Magical Academic Age

Regarding the character of the male protagonist of this book, I clearly wrote it in the introduction and in the most conspicuous place. For a new author to dare to write such words as the male protagonist is a virgin in the introduction, this is a sincere reminder to people who don't like this type of protagonist. Some book friends also say that they don't like the protagonist's character, but they think the world view is good. I thought everyone had eyes, but some people are so mean that they insist on clicking in if they don't like it. After reading it, they insist on scolding them to see if there is something wrong with them. I will reiterate the issue about the male protagonist's character in detail in the book review. In the early stages of this book, the male protagonist has the character of a child, but in the later stages, it will take up about a quarter of the book, about one million words. Like HP, there is one volume per academic year, and the plot unfolds slowly. Although the male protagonist's parents have died, he has been cared for by other family members since he was a child and has not suffered any hardship or torture. Therefore, the ideas will be more idealistic and a bit naive. But at the same time, he is a person with no independent opinions. He knows what is good and what is good, and he is always willing to listen to advice. If he cannot firmly adhere to his idealized ideas, it seems difficult to achieve success. He likes to play pranks and tease people, but he gets carried away easily, and sometimes he is so silly that he shoots himself in the foot. But he has a good heart and will apologize and make amends if he does something wrong. He is not a generous person, but he is too lazy to care about things many times, and cannot repay kindness with kindness, but he is also too lazy to repay him directly. But he will be very diligent and perseverant in his hobbies. He occasionally calls his cat his master, and may call him daddy when he needs a roommate in the future. But he's not spineless, he just doesn't care much about these things either. He hates cruel killings and doesn't like fighting, but he is a very reliable comrade and will not abandon any of his comrades, even at the cost of his life. Occasionally a little carefree, but in fact very dedicated In the early stage, it is probably like this. As for what you will grow into when you grow up, it is up to you. I will give you some general ideas: It may become completely dark It may become a "refined egoist", which is the evil law of mainstream novels (although I personally study Western scriptures and law Yes, but in fact I hate this kind of people the most. I think they are not as cute as kind and disordered people...) It may be just to change the little problems, become more mature and more independent It may also become more principled and become a defender of justice Anyway, I can write no matter what, with a million words of leeway, no matter what the character is changed, it will not appear abrupt. Because the male protagonist is not likable, I introduced the female protagonist Ajun as the second independent protagonist. I personally am reluctant to assign the female protagonist to the male protagonist, just because I think the male protagonist is not perfect. Of course, there will be no other roles assigned to her. As an independent woman, the female lead will not have any bloody rape dramas, but she can live a comfortable life without relying on men. The above is about the two protagonists. I wrote so much without realizing it, alas, it's annoying. I will say a few more words. I welcome everyone to give advice to the male protagonist and help him grow. It is up to you to decide what path he will take in the future. I can write anything. However, please don't come up and trash the protagonist, the protagonist ***. Even if I really can't help but want to scold him, I ask you to do a good job and tell me what he did wrong and how you want him to change it. This is reasonable advice, right? Comments that do not express opinions but only curse will be deleted! Finally, I wish everyone a happy Chinese Valentine's Day.

I originally thought it was a book about magic and science from another world, but after reading thirty chapters, I realized that it was actually about some family drama!

I just read the introduction and I felt like I was running away, but I still left a footprint.

The author explained the protagonist's character issues in the introduction, and also published a special leaflet explaining the protagonist's cowardly character, the Virgin, etc. I hope that since I have made it clear in advance, you will not use this kind of problem to criticize me. Here I want to correct the author's thinking. The relationship between the author and the reader is actually quite subtle. The author has the supreme status in his works, and readers can only rely on the power of the crowd to spray the author with poison in order to get the author to make concessions. The evil point of trolling the author is a right given to readers by the Qidian platform. For example, I like this story very much but I am very dissatisfied with the character of the protagonist. What can I do? I can only criticize the author in the comments and hope that the author will correct it. But what if the author insists? Then readers can do their best to criticize in the comments... After all, most people read the comments before reading the book. In the end, the book received poor grades, the author gave up, and so on. In "Harry Potter: I Am Legend", the author wrote a very toxic heroine, who was sprayed with depression by readers. A role model for our generation. In this case, trolling is not a way to vent but a means of suppression. You can't let your book become popular and lead to more books with the Virgin protagonist. In the end, readers who like Not the Virgin can't find the book to read. It can be regarded as the soft violence of most people. Having said so much, I just want to tell the author. If you don't have a big heart, don't play some literary and poisonous games. After all, you are targeting online readers. Some things explained in the leaflet, the protagonist is childish but will grow, etc. You, the author, are really new. The problem with new authors is that they always think they can write magical epics, but in fact they can't even write web articles well. Online novels do not require the protagonist's character to grow, only their strength to grow. Rebirth is still childish, so why rebirth? Give up on Our Lady, most people can't handle such a protagonist. In reality, Madonna Bai Zuo was sprayed, let alone in fiction.

