Water God in Naruto

Give the dialogue a break, the phrasing is a bit messy.

To be honest, your article is suitable for posting in the second dimension, where the traffic is much greater than that of fantasy. "" But the title of your book has its own traffic. "" I will give you a 6 out of 10. I personally feel that you are on the edge of the standard for fantasy signings. The plot of the story is described, but it fails to arouse emotions and is a bit stiff. There may be improvements later on, but because there is no substitution in the front, the rest is just a jump. """ Too many characters appear too quickly. For some people like me who have never watched Naruto and who don't know much about Naruto, the people who appear are all flesh-and-blood people. A few years ago, I also looked for some Naruto fanfics to read. Most of the supporting characters in it are distinguishable, and the images of several main characters are even more distinct. Although I don't know. The stories that happened to them, but I can feel the image of this character from the plot in the book. Of course, this last point varies from person to person. Maybe those who have watched Naruto like it very much, and it only represents the position of some people. "The above is just my opinion as a reader and represents my personal position only. I originally had some suggestions, but I won't go into them here.

After soliciting suggestions from book friends, Xianyu slightly revised the previous chapters. In the future, the protagonist will only use pure water escape, and there will be no plots such as ice escape!

Let me explain, in fact, the author likes the character Namikaze Minato very much, so he plans to bring him to life later, so that he will not die in the Nine-Tails Rebellion! (Maybe I won't be able to follow the original work later, sorry!)

Thank you everyone for your recommendation votes. Although there are not many at the moment, Xianyu will continue to vote (amusing myself╰|･ิД･ิ | Pretty boy passing by)

Big brother, the water god is the water god, don't let the whole ice escape

I really don't like this kind of extra dog protagonist

Author, speaking without punctuation is like watching a silent movie. The world is quiet, but you can't see it.

The secret of wind is not only cutting but also atmosphere (such as wind electricity, air cannon, vacuum chop, shock wave, vacuum suffocation, these are the essence of wind). The protagonist can understand the world of natural masters, use natural energy and martial arts theory, and create his own magical combat methods such as the Wind God Armor, Wind God Legs, Four Symbols of Heaven's Will, Shadow Clone, Dragon Riding Slash, and Famous Sword. Eight postures, Lion's Roar, Six Meridians Divine Sword, Innate Phaseless Pointing Sword, Cloud Dispelling Palm, Tianshuang Fist, Three-point Return to Origin, Body-Breaking Invisible Sword Qi, Forgetting Heavenly Book, Heaven and Earth Hegemony Fist, Huntian Baojian, Six Divine Techniques, Tiancan Divine Art , Seven Spin Slash, Tathagata Divine Palm, Innate Qiankun Gong, Great Shift of Qiankun, Immortal Seal, Nine-Character Mantra Mudra, Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Sect, Yuantian Sword Technique, Demon Sword, Aohan Six Techniques, Bodhi Demonstration Magic Technique, Tianwai Chapter of Xiaoyao, Innate Qi, Shifting Stars, Capturing the Dragon, Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms/Legs, Dragon-Subduing Divine Legs, Dragon Claw Hands, Destroying Divine Claws, Supreme Great Luotian, Dragon-Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, Ghost Prison Wind Roar, Great Storm Cloud Hands , Maha Infinite, Absorption Dafa, Kaiowen Fist, Qi Circle Slash, Turtle Style Qigong, Qigong Bomb, Qigong Cannon, Mount Lushan Dragon Overlord, Galaxy Star Explosion, Holy Sword, Heaven and Earth Obediently Leave the Sky and Split the Earth, Wind King Barrier, Yu Sword Flying, Xuanyuan Sui Taixu, Kongming Illusionary Sword, Heavenly Sword, Thousand Directions Residual Light Sword, Heaven and Earth Yuanling Slash, Crescent Moon Chong, Lightning Light Speed Fist, Pegasus Meteor Fist, Nebula Storm, Stardust Rotation Skill, Crystal Wall , Twelve Levels of Golden Bell Cover, King of the World Yi Jin Jing, Seven Heavens of Demonic Light, Supreme Great Luotian, Seven Limits of Swallowing Heaven and Destroying Earth, God-Destroying Finger of Heavenly Emperor, Zhenwu Dang Demon Hunyuan Tiandao Sword, Covering Rain Sword Technique, Huangtian Dafa , Divine Sword Cut, Xiao Li Flying Sword, Divine Sword Technique, Dragon Magic, Divine Fist Way, Yuan Dou Quan, Sea Tiger Explosive Fist, Magnetic Field Rotation, Electric Current Propulsion, Killing Whales, God of War from Hell, Nine Heavens Sutra, Tai Chi Thunderbolt.

I can't stand it. I really can't stand it. It's not just about the plot. This author is so stupid with punctuation. I can't stand it anymore. I'll never see it again! ! ! ! ! ! !

There are also the names of pig's feet, one is Qianchuan, the other is Qianjing, and the other is Qianmeng.

The Oni Deng clan will soon be able to turn into water and not be afraid of being handed over by Konoha.

After reading two chapters, I realized that this is a diary.

Wasn't it supposed to be the God of Thunder who was struck by lightning? ! 🤫

I suggest you revise the first chapter. I don't understand why the quotation marks in the first chapter are so confusing.

Follow more, it's not enough 😭😭😭

If you can control the moisture in the air, you can directly choke people to death. If you can control the water in the human body, you can also turn people into mummies instantly. Killing people would not be too easy.

Author, why is the first chapter so confusing? One moment it's in first person, the next it's in third person. Can't you even use quotation marks? Your narrative is worse than the running account I wrote.

Does the author's avatar look like a group?

Seeing that the author is a waste of names, I helped him build a character building. You are welcome to add it.