Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Sword in the Painting

I can accept that the protagonist rebels, and I can also accept that the heroine has her own actions instead of being a vase. But I cannot accept that the male protagonist is led by a stereotyped independent woman. The male protagonist is not only a lifesaver to the female protagonist, but at least he is a reborn parent. The female protagonist accepts the male protagonist's benefits calmly, but never thinks about the male protagonist's situation and acts recklessly. Isn't this just a virgin bitch and a licking dog? Having said that, it is fate to meet each other, and I wish the author's book will become a big hit. Goodbye.

Not counting Shen Nong, it is a dog-licking protagonist and a cold heroine. This heroine is determined to rely only on herself, and then she is content to suck the blood of the protagonist throughout the whole process just to realize her inner ambition. Maybe everyone has their own preferences and some will like it. I won't waste my time.

People who have just started cultivating go to fight against the Lord God, and I am also drunk!

Who stipulates that gods should protect the people? It is normal for gods to eat people. They like the dark wind. The savior is tired of it.

It's pretty, but it's not "natural"

The more I look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. You, a mortal, are making trouble for a god... I'm tired of living.

Give the protagonist a genetic engine of the light of the sun, and he will never be afraid of insufficient energy. Lena brand power bank!

When the sun and moon move, the yin energy is insufficient and the yang energy is surplus. The excess yang is motion, and the number of motion is five. Therefore, the five pure white points in the middle of the River Diagram of the Wordless Heavenly Book are the source of the eternal energy of the heaven and earth. The five yang qi are the hub of the movement of the heaven and the earth. Therefore, five is the number of life of the earth. In the human body, it is the five internal organs. The five internal organs are harmonized. In fact, there are only three essences, Qi, and Shen. It's just a medicine. The three flavors are all the production and transformation of Qi. They are collectively called the number of Qi. The number of Qi is the outline of the transformation and birth of all things. Therefore, the ancients adopted the method of placing leaps in the lunar calendar. The leap is moist, which is a symbol of the source of endless energy. There is a small leap every three years and a big leap every five years. Therefore, all things bear Yin and embrace Yang, and the Qi number is regarded as vitality! Ancient cultivators finally cultivated the idea of ​​three flowers gathering at the top and five qi heading towards the yuan. From this point of view, the number of three and five qi should be the mechanism of creation, the source of life, and the principle of nature! What do you think?

You are nosy but don't dare to kill anyone, Hahaha!

The author still has advantages. For example, um, his hair is darker.

You are a martial artist, not a fairy. It's a hodgepodge based on Gu Long's writing style and mixed with some miscellaneous things.

It's well written, but not very interesting. I want to see the training and upgrading.

During the great flood, so many people were at the end of their lifespan and their lives should not be cut off. Is it so easy to change their lives against the will of God? Author, you are taking the rules of heaven as farts

The story line is pretty good and the writing is good, but it's always a bit stiff when it reaches the turning point. Let's work harder after starting, turning, and closing. The characters can barely be said to be "live", but not "fresh". The characters are too heavy and lack some real-life details. I quite like this road. The overall design is a bit like the earlier Zhiguai legendary fairy novels, and also borrows a bit of the settings of the current immortality novels. On the contrary, the writing method is more like that of the immortality style. And it's good that the scholar is not a bitch, nor is he a trash person who gets interested in sex.

The main character knows all the exercises, so why should he copy them down and leave them to others?

You can't change your name and always be close to Yan Chixia. . .

What a bad name, Zhang Guan Li Dai

It's very general, let's talk about a plot around chapter 20. When Eunuch Cao visited the Wenhui, the Jinyiwei beat the female weaver, stopped the guests at the door, and then beat the female worker. They used innocent people to sell evil to show their loyalty. This kind of trick has really low IQ, and the protagonist called the weaving shop a vicious dog, and then said that the weaving workshop belongs to the royal family.

How is this book? Does it have Shen Nong?

But don't get involved in politics. Why did I see history →_→

It always starts with the name of the main character, which is not very friendly to me. I feel upset and nauseous after hearing it too much.

You said you can just add Yanshanyue when linking. It's so annoying when you have something to do with Yanshanyue. I feel that the author doesn't use you and me at all, only Yanshanyue.

It feels like the world cannot change without the protagonist

No wonder no one is watching.

Unexpectedly, after reading the book to the end, it was still a good fairy tale in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, it gradually became a bit like martial arts and history. Moreover, it is the female protagonist who drives the development of the plot, and the male protagonist feels like a fire brigade. Overall, it's good. I hope the author's next book will have better results.

The author who is working hard to make money has written ten books, which is not easy.