Taishang Talisman

Mortal Ye waited until his death, and the helplessness he wrote about was quite moving. In an instant, he fell in love with this fate that drags down the pig's feet but does not forget the moral principles. He said that without the fate, there would be no present. Being able to speak the divine language is the key, and Bai Ze is the key. The fate is forcibly pulled out by the author (without Bai Ze, hundreds of thousands of fate are useless). It is said that taking away people's opportunities is like killing their parents. After dozens of pictures, they let Daoyi go. The reason turned out to be that they didn't want Daoyi and Daoyuan to live together (discard the book here). When I saw you saying that every picture was reported, I felt pity. It was well written. I was jealous of Yingcai. Later I found out that I had misunderstood the reporter. I wanted to know where I could report it.

It feels like the more people write in the book, the more they write, their IQs are no longer online.

This crappy novel is very good-looking, and the concept is very novel. But I can only say that it was written by a girl after all, which is irritating. Read it once and curse it again. Such a good idea wasted. Although the plot has ups and downs, it just lacks some flavor. Every time it almost reaches the point of being enjoyable, it gets suppressed. Mmp. Can't you let go of the fate, can't you be decisive in killing, every time you procrastinate, in that era of the jungle, the protagonist's mother-in-law and mother were just like women. Where does all this emotional waste come from? Isn't the heroine already decided? And her mother ravaged her! Where are the humans? I haven't seen the exhaust of the humans in so many chapters! Her mother is in the mood to spend time with Tao. I felt uncomfortable watching the dog licking at the beginning. There are so many causes and effects, but you just say you want to lick it and that's it. It's so uncomfortable! Also, the protagonist has the support of four saints. Not everyone can have sex with him. You can say Bai Ze, Tai Yi, Mo Zu, but what is Blue Bird? She was a prisoner of war. Although she was cleared later, she was not old enough to play with the protagonist. It's obvious that he and the protagonist are going to do a scapegoat! What a fuss! ! ! A man is still in the wild, and every second counts. There is no time to show off his temper. He can have inner drama, but it is not the same as a girl! This is a story about the prehistoric era on a male channel, not a female channel. It is written with some passion, but only a little. It is always said that anger turns beauty into beauty. This is possible, but it depends on what you described to Daoyuan in the early stage and the protagonist's dog-licking behavior. It makes me angry to see it. Although you forcefully came to terms with it later. But this doesn't match the character of the protagonist! It's really hard for a person who is determined to become enlightened to be trapped in the love of his children. The protagonist has cultivated so much that he forgets his feelings. Although he doesn't really cut off his emotions, it's not like what you show in your book. Even inner drama! ! ! Still speechless, tut tut. I know what I said was a bit harsh. But I hope you can correct it. There really aren't many good prehistoric novels nowadays. (But it doesn't have to be you. At worst, you can write an article yourself.) I really want to see what I want to read. You have a strong personality, but you are writing on a male channel. Decisive, generous and strategic. Don't stick to trivial matters when it comes to big things. This kind of male protagonist is what we men want to see. I hope the author can change it. Now I feel really frustrated every time I watch it. In addition, don't drag Daoyuan out. The foreshadowing you are making now is that Daoyuan is not dead, or he was revived by the protagonist. Really don't write it like this. It's too vicious. You have done this in the early stage and we don't want to see the protagonist and Daoyuan having dramas anymore. The heroine and the supporting actress must be clearly distinguished. Especially in a place like the Great Desolate that talks about cause and effect, the protagonist has no fate with her at all, and the cause and effect has been paid off, so don't bring her out to be an eyesore! ! ! Don't talk about how great the grace of becoming a Taoist is. Isn't it enough to change her fate against the will of heaven? Without the source of Taoism, there is still Taoism. God allowed him to become Taoism. This is the general trend of the way of heaven! Can't stop it! Didn't you say {"NickName":"Ninth Destiny","UserId":153543430}? Daoyuan was originally destined to be a heavenly immortal, but he could later cultivate to Da Luo. Isn't this also cause and effect? And the key to enlightenment is not Bai Ze, there is no such thing as Bai Ze. It's nothing without Bai Ze Daoyuan! Just a fool. Grass. It's so uncomfortable! ! Girls are mothers-in-law

It seems that the author is not very happy because of the recent bad comments. In fact, some of the trolls who make comments have a mentality of hating iron for not being able to make steel. As an old bookworm with 10 years of experience reading online novels, I have always been in a state of book shortage. There are very few authors of similar prehistoric novels who have a good start. I was even pleasantly surprised as if I had seen the rise of another "Shading the Sky" and another "Perfect World". The author is expected to be a god. The sense of expectation... However, the author's handling of some details disappointed some long-term readers. The protagonist's IQ in the early stage is very online and he is a qualified leader, including the decisive killing of tribesmen. It deserves praise. The first problem lies in seeking immortality. Since you can learn divine patterns by signing a contract, why must the protagonist sign with Baize? With the relationship between the protagonist and Bai Ze, it shouldn't be difficult to capture a wild beast and force him to sign a contract. After all, even a dragon-bearded tiger in the later stage can have divine patterns, which is just enough for Bai Ze to repay the favor of saving his life. The second problem is being treated as a pet by Daoyuan, an intelligent creature that has lived for hundreds of years. The leader of the clan, as a pet, if it is just a pet, forget it, and it is cute emmm... You can be set to be a pet, but if you are trying to be cute, others will call you a monkey or a barbarian. The protagonist really turns into a monkey and a barbarian. The third dharma aspect question is that since chaos is visualized, and the protagonist's name is Pangu, why not the chaos is seeded by the green lotus, and then the green lotus grows and blooms in the twenty-fourth level, giving birth to Pangu. Then Pangu ax in one hand, and the jade dish in the other hand. The green lotus can also evolve into the twenty-four heavens. Is it okay to have no friends? Regarding the emotional issues of the protagonist. If you like Daoyuan from the beginning, the protagonist has an equal mentality. It doesn't matter if Daoyuan treats him as a pet... As for him, he is a family member... There is nothing wrong with it. In the end, the book has flaws, but it's still worth pursuing. It's a pity that there is no hope of becoming a god...

The book is getting worse as it is written, and even a good hand of cards cannot stop your self-righteous pursuit of death. Thousands of years have passed, and a pig should have woken up. However, the protagonist just went from being extraordinary at the beginning to becoming a person worse than ordinary people after thousands of years. His mental quality is too poor. While saying that the protagonist is determined to follow the Tao, he also encounters something unsatisfactory. Just blame God for being unfair. Just put this kind of inner quality after thousands of years of training. If you put it in the real society, in a hundred million years you will still be sitting on the assembly line. If you don't work hard and work hard, you just know how to complain about this and this. It's futile at first glance. Your heart is higher than the sky and your destiny is thinner than the paper. Author, you'd better reflect on it!

I don't understand. When winter comes, you dig out the fire yourself, and you still have so much dried meat. You don't have to worry about eating and drinking. Even though the fire is cold in winter, it's not the kind that can kill people. Why do you insist on asking God to favor you? Do you want God to grant you eternal life? And I have already mentioned being bound to the way of heaven. Not to mention immortality, but living for about a hundred years is not a problem. The theme is to revitalize the human race. Why are you still worshiping the God of Fire now? Isn't this disgusting? And in modern times, we should know that the bird in the sun is the Golden Crow, right? Anyway, what I feel when I see it now is that the protagonist always inexplicably asks the gods to give him immortality and give him something. After the sacrifice fails, you don't encourage the tribesmen and instead just let them be sad. You must know that the tribesmen have regarded you as a leader.

Tao Yuan is really very poisonous. Maybe the author wanted to write a fairy-tale love line where fate is gone and everything is destroyed. Patriarch Bodhi mentioned this several times. However, after writing it, the male protagonist becomes a dog licker without a bottom line, Tao Yuan becomes green tea, and the fourth senior brother becomes a villain, and then The male protagonist uses the female protagonist to slap the fourth senior brother in the face for various reasons. Does it sound familiar to you? This routine is used by novice YY writers. The following is just that the male protagonist uses the fourth senior brother to become famous, and the relationship is broken, and the protagonist takes over, or the protagonist uses it to kill his sister to prove his enlightenment. Either way is a big poisonous point.

Although when I saw that the author was Jiu Mei, I thought that there would be a character who was like a Taoist fate. I never thought that after so long, I would not be entangled like in Shen Gongbao. Although it is a reflection of reality, it is not a decisive killing, but kindness is kindness, love is love, kindness can be continuous, love can be endless, and it is always disgusting. Jiumei said that she writes books for people who want to read them. She also hopes that Jiumei can read the long book reviews. There are three books, from Shen Gongbao to Zhang Bairen to Little Monkey. The plot is getting more and more powerful. The other parts are really well written. Once a woman is involved, it is especially speechless. I hope Jiumei will read it carefully. Maybe this is also the reason why Jiumei has been single? ?

Haha

It was okay when I first started reading it. There were all kinds of contradictions in the plot in the early and middle stages. In the middle stage, it completely overturned what was written earlier. It was written in the early part that I gave up everything for the sake of immortality, and then I turned into a dog licker, and then I slapped myself in the face. I wrote the book that had the qualifications to become a god (although there were various small problems in the early part, but it was not a big problem) until most people gave up. The author is also a master in persuading people to quit!

He killed his whole family, killed his son, and his enemies gave him the throne. So beautiful

I have read a lot of books, and I have something to say about this. As a young man who traveled through time in the 21st century and has experienced thousands of years of cultivation, if my mind is obsessed with a woman, I feel that it may have been in vain. After thousands of years, there is no progress? To be honest, I personally think that for now, Yang should pursue his own path and practice. Moreover, he is a barbarian and has nothing to do with the development and reproduction of his own race. As a barbarian with no status in the ancient land, he is obsessed with climbing up Tao Yuan. He is obviously asking for trouble. Even if he loses his barbarity in the future, he will still be a pet in the eyes of Dao Yuan. Only when his grades are high enough and his strength is strong enough can he change and turn around. I think Jiumei should express this kind of mentality, instead of showing that Yang is obsessed with Daoyuan and seems to be inferior. Moreover, as a backward disciple, no matter how high his achievements are, it must be high enough, otherwise he will never have the right to speak equally. Moreover, origin is extremely important here. Different heels represent different achievements and status. Daoyuan is like a noble princess. Yang is not even a poor boy from the slums. He is at best a pet. Therefore, I personally feel that Jiumei's description of Yang is a bit inappropriate for the emotional part of Daoyuan. As the guide and leader of the race, he should have self-knowledge, as well as analysis of his own cognition and current situation. Zu Shiming Xian has already mentioned it, so there are many places to plan. Daoyuan itself is very guilty, so there are many places to take advantage of. Now Yang feels to me like a person who is a bit over the top, has not traveled through thousands of years at all, and has no demeanor as a son of heaven. Tianhu starts, Daoyuan's guilt, the ancestor starts a small stove, such an advantage, but like a little man in today's society, which makes people very dramatic, and the sense of substitution is gone instantly. As Yang, who has many trump cards and treasures of merit, why do I feel that his previous treasures are of no use at all, and there is no mention of cultivation and research? Instead, he was obsessed with his children's affair, so much so that the patriarch couldn't stand it and pointed it out. Moreover, why did Yang think that the patriarch didn't know about it? The wisest approach, I think, should be to proactively admit your mistakes. Personally, I feel that the protagonist has been practicing for thousands of years. Regardless of his character and wisdom, he should not be like this now. Everything about Yang is hard-won now. It can be said that it is too difficult. I can understand the obsession with Tao Yuan, but should I plan for a long time? The above is only my personal opinion, please do not comment

It's a little disgusting, the combat power system is disordered, the realm system is disordered, even the emotional lines are in chaos, and there are some cuckold plots. It was okay at first, but in the later stage, when I talked about how strong the saint was, the saint was beaten to death. If it weren't for the rule that the saint is immortal, the protagonist would have died long ago.

The early stage is very exciting, and the plot is also good, but the emotional line is very poisonous. It will keep poisoning you until it poisons you to death. It is so difficult that I downloaded the APP specifically to spray poison.

It took me an afternoon to read the latest chapter. For me, the setting of this book is quite interesting. It disrupts and rearranges the mainstream timeline of Prehistoric Times, and adds my own original elements to give new ideas to the original clichéd background line of Prehistoric Times. The protagonist is indeed portrayed as the thinking of an ordinary person as she said (this is not derogatory, it is just a fact.) Although she has the innate ability to deduce, when it comes to human relationships, she does not use ability and treats her sincerely. And he will also comfort himself and deceive himself. After thousands of years, he still has a pure heart, no different from ordinary people. The plot of the story is also good, and it really hooked me in watching it all afternoon. In particular, the protagonist's performance of great disasters and great opportunities is very comfortable. There is quick wit and characteristics. To summarize, the setting of this book is very interesting, the enhancement of the protagonist is well written, and the major events are very interesting. But! The emotional lines of the characters are flawed. First of all, I think it's okay for the protagonist to tolerate the people he likes, even if he suffers a loss because of it, it's okay. It is natural to be tolerant to the people you like. Even if there are some problems with the story logic, it doesn't matter, because the character of the protagonist is even more likable. However, the author failed to solve one problem, that is: Daoyuan is not enough for readers to like. For us readers, our view of Taoyuan is different from that of the protagonist. The protagonist (or the author's God's perspective) can see the cuteness of Daoyuan and the protagonist's daily fights, and what has always attracted the protagonist. But to readers, we can't see any of this. What we can see is that when the protagonist enters the coffin, she lets the protagonist in while joking and playful; after entering the door, she treats the protagonist like a pet; after the protagonist gets up, the protagonist does not know how to control the demands, and at the same time he is tender and affectionate with another person (complete two-faced). I think I'm not the only one who feels this way. We really can't like such a person, and it's hard to find her cute enough to let the protagonist do so much. The protagonist racks his brains for a cute but flawed person (such as Little Evil God-chan, "The Evil God and the Kitchen Girl") or a cute but impossible person (such as Lu Xueqi), and readers will just sigh. However, if the protagonist shows his heart to someone who is not cute, that would be a poisonous point. If, the author, you are not willing to change the outline and let her end with tragedy, it would be a better idea. So, I hope you can think about it and modify the previous description of Daoyuan to make her more cute and make our reading experience better. Hope it can be of some help to you. 😌

