Konoha's White Teeth Flash

What this book is really like, the protagonist has lived in two lives, and his mental age is almost thirty years old. Then this guy shed tears of remorse to the 10-year-old girl who had just met for a day. Pedophilia? It's so simple 😅 Let's talk about the setting of Senjutsu in Naruto. Natural energy is originally the original power of the world, and it is a gift from the world of Naruto to its people. Chakra is not a power that originally existed. It was brought by the Otsutsuki clan. The senjutsu used in ninjutsu is a ninjutsu that is based on chakra and absorbs the power of nature. The amount of chakra determines the intensity of natural power, but it has a duration, and other methods must be used to extend the sage mode. The unique senjutsu is definitely one of the important points of this book, but the explanation of this point is really confusing and is limited to the celestial beings of humans and animals... (Forgive me for really wanting to complain) Logically speaking, it does not make sense to use chakra (the reason that does not belong to this world) to use the power of nature (the original power of this world). The sensual arts should have their original way of opening! The following are all imaginary definitions of natural forces and are also borrowed from other books. You can refer to them, just don't be so vague --------------------- "The air you breathe in is not created by you in your body," the Master said, "You welcome the air in Go and let it sustain your life. Your body will use it when it needs it, and it will release it when you exhale. You are just its container. You inhale and exhale, and you are the channel for the air to flow. " The master looked at his posture, "I said that the air does not belong to you. , But you feel that the longer you can hold the air in your body, the more proud you are. The same is true for magic (natural power). You long for magic (natural power) and think it is something you can take for yourself. You are stubborn, but you forget that you are just a channel for magic (natural power) to flow through. In your own heart, magic (natural power) is suffocated. Because you think of magic (natural power) as something that can be used at your disposal. You are wrong. Magic (natural power) is like air. You have to welcome the magic (natural power) around you, and then return it.

I think what you wrote is okay. Maybe most people are poisoned by Tai Chi, but I think it's okay. After all, Naruto also has drunken fist and soft fist. Just like the phoenix fruit and dragon fruit in the Pirates fandom at first, it makes people feel very poisonous, but the fact is that these fruits really exist. It would be nice if the sense of immersion in the front was stronger.

In fact, I feel that things like being too dry are not the main reason. The key is that it does not have the flavor of Naruto. Although the fan circle is not big, it is not particularly picky. Although you have only read a few chapters of this book, you will definitely not be able to write it based on the fantasy cultivation of immortals. What kind of world is Naruto? Either you focus on blood, or you focus on science. If you create a fantasy Naruto fanfic, it's strange that readers will like it.

Sasate·Itachi

I still can't accept the idea that most Naruto fans start dating at a certain age, and they still fall in love with the purpose of getting married...

I feel that time travel means bringing a modern person with the system. If you travel to the Naruto world without the system, even if you know the plot, it is of no use. It is just waste. People who don't work hard in modern times will work hard when they travel to the Naruto world. Will hard work be useful? The system is hard power. Hard power. What is hard work?

I feel like it's a matter of traveling through time and becoming Shiranui. The author can just make random nonsense about anyone, as long as he's not someone who appears in the anime.

Haha, the white teeth are shining... I thought the protagonist was Metkai 😁

To be honest, I wanted to watch it, but after reading your comments, I didn't want to watch it. After thinking about it, I decided to watch it. I hope it makes me feel really good. Warning

Although I haven't read it yet, I would like to say "come on" to the author first. Although the data is bleak, the spirit of perseverance is still relatively good 🌹🌹🌹 (I will not talk about the authors who are isolated) 😌

I think the emotional scenes described by the author are very delicate and well written with a strong sense of empathy. You can try more in the future, don't worry.

White Fang's sword in Naruto really can't break Madara's defense

If you travel to Naruto and still use a knife, can you break Uchiha Madara's defense?

At the beginning, Tai Chi successfully persuaded people to retreat 🙂

You might as well come up with a system and add a bunch of settings that Hokage doesn't have, is that really good?

There is no problem with the setting, but your start is too low, not attractive at all. You practice boxing and swordsmanship, and add a tool worker master who comes from nowhere. There is no arrangement at all, why not just cheat, and you have to repeat the grade. How useless are you? Why don't you just drop out and become a sage? If you don't learn the necessary knowledge of ninja, why don't you go out and wait for death later?

I took a look at the heroine, emmmm, I removed the cp emmmm... If you say Asuma died because of the original work, I think you don't have to write him to death.

Hatake White Fang and Golden Flash, these two are very famous. In fact, they are the perfect ninjas in many people's minds. They are powerful and showy, just like Li Bai in The King, a powerful assassin type, so they are very popular White Fang's sword skills also include the shining Flying Thunder God. In fact, the second generation also has the Flying Thunder God, but people prefer the fourth generation, also because of his character and so on. Even in the later stages, they have been indifferent for many years, but they still have a wave of presence at the end with the Fury Fourth Generation, and Kakashi's mysterious resurrection after his death.

Can't stand it

Hahaha, you can also give the protagonist a kunai, let's link it up

The writing is too bland. As a fan novel, there is no passion, no comedy, and no conspiracy. It is bland and has no sense of immersion.

Is it possible for the protagonist and the heroine to have a baby?

I have my eyes on you. (۩⊙O⊙۩)I choose death

I'm here to steal a picture, fishing number 🥒, advance four, rush, break through the speed of light, new book is a hit

I don't know what novel you wrote