This Time, I'm Going to Be a Star

I read two chapters, but I couldn't continue because I wasn't interested. However, I forced myself to read 17 chapters and would like to offer some thoughts. ①Your opening reminded me of the owner of "The Silent Shop", but obviously Wenming didn't leave such a good impression on me. ② There are many typos and grammatical errors.

What do the numbers in parentheses mean?

Thank you so much for the votes! ❤️

That's ridiculous. 16 Years old, participating in a talent show? Are you kidding me?

1500, A superfluous act

Avid readers probably wouldn't be able to finish it.

If the author can't write romance, don't force it. The dialogue is too awkward. Is the female lead Liu Feifei really Liu Yifei? She wouldn't be so free to be in America every day dating you. Besides, Liu Yifei is a typical Beijing girl; her personality is different from what you've written. Also, around this time, Liu Yifei and Yi Jianlian should be dating or have feelings for each other.

I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye everyone. Maybe it's just my own fault. Take your time reading it. If you can't write the emotions well, don't force it.

You didn't understand this "rebirth and system" part.

Right now I'm broke, so all I can do for you is add this to my favorites... I'll invest in you when I have a spot!