Hogwarts: the Magical Principles of Natural Philosophy

It feels like the author hasn't even read the original work. There are too many weird mistakes. Readers should forget about it if they don't read it. Fan authors should at least read the original work.

The author has a great brain. From the very beginning, the protagonist gains memories. This article is different from others. What you need to understand is that the protagonist is not a reborn person who has lived a lifetime, but a child who has gained the memories of others. This is great because it can explain many of the protagonist's irrational behaviors. To be honest, I was a little irritated when I saw the protagonist contacting Hermione again. I thought it was another routine of talking about not participating in the threesome and then becoming a nanny in the end. However, I saw that the protagonist really did not participate. It was awesome (Seal applauded). The suspicion of dimensions is another highlight. Whether it is the early suspicion of manipulation or the great prophecy explained by the principal now, it can explain many of the protagonist's unreasonable behaviors and pave the way for the future. I was a little regretful when I saw it explained as a great prophecy. After all, dimension manipulation sounds better, but thinking about the problem of being unable to explain the memory (the fusion of the two is mentioned), I think there should be foreshadowing later. As a fan work, it is great to ensure that the characters are not obviously OOC and have a reasonable second design. The author has greatly supplemented and expanded the world view, especially the original dragon, which really surprised me. Now I think the writing style is great. I hope I can master the world you wrote. Don't write it down. The most important thing is don't make mistakes! ! !

It feels not as good as "The Way of Reason".

I think the truth that the protagonist should explore the most is: If the wizarding world was powerful enough, with the arrogant character of those wizards, they would never be willing to hide like mice. Based on reality, it can only be said that wizards are a vulnerable group in this world. I was even scared to the point where I tried my best to hide it. I think the protagonist can use the power of his family and the information he possesses to explore what kind of existence makes the wizarding world so afraid. This must be a power more powerful than magic, perhaps through which the world can be mastered.

The Ministry of Magic cannot leave little wizards alone, even the children of high-ranking officials. Not learning to burst out magic at will will only exacerbate your exposure to the magical world. . . Moreover, if the little wizard cannot control his magic power, he may become an Obscurus, and the Ministry of Magic cannot take this risk.

Turning into a dragon is a bit shocking to me Let's see how it's dealt with later. I hope it doesn't turn into a poisonous one.

I have just read about 20 chapters, and it was amazing at the beginning. However, the quality began to decline after entering school. It seemed to have cast a magic spell on many people, including the protagonist. The protagonist suddenly changed from a mature philosopher at the beginning to a proud child. For some inexplicable reasons, he exposed his talent wantonly, wasted his money and time, and lowered the tone of the book. Have you read the book friends at the back? What's the follow-up here?

The beginning is really exciting, but it's just the beginning.

The female vampire is really poisonous. As a dependent who forcibly kisses her master, the protagonist has no choice but to let her do whatever she wants.         ，，         ，，，？ !

I feel like there is a big problem in books now, that is, the protagonist has been strengthened to the extreme. Even if the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist's strength and turned him from a dragon into a human, the protagonist's current strength is inferior to that of one person and superior to that of ten thousand people. Coupled with the intellectual legacy of Quasimodo and Nicolas Flamel, there is nothing that can be called contradictory and difficult for the protagonist to stay in Hogwarts now. It's the max-level boss in Novice Village. This is fatal for a web article, because without contradictions and difficulties, there would be no fun. The author should consider this issue carefully. Do you want to open a new map or something like that?

The beginning was great, but the article fell apart later on, which is a pity. I have basically finished reading the Hogwarts fanfic, and this one has become mediocre and cannot be upgraded to a high-quality book.

Personally, I feel that the book after Transforming into a Dragon is not as good as before. I guess many book lovers gave up on the book after Transforming into a Dragon.

It feels like my IQ dropped sharply after I turned into a dragon and was caught.

Suddenly I thought of a bug. The protagonist's personal bodyguard was not a dead soldier trained by the family, and he was rented. This is too ridiculous. With such an important position as personal bodyguard, why are you so confident about bringing an outsider with you?

After reading more than 60 chapters, overall it is more good than bad. Let's talk about the one difference first. Currently, it gives me three strong feelings of fragmentation, which are inexplicable changes in the characters. Before entering school: The protagonist who is rational, cautious, well-organized, and has a high IQ makes me a little bit hopeful that he can bring a different spark to this poorly written magical world. After admission: IQ -1, recklessness +1, the protagonist gradually loses his mind. A question mark on his face After transforming into a dragon, he then changes back: IQ continues to be -1, arrogance and recklessness continues to be +1, and dementia operations gradually increase. Although the author tried his best to be fair, it was in stark contrast to his calmness and caution before entering school. In fact, the reason for this sense of fragmentation is very simple: poor information. The protagonist in the author's works always makes imprudent operations when the information is unknown, causing conflicts with the previous characters. Let's talk about the good points. 1. In terms of writing style, it is not like some HP fans who use a lot of original descriptions, adjust some details locally, and add a little of their own ideas. It has its own main line, and the original work mostly touches on it in one or two strokes, which is pretty good. 2. At present, it seems that there are basically very few water injection and hydrological phenomena, and there are no inexplicable forced explanations. The whole plot is compact and smooth after all. 3. There is no forced modification or addition of scenes for the sake of the original plot. It has its own rhythm. That's it for now. However, what I personally feel is a pity is that maybe in order to make the plot advance faster, the subsequent plot should be more reasonable. After grafting back to the original bloodline, the protagonist's body is set to directly accelerate growth, which is a bit unnecessary. Is it possible that the long-lived species described by the author have longer development cycles than humans? We'll talk about the rest later.

A small suggestion, even Dumbledore cannot suppress the death of a student at Hogwarts. It can be seen that Myrtle's death even awakened the Ministry of Magic to investigate. Although the protagonist in this article comes from a Muggle family and has been missing for so long, it is impossible for Dumbledore to let Voldemort go with his strength and character. And with the obvious clues of two dragons, it is impossible to say that the protagonist did not expect to transform into a dragon. It depends on what the author wrote later.

I feel that this is the reason why the protagonist of scientific research is not so likable. Although strong scientific research ability can help the protagonist gain stronger strength faster, no matter how strong the protagonist is, there will always be an experiment that goes wrong. Although this will make the story more twists and turns, it is inexplicably unpleasant.

In this new chapter, people from other dimensions are too ridiculous. Is this some kind of foreshadowing? And there are definitely some people in the magic world who have explored turning into a dragon before, but ultimately failed. Now that the protagonist has only mastered the knowledge of the third and fourth grade, it is a bit unreasonable to discover the method of transforming into a dragon so easily. Of course, if it is foreshadowing, I will not say it.

Dragons are not rare animals in the HP world.

To be honest, it is equivalent to talking about ancient western fantasy novels...

It stopped in 22 years, but I didn't expect that it would be renewed in 23 years.