Yanyu Haoge

I have read three chapters for those who are not familiar with the book. First of all, I would like to thank the friend who recommended the book🌹🌹🌹 From the beginning, it is obvious that the author has put a lot of effort into the three golden chapters👍, especially in the atmosphere and characters. The protagonist encounters three changes at the beginning: his bodyguard Lao Wu dies, an army of 100,000 is defeated miserably, and his beloved grandfather Bing Li dies. The irony is that all this seems to have been created by the protagonist's father - but the author soon showed that the protagonist's father is a good father who loves his son, and his choices have his own reasons. In the second chapter, the scene switches to the heroine Bu Xiang. She even wants to become a monk because she cannot wait for the male protagonist. When she hears the news from the male protagonist, she immediately beams with joy. She kept talking about the hero's story to the maid Lian'er, but when she found out that the hero was not waiting to see her when he came back, she immediately coldly expressed her intention to leave. The image of the heroine Bu Xiang, who is passionate and dares to love and hate, immediately appeared on the page. Whether it is the central protagonist of the whole story or the less important Lian Er, each person's character is very distinctive and can be remembered at once. At the end of the third chapter, the male protagonist's father bid farewell to the male protagonist. It seems that he is leaving the Novice Village. The introduction of the background and characters is over, and the plot officially begins. The grandfather who loves his grandson has never appeared, the complicated relationship behind Prince Qing's palace, and how the protagonist will find an explanation for the 100,000-strong army. These are all very exciting. However, with such excellent descriptive ability, there is probably a reason for the mediocre performance of this book. The author seems to be deliberately trying to add a bit of classical flavor. The characters' dialogues are half-written and the sentences are not fluent, making it difficult to read. Moreover, the author seems to like to retain suspense, always using pronouns such as "young man" and "woman" many times, which sometimes makes people confused... (I personally think that for some characters, it is easier for people to remember the names directly.) Regarding the background of the world, it seems like a fantasy, but in the first three chapters, I don't have much feeling, and I can't figure out the direction of the main line. In addition, the author cut several scenes in the first three chapters and crammed in a lot of information. To be honest, this is not very friendly to fast-food readers... Of course, if the author does not want to spoil fast-food readers at all, please pretend that I have not said anything 🤐 Finally, I have added this book to my bookshelf and will read it slowly. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not give up easily. I wish this book will get better and better~✊✊✊

The tone at the beginning of the novel is relatively solid. From the first glance, it is a battlefield of war and war, and the male protagonist is full of heroism. How gentle he is when he uses buns to tease girls. He is simply the most perfect boyfriend in the world! After reading three chapters, I had a strong sense of immersion. The characters were portrayed in a slow and in-depth manner, and each one was full of personality. There is suspense at the end. After the male protagonist leaves the city, he leaves the readers with endless thoughts. The writing style is smooth and the words are gorgeous, which shows that the writing skills are extraordinary. I accepted it and will continue reading.

Good books are not popular series, come on, the author, don't be a eunuch, I will continue to pursue it 🤝

This is a terrible result. I hope the author can persevere. The poor have no money to reward and can only support by subscribing.

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I finished the contract today and will print it and send it tomorrow. I also hope that those who like this book will invest in it. Tell me a few more words about this book. What I want to write about is a different world of rivers and lakes, temples and the world, of course mixed with fantasy. The world is fighting for hegemony, and the rivers and lakes are competing for the throne. The saddest thing is love, and the coldest thing is the human heart!

Isn't your author's avatar placed on Jianghu's previous page?

The writing is very good. Although the results are not good, the author continues to insist on not being a eunuch.

Can one chapter be longer? It's not enough! ! !

Brother, do you have too many stunning beauties? As long as you are around the protagonist, no matter your status or martial arts skills, you must be an above-average, stunning beauty. It's really nice to be ordinary.

I saw that the author said that Bu is not necessarily the female protagonist. Does this mean that this article only has a female protagonist?

I won't talk about it later, but the author, you wrote too much about the literary youth. It's hard to understand, it's jumping up and down.

The name is a bit interesting, concise and clear, and has an antique meaning. At a glance, you can tell that it has an ancient meaning. Compared with those (no way...) (Douluo's...) (I really don't want to...) And the like, at least there will be no resistance...