NBA: Inside Legend

I just feel that forcibly promoting Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) is a bit toxic. TCM is our essence, and I've always thought it's incredibly effective in treating ailments. But how could a complete Achilles tendon rupture, a physical injury, possibly be fully recovered with just TCM? It's better to use a cheat program. Personally, I think any pure Asian player who doesn't use cheats and dominates the NBA is just being a jerk.

What's so interesting about writing about a summer league? Updates are already infrequent, and if the pace gets even slower, it's really unbearable to read.

A ruptured Achilles tendon treated with ancient Chinese remedies? That's incredible! Anyone with even a basic understanding of medicine would find that unbelievable. It would be better not to write about it at all.

Still writing about the NBA? It's probably not far from being finished. Start planning ahead.

The main problem is that this book is written too softly. Sun, as the protagonist, has no independent thought whatsoever; he listens to his agent in everything. You might as well just let your agent do the beating! Most online novels these days are written for instant gratification, like fast food, not the kind of "meal package" style you're writing, my friend.

AD was originally in New Orleans, so when did they go to Charlotte? I don't understand.

I'm truly impressed by your pace. You're really good at writing fluff.

Believe me, basketball-themed articles about inside players have no future, unless they're just for fun.

The main character paired with Giannis Antetokounmpo feels a bit like the Shaq-Kobe duo in their first championship run. Giannis' shooting is inconsistent, relying mainly on drives. Add a low-post anchor and three utility players, and paired with Paul George or Kawhi Leonard, it's more like the Shaq-Kobe duo in their later years.

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