Harry Potter and the Attack of the Squibs

Finally finished reading it, the advantages: novel character design, very thoughtful story setting, Squib carrying the guardian inheritance, physical persuasion; this is the motivation that supports me to watch it now. Disadvantages: First, the logic is too poor and there are too many inconsistencies. In order to reflect the turning point of the story, how many logical flaws are there? The author himself assumes that the protagonist has not read the last three parts of the novel, and then eats the book. There are countless such contents. Secondly, the original characters, namely the male and female protagonists, are well-shaped and full-bodied, but there are too many inconsistencies in the personalities and behaviors of several other main characters in the original works, and they are forcibly reduced to intelligence. At any rate, Ron is still in the process of personality transformation. What about the others? Malfoy, Snape, Harry, and even Voldemort, these characters have inconsistent personalities, but there is no correct and acceptable reason for the change. Third, the description of love is dry and tasteless, as if it was forced together for the sake of a CP. Fourth, I don't know which version of the book or movie the author is reading. What the hell are Angrys and Avada Kadava? Forced to make up the word count? Author, please make sure the positioning of your book is a serious, dark adult story, not a children's book. Using this word once in a while is too cute, but if you use it too much, you won't even know what you are writing. I've looked at the score of this book and it's not very good, but it's not easy for the author to persevere until the book is almost finished. Please work hard, I hope the next book will be better.

Why didn't you understand emmm that the protagonist knew he was a squib from the beginning?

I feel like some of the logic doesn't make sense, and it's a bit forced to piece together the relationship between the protagonist and the Weasley twins. For example, the twins have clearly solidified their ideas, made it clear that they hate the protagonist, and keep teasing the protagonist, but the protagonist shamelessly asks them for help, and the protagonist of the Marauder's Map knows where he is, and Felchi also said that the things he has there can be used as payment. What is the use of the twins' forced appearance at this time? It looks a little bit unpleasant...

Just after reading the last chapter, Qidian suddenly reminded me that the book was missing, which shocked me! Then I found this book again, and I can only say that Qidian is getting better and better, and I am almost dying.

Not bad. Not to mention some delays in writing and plot. Some of the protagonist's thoughts in Hogwarts and the school's inheritance are well written. No Black Snake Court, no Black Lion Court, both Lao Deng and the professor have pretty good personalities. In other words, the interaction between these professors was accidentally written very well. Although the protagonist is a squib, as a good student in the eyes of the professors, everyone treats him gently. You can watch it if you endure a few poisonous points. Overall, this is a fairy tale in which a squib understands the magical world and goes to Hogwarts in his own way. Judging from the progress I've seen so far, the protagonist has a gentle personality, and I can feel the author's gentleness. Almost none of the characters in the original plot are bad. It's really written as an adventure every year, and it all ends happily. It's just that the plot in the middle is a bit forced. But I suggest you read it yourself. Don't be swayed by other comments. No matter good or bad, at least read the development of the first year and then decide for yourself whether to abandon the book. Although the plot setting at the end of the first year is a bit confusing, it can be regarded as a summary of the protagonist's adventure in the first year. The second year of the Philosopher's Stone section. My favorite is the "Friends" plot. You can feel a different kind of warmth. I am currently studying in my third year. I hope there won't be such a deliberate way of mentioning the plot of the first two volumes. Finally, I don't know the word "sigh" anymore. Although panelization is a common problem among many authors, it is possible to change it.

I came in out of curiosity when I saw the introduction about the fear of being dominated by physics. Because I really don't understand that even if you can build an atomic bomb, a transformation spell will take care of you before launching it, so what's the use of being good at physics. Don't tell me that it's because you have to learn physics knowledge and it's the fear of being dominated by the physics exam.

The early stages were pretty good. From the time William entered Hogwarts, the protagonist's IQ plummeted and he was manipulated by the heroine. He has become a pure, incompetent, mediocre good person... His stomach hurts just looking at him. A family story

Harry Potter should write about magic well. The Squib will be discriminated against by the entire academy if he is still a wizard. It is reasonable, according to Harry Potter's world view.

