Mechanical Era: Holy War

As a fifth-grade primary school student, it is indeed not easy to write such a science fiction novel in my spare time. Please give it a thumbs up first! 👍 The text of the whole novel is quite good. You can read and accumulate it through reading by Mihara Kazuo. The storyline is generally acceptable. The description of the fighting scenes is more vivid and the imagination is stronger. These are strengths that should be maintained. The characterization needs to be improved, the characters' personalities are not distinct enough, and the memory of the characters is not strong enough after reading.       ，，!

It's okay, not that bad. I try not to laugh unless I can't help it.

During the Spring Festival holiday, I read the novel "Mechanical Era" by classmate "Mihara Yi" again. I started writing it in the fifth grade and completed it during the summer vacation of the sixth grade. The book has 39,000 words. The writing and imagination are pretty good, but the characterization and storyline need to be improved. I hope you continue to work hard! Looking forward to the follow-up works.