Going with the Immortal

I really don't understand something about this book. The first three golden chapters are not trying to attract readers. Instead, the first dozen chapters are all about routines, routines, routines, and then in a world with yin and yang theory, you said in the first chapter that Tai Chi is just a white circle, which is a bit confusing.

The first time I read Chapter 8, I read it again. This time I read Chapter 18, but I haven't even entered the topic yet 😰

One thing to say, why is there such a long preface? When I read Chapter 40, the protagonist still looks like a fool...

Personal opinion. Your two books have a common flaw. The protagonist has too many adventures. The baby came too soon. It feels unreal! Every time a bunch of pets come, it doesn't matter whether it's useful or not! It's not uncommon for a protagonist to get as much explanation as possible!

I don't know why, it's good to open a hospital to practice cultivation in the mortal world, but once everything transitions to the world of cultivation, it's boring and the same big cultivation. I like cultivation novels like "Nanshan Hidden". The whole article is full of pretentiousness, slaps in the face, and various upgrades and boosts. I am tired of aesthetics. Shouldn't cultivation of cultivation be a carefree and pastoral place without any worries about the world?

This is the road to becoming a god in one book! Don't collapse!

This book must be cool! No one reads it, and there are no monthly votes or recommendation votes. The author can persist alone!

To be honest, after reading about 10 or 20 chapters, I felt like I was reading a historical novel, and I didn't get the feeling of a fairy tale at all, em. . . No evaluation

It was only after reading Chapter 63 that I felt like cultivating immortality. No wonder your grades are not good.

Currently, I have read Chapter 99 of Shenduan Canyon. The best part is the beginning. The first two volumes are quite good before entering Danzong. I originally read it because my book friends commented on the fairy novel "Having a Child" 😁. As it turned out, it became more and more sloppy and the characters became worse and worse. As for Master Sun, Fatty, his writing is pretty good. I really can't hold on anymore.

Recommended daily 😁

I feel that after the protagonist enters the sect, it becomes an ordinary routine and cool novel, which is a pity.

The middle and early stages are pretty good. Once you enter the alchemy path, you will feel like you have a lot of adventures.

A very good novel about cultivating immortals! There aren't that many tricks! The protagonist is not impulsive either! It looks very comfortable! It would be more comfortable if the protagonist was more stubborn, or used some deceitful tricks on the enemy! 😁😁

Not as good as the beginning

It is a book written by ordinary people that is in line with the facts and has no obvious loopholes. Fine. The old bookworm in me really likes it. The author should do more advertising for his next book.

What does the title of the book mean? On the road to immortality? Tu means journey, and immortal means journey?

Is there some content at the beginning that has been harmonized? I read Chapter 10, and the preface does not match the subtitles. Many scenes have no logic at all. It is not a problem with the plot or writing, but the context is completely inconsistent, and I can't understand what is being said.

Immortal cultivation type? When it comes to eating and cooking, do you write about Urban God of Cooking?

I came here for Leifa is the King, I just started watching it, but it's really good

I feel like the author doesn't know what he's writing at the end of the article. I saw that the second fire lion was obviously hatched for the junior sister, but when it hatched later, it was said that the protagonist had dripped his own blood, and everything was messed up.

I read half of it in one go, and the first quarter was so good that I couldn't stop. I got a little tired of looking at the later part, so I stopped for now and picked it up again after a while. Thank you very much to the author.

Gou is right, but it would be too much to throw away most of the magical weapons, techniques, etc. That you get every time. If you have good techniques and don't learn and use good magical weapons, why don't you regret it when you can't defeat others? . . You can also hide the unused magic weapons and sell them later.

Can the author mention (open his mouth)?

Come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! !

What are you writing about recently? A lot of information to fill in?

I was killed not long after the new book came out. Was it because I had a problem with my three views?

Xianxiawen has a baby, don't be upset

Come on, author, it's true.

This protagonist is just being stubborn, he just takes himself too seriously.