Extraordinary Elements

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The storyline is good, the characters are immersive, and the main plot is compact. Personally, I feel that the shortcomings are that the details are not handled carefully enough, and the jumps between plot transitions are slightly larger in some places. Time is limited, so I saw it here first, it has been added to the bookshelf, and I will continue to read it later!

I saved it for many days and finished reading it in one go. It was so cool 😁

The writing is pretty good, not boring, nor too stressful. However, the magic in this world seems to be relatively single, with not many varieties. I hope there can be more types and forms of magic. It would also be good to write about some secret arts or ancient magic. I will directly place a full order to show encouragement. I hope the author will write well 😁, come on

I think the picture of drawing a bow and shooting arrows, and then using magic is so beautiful. Shouldn't the author consider a career reform and become a fierce magic archer? In addition, I really didn't expect Benson, a sidekick, to die so soon. After all, he was a sidekick in the early stage. How could he follow him like a wild monster? Can't he give him more drama points? He only appeared twice and died? 🥵

The writing is very stable and the reading is smooth, but I don't know why it lacks a sense of hooking and hooking... I have collected the recommendation votes and hope the author can sign the book.

The author's book is quite good. But I always feel that there is a lack of an overall worldview before writing a book. The territory of a lord in a country is generally enfeoffed by the king. Generally speaking, families like the Bacon family will not be deprived of their territory even if they lose, and they will not kill their retainers even if they win. Instead, prisoners were exchanged for gold coins. Because otherwise, it would be easy for a dominant and powerful noble family to appear under the king's rule. This was not good for the king's rule. Even in the Spring and Autumn Period of our country, there were no such random territorial changes, and the surrounding lords would take action. What stands out is a morality, which is essentially a rule that organizes small lords to grow up, endanger themselves, and maintain their status and the so-called nobility. And if something like the Warring States Period occurs, the royal power declines to the extreme. Then it will appear. But the world of the protagonist is a world of high demons. Mages have top attack and defense power. Then, the decline of royal power requires the support of top experts from the great nobles. After all, if the royal family's resources are there, there must still be top experts. This has no basis in the text. The protagonist's IQ is good, and the supporting character's IQ is also understandable. After all, he is a country noble. So there aren't big problems in the early stages of the book. However, every time I get to the chapters about territorial disputes and aristocratic rule, I always feel a little naive.

The narrative is a bit bland, but it's okay, so don't be too lazy!!

The paper crane comes to visit, has been collected and will be followed slowly. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง