Magic Thought

Every new book needs care. Maybe I am not perfect, but I will continue to change. Mo Si Mo Si is also my thoughts. I hope you can accompany me to the end.

I want to cry. I have already coded it, but I deleted it and re-edited it. However, I deleted it when I put it in the recycle bin. I feel so miserable! ! Is there anyone worse than me? Woohoo... It's so difficult...

The author has been worried a lot lately and can't calm down to type. He can't even think about water. He's adjusting!

This book does not enter the palace, but Tang San presses it on the bed

Well, after reading the book, let me share my thoughts. The writing is well done, and you can tell that the author has put great care into it. The title and introduction of the book aroused my interest (I was bored tonight and wanted to read Xianxia, ​​and I happened to see this book 😊😊). From the prologue to Chapter 15, the plot, the daily life of the protagonist and the appearance of Goldfinger are all very good. The writing is smooth, but there are a lot of typos⊙ω⊙. But from Chapter 16 to the latest Chapter 24, the content gradually becomes more like a novice 🥵🥵. Both the mocking of the wolves in Chapter 17 and the anger against the spider spirit in Chapter 24 gave me a feeling of artificiality. In addition, the development of Goldfinger and the change of the protagonist seemed too fast and abrupt (つд⊂). The plot can be written slowly, the change from human to demon can be done step by step, from body to soul gradually cold-blooded. I am thinking: Will the parents of the protagonist who started a high-risk profession be sacrificed to heaven 🤭🤭 (Wow, there are some good books, but they are either updated every month or every year, or they are swallowed directly). This is my first time writing a long review. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes. Come on (●—●)

Come on, come on, it's collected, it's collected.

The writing is very good. Yongye comes to see you with "The Inheritance of the Fantasy Martial Arts of the Heavens". It has been received. I look forward to a return visit and comments. Come on.

It is well written and very attentive. I would like to collect it and ask for a return visit to "I Have a Salted Fish System"!

The path to immortality opens, and the destiny of immortality appears! I originally wanted to become a mortal, but in troubled times, the world is full of wind and clouds, demons and monsters appear in all directions, and it is difficult to walk on the mortal road. I have no choice but to take the path of immortality, destroy the world along the way, travel through the past and present, and finally become the first immortal! The road to immortality opens, and the fate of immortality appears. The little beggar, in troubled times, wants to become an immortal. He goes up to Lingshan Mountain, down to the South China Sea, and sets foot on the Taoist Sect. He searches all over the Nine Netherworlds and traverses the nine heavens, just to find that figure! Looking back suddenly, I saw the man smiling sweetly in the dim light...

The protagonist of the Xianxia in the male video is actually a girl... Let me go, author, you really know how to play 😓😓😓