I understand why not many people watched it. . . . I read thirty or forty chapters and still haven't arrived at the academy yet. I looked at the catalog until it was released and still haven't reached the academy yet. You don't even know magic, so you're going on a new-school adventure? The big man knows a lot of magic but doesn't know any of it. I'm here to see you show off, not to see others show off.

May I ask what exactly you wrote? When the protagonist became a wizard, I thought you were writing a cool novel. Then you wrote about the people around you after becoming a wizard. I thought you were writing about relaxed and pleasant daily writing. And then you told readers in the extra story that the protagonist actually died once, and he was manipulated to travel through time again? Even the most important golden finger is being manipulated? You write suspense stories, right? By the way, do you want to torture those readers who read it as a cool article? Suppose you wrote an academic novel. The protagonist didn't enter the academy for dozens of chapters. Suppose you write an imaginary article. You, the author, have no imagination. It appears that the protagonist has no brain at all and does not have any understanding of magic. What exactly did you write? Everyday life is not daily life, whether it is pleasant or not, whether it is sad or not, and there is no imagination. Before the plot has even started, you have laid a trap for the protagonist to be manipulated by Goldfinger. You can't do this suspense? The most unacceptable thing is that Goldfinger is manipulated. The plot is not progressing very well, so it just puts a thunder on the protagonist's head. As the author, you know when the thunder will explode, but can the readers know? Do you insist that readers continue to read your article despite the feeling that they are taking on the role of a character and being manipulated?

In fact, I quite like the style of this academic era. I don't like the intrigue in many books. Maybe I prefer simpler interpersonal relationships. Life is already very tiring. If interpersonal communication is still so troublesome, I won't bother to worry about it. I also like the simple and kind-hearted protagonist, who may reflect his own ideal state to some extent. Replacing sincerity with sincerity should be an eternal pursuit.

I always feel that the author forgot that the protagonist is a time-travelling rebirth in his setting. When I first saw the protagonist's behavior, I thought he was a real child. I was very curious about how old the protagonist was before time-traveling. It felt like he had no social experience at all.

After reading the introduction, I was persuaded to leave, leaving a footprint to prevent me from coming in again next time.

I really like this kind of protagonist. I'm tired of those decisive and decisive protagonists. It's interesting to see such a gentle and childlike protagonist with a more interesting and leisurely worldview 🤭

There are many problems with the author's word choice. The various Chinese words used in the Western fantasy setting are quite awkward. For example: midwife, abbot wizard

I've read dozens of them, and the author has written so much, so give me a vote. It feels like a Harry Potter-like world with a self-set background, and it has a unique flavor when reading. The setting of this time traveler is a bit strange. The protagonist likes a little witch of the same age, and then becomes jealous and blushes. There is nothing wrong with treating people and telling the truth as if they were an indigenous child from another world. But from time to time, I am reminded that the protagonist is still a time traveler, a person who has a family and a career in the past, and it feels particularly inconsistent to look at it like this. It would be better not to have the setting of adult time travellers.

The style of women's videos makes me watch them for a long time and it's all about house fighting. At best, Pig's Feet has a good-natured character, but at worst, he is a coward. Even if he becomes the emperor, anyone can come up and kick him.

After reading about 60 chapters, I found that the previous content was too bland. Chapter 60 has passed and it is still laying the groundwork. The tension is not shown in places where conflicts can arise. In other words, this is a narrative with the protagonist as the first perspective. How should I put it? Daily writing also needs some interesting conflicts. It is too bland and makes it boring...

Is this written for fun? This resume is really awesome

Very nice, good luck to the author!

It's so long-winded to not enroll in school after waiting for so long.

When you wake up, you should first learn knowledge, but instead you go hang out with a bunch of people. It's inexplicable.

The world view is very good, but there is no main plot, and the adventure travel does not match the strength of the protagonist, which makes it dull and frustrating.