It looks disgusting. I really don't want to chase him when I get to the tenth life! What a waste of expression! 😰

Daoyuan died. I don't want to express anything, I'm just a pirated reader. At least, the plot is interesting and the flaws are not bad (after all, in addition to male videos, I also like female videos) 🤭. The only thing that didn't feel good was that there was a paragraph where the author wrote about Daoyuan to comfort Daoyi, and then they stayed in the mountains together for four days, and then returned to their own mountain and got tired of being together with the protagonist. Well, it's probably a bit incomprehensible. In other respects, the author's writing is very good and the plot is twists and turns. I like this book very much and hope my grades will get better and better. Only recommendation votes are given every day.

The writing is very good at the beginning, but becomes more and more outrageous as you get to the middle. The writing style is inferior and the framework is excellent. I am still willing to read this book just because I am interested in this cultivation system. If this book is completed, I will probably jump to the table of contents to read it! If the author is a little ambitious, he should read about starting with Gu Huo Bird, which is also an old routine and a new theme. Why are other people's books able to carve out flowers, but yours is closer to Xiang? 🙂

After reading the novel for so long, this is the first time I've posted a comment. I can honestly say that the author's writing, writing, and storyline are all flawless. However, I played a bad chess game. What is this fate written about? Authors shouldn't always complain about readers cursing. No one can stand it.

Holy book, holy book, I have never seen such a strange book, you are also a talent

There are really many poisonous points in this book. It is suitable for old bookworms (those who are no longer afraid of poison) and new readers. I used to read on QQ and was completely poisoned to death when I saw the Dharma of Lao Tzu emmm

There are more and more bugs. Where have the demon summoning banners gone? Most of them are in the demon summoning banners. Why don't they use them? There is also a saint. Although Yang Sanyang is not a saint, he is a saint. How can he be so benevolent and righteous to help him fight against the enemy? There are also those 129,600 Dharma signs. Although I have published a new book, I cannot ignore this one. What do you want these loyal fans to think?

There are more and more bugs. Where have the demon summoning banners gone? Most of them are in the demon summoning banners. Why don't they use them? There is also a saint. Although Yang Sanyang is not a saint, he is a saint. How can he be so benevolent and righteous to help him fight against the enemy? There are also those 129,600 Dharma signs. Although a new book has been published, this one cannot be ignored. What do you want these loyal fans to think?

I read some of the free chapters but didn't finish them. One of the author's single-chapter stories was reported by Chapter Chapter. I expressed my deep sympathy at the time. When I didn't watch the author's emotional scenes, I felt that someone could be so crazy and inhumane. Ever since I saw the emotional parts written by the author, I felt that being reported Chapter Chapter was absolutely reasonable and not unfair at all. I was disgusted and wanted to fuck the author. Reporting or something like that could not relieve the disgusting feeling in my heart. But I also thought that the author is not easy, so I didn't report it. Most readers think the supporting characters are mentally retarded The plot is stupid, the protagonist is mentally retarded, he can only curse one or two sentences, and then stop reading. After all, there is no sense of involvement from the beginning. However, the book written by this author has a good plot of the protagonist and supporting characters at the beginning, with a strong sense of involvement, and suddenly inserts emotions, and it is instantly disgusting to the point of explosion, just like the former, you buy ice For ice cream, the seller directly gives you a piece of shit, and at most he scolds the seller for a few words and then leaves. But the latter is like, you buy ice cream, eat part of it and it tastes good, and suddenly you find out that it is actually made of shit, and you want to kill the seller. The latter is the book written by you, the author, and the former is the book written by most authors. Although I haven't read it, I hope the author can learn more from the shortcomings of the two books. I think this is a relationship. If you don't have rich emotional experiences, you should carefully consider writing it!

I have read all the chapters so far. This book is a very high-quality book in this era of stagnant life in the starting point novel. The premise is that you really don't care about the most vicious dog-licking stage in this novel, but this stage is very important and is not recommended to be skipped...

I'm sorry, this is the first time I've read a book for more than 10 years and I post a curse. It's not directed at the author, but I think the author's writing power is really limited and he can't express the protagonist's feeling after being redeemed