Blazing Through Another World

Honestly, you should really work on your writing style. It's getting better and better later on, isn't it? I've given you all my monthly tickets and recommendation votes, hoping you'll write well. I usually don't vote for these things. If this book doesn't do well, the next one might not. This is your profession now, so be dedicated. Things will get better.

The biggest problem with this author is that he talks too much nonsense, which is annoying to read.

I've ordered everything, and I'd like to join the group. Is that too much to ask?

This book is great, keep it up! It's just that the skill descriptions are a bit lacking, so it feels a bit padded. Maybe you could just focus on new skills, maybe even dedicate a separate chapter to that. The main thing is to make the plot exciting; that's the book's highlight. Here's my monthly pass, and I'll give you 7 recommendation votes! And I'll definitely feature it! Keep up the good work, author! ^0^ Good books need recommendations, and authors need to constantly solicit votes. 😜

Could the author add another chapter for you? Two chapters a day aren't enough!

The opening is too disorganized, half game and half irrelevant introduction. Why not just stick to the basics of being transported into a game? Instead, there's a whole bunch of rambling background information. What does building a server on the moon, inserting a tube into the back of the head for intracranial imaging, have to do with being transported into a game?

Are you going to become a eunuch? 🙂

I just read a bit, and the logic seems a bit off. Earlier, it said they weren't involved in cause and effect, and were just killing ghosts and monsters. So why did they suddenly save a mother and daughter ghost? And why didn't they enter that place—entering it meant certain death—but instead went in just for a pair of ghosts, and even took them to their own home? There are too many contradictions.

To summarize, this book is basically like this: one chapter, a broadsword is slashing down on the heads of Japanese soldiers; the next chapter, the slashing continues; the next chapter, after slashing, they're on their way; the next chapter, a broadsword is slashing down on the heads of Japanese soldiers again—an endless loop... The End

I couldn't stand watching the rescue of the monster anymore. A race war, it's either you die or I die, is this a joke?