About the Courses Required courses such as Charms, Transfiguration, Quidditch, and Defense Against the Dark Arts cannot be taken. In a sense, Squibs are more miserable than wizards from Muggle families. If you are looking for a better way out, learn how to use magic props and raise and cultivate magical creatures. You may be able to gain a foothold in the magical world and join the Ministry of Magic's Department for the Protection of Magical Creatures. As for the fact that Squib will not be discriminated against by students and teachers at Hogwarts, the main reason is that Dumbledore is behind him. At least the little Slytherin wizards couldn't have a good impression of the Squib. If it weren't for the protagonist's decades of experience in his previous life and the honed psychological quality, it would be hard to imagine how desperate and collapsed the 11-year-old Squib would be after entering Hogwarts and being the only one unable to learn or use magic. This is like a student who can never learn English and is forced to graduate from a school that teaches all in English. It is incredibly difficult. So in the original book, the wizard family sends Squibs to ordinary families and Hogwarts never admits Squibs. It seems very cruel, but in fact it is much better to let ordinary people live with a group of flying wizards with great magical powers. In the end, because of inferiority and unwillingness, they make psychological distortions and do some irrational actions, and are eventually executed. Never overestimate human will. There is hatred against the rich in school, and there is jealousy due to grades and internships. Not to mention that after entering society, it is even more common to engage in a series of overt and covert struggles due to reasons such as position, salary, year-end bonus, leader's appreciation, family situation, etc. The subject matter of this book is very novel and interesting. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist not only did not feel ashamed of his status as a squib and worked harder, but instead publicized it and was proud of it. Because of the aura of the protagonist, he received all kinds of help from the professors at the college, and everything went smoothly, which was a bit unreal. Although I believe that the protagonist, as a squib, will achieve something successful in the end, the process will definitely be tortuous and arduous, and it will come with joy.

When you read a fan, you just have to look at the plot and the power system. You perfectly avoided these two points. The writing is so good, it's a pity.

After reading the Philosopher's Stone chapter, I only have one feeling! What a trap! Very pitiful! As a squib, the protagonist does not study potions and alchemy to create things that can be used by squibs. Instead, he keeps getting involved in various events. The improvement in strength is physical, and the author devalues ​​magical power to increase physical strength. As a squib, the protagonist is positioned as an auxiliary but does the work of a warrior. The book describes that the protagonist's speed is comparable to the sonic boom caused by lightning. You must know that speed equals power, but the protagonist just knocks out everyone every time, not even a single one is accidentally killed.

After reading the Philosopher's Stone volume, I have many doubts. What exactly is the protagonist going to do? Suddenly came into this world, and I had to protect Hogwarts in a daze, but there seemed to be no reason to work hard? It seems like defeating Voldemort for the sake of defeating Voldemort. What to do after defeating him? Be a principal for another 100 years? Or let wizards and Muggles merge? Or study magic? Seeing now, I also flipped through the catalog. Is this a tool-man protagonist? Is it a tool to protect Hogwarts? Is it a tool to defeat Voldemort? Is she Harry Potter's nanny? I am really confused, what kind of story are you planning to write?

The characters are so contradictory. One moment they are a rational scientist, and the other they are coaxing children to play house. I can't understand it.

You can tell at a glance that the protagonist is not a squib. But what I want to ridicule is the term aristocrat. . . There are no aristocrats in Harry Potter, only pure-blood families, mixed-blood families and Muggle families. To be more detailed, there are twenty-eight holy families in the UK, but there is never any term for aristocrats. Aristocrats are what many early-starting and careless fan fictions like to write.

Now that Hogwarts has started, a very important element is missing so far. Scores Additional and subtractive points for the College Cup are not just in class. Students can gain extra points if their moral, intellectual, physical, artistic, and physical development is recognized by the teacher. Even like the teacher in the slut defense class in the second part, you get extra points for flattering him. And as a teacher, it's a bit unreasonable not to know the new students. The sorting ceremony was so exciting that a squib entered Slygreen. When there were only dozens of freshmen admitted in each semester of the year, there was no need to ask Luger's name. Because it will definitely be remembered during the sorting ceremony. The total number of wizards in the UK is only a few hundred, and the number of freshmen at Hogwarts in one semester is even pitiful.

I just read a few chapters, and it's about cooking Chinese food. Very few foreigners like to eat authentic Chinese food. Don't look at some foreigners on Douyin. One hundred percent of Americans eat the castrated version, which is in line with American tastes. Many people who are married to foreigners can't eat it.

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Voldemort meets the protagonist, possesses him, and ends

Come on, the old man from the East once said: There is one more thing!

The more I write, the more confusing it gets. Starting from when Johanna became the principal, I couldn't hold on to Chapter 54 of the Secret Room. The first thing I said was that Pigfoot had watched the first three movies and had some understanding of the following ones. As a result, Pigfoot knew the plot and didn't know the plot, and acted like a native again. All kinds of contradictions.

Sigh, sigh appeared at least five or six times in each chapter, and I almost fainted. .

Why did the author write Malfoy as a licking dog (although it was very enjoyable to watch) 😃

It's finished The early stage was good, but the later stage was a bit uncomfortable Come on, author, it's not easy to finish.

A white tomorrow is waiting for us

It's a bit strange. When I read this book, it was so peaceful It gave me a feeling of the time of the sage.

I don't understand the reason why Hermione deliberately hates the protagonist...

Who can tell me in which chapter the relationship between Lu Ke and Johanna started?

I just read this book and it gives me a very peaceful feeling... Is it an illusion?

After reading the first few chapters, there was no background introduction, which made me confused.

What grade are Harry and his friends in now?