords against the strong. But I think this should also be the part that the author left for the transition of the protagonist. I hope the author can arrange the growth of the protagonist, so that it will really be worthy of the masterpiece in my mind. Another thing is that the updates are really lacking. You make me feel that it is easy to become a eunuch. Hold on, Don Quixote rushes.

In an unromantic fantasy world, the most romantic heroism

A terrifyingly realistic background, an extremely romantic protagonist, and a fairy tale-like plot

It's a good novel, Xiancao. But readers should know that absurd satirical novels are bound to be biased and one-sided, and should not be taken seriously. Order and "corruption and privilege" are not directly proportional, and the latter will only be infinitely magnified in disorder. The only way to achieve order is to gradually reduce the uneven distribution of production means. This process cannot be accomplished overnight, nor can it be achieved once and for all.

I thought it was well written. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a lord entertainment story about the main character being a city lord trying to promote the peaceful coexistence of all races. If it wasn't for a book shortage, I wouldn't have clicked in to read it. As a result, after reading a few chapters, I found a pleasant surprise. It has a great plot, is also hilariously absurd, and also has depth. It has the flavor of using absurd and unreal novels to satirize reality. This book, so far, can be said to be a good book. Come on, author! !

I think the writing is very good and the ideas are very clear. Don't be too annoyed by the routines now. I hope I can work harder on my writing. I will always support it 😁

I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to kill someone. He killed the dragon. Although I know he didn't mean it, it's still hard to let go. After reading more than two hundred chapters, I have always thought that the protagonist is the kind of clean young man who is praised by the world without persuasion, criticized by the world without being discouraged, and who can distinguish between internal and external matters and the realm of honor and disgrace. Until he killed the dragon, although he just missed it, he may not have had the dirty desire to prove his strength by slaying the dragon to satisfy his vanity. Just because the word dragon represents power, he abandoned his ethics and cultivation and became a weakling who needed to defeat others to prove himself. He is never clean anymore! He is no longer the protagonist I expected. After reading more than ten chapters, I found that I couldn't read it anymore. Hey, maybe he was affected by the wolf spirit's violent law.

This book was previously titled "The Author and I Live Longer", "In My Lifetime",

I took a nap at noon and dreamed that the author had updated more than a hundred chapters. I clicked on it and read it for a long time, but I always felt that something was wrong. Why didn't I read anything? After looking at the chapter number, I was confused and confused. Suddenly the memory of reality was recalled, and I suddenly realized: "I am actually dreaming, Gan!" Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

This is a good novel, really great. It is a ridiculous ukiyo-e that laughs and curses, with ghosts and monsters under the flashy splendor. Rather than putting this at the starting point, I think it should appear on the display cabinet of the bookstore.

The author continues to update, don't stop, I'm going to get the best! !

I would trade my twenty years of singleness for stable updates from the author

Give me a reward, and then I want to say a few words I just saw the end of the flying dragon part. What do you say... Actually, if the protagonist is smarter, nothing will happen. Be brave enough to do justice? What does it mean to act bravely? I just saw a bitch being unhappy and slapped her. What? Is she attacking someone else? That was just a coincidence (funny)

What a great article, it smells a bit like the fairy grass from the bard next door.

I gave a reward of 100 points. Although it is not much, it is still a small token of my appreciation. The last sentence is: The author does not want eunuchs!

What is this main line? It was so boring to watch, and I didn't do much after that. It was just water anyway.

I really like this book, it's so lighthearted and humorous that I can't put it down

Author, where are you? Where is my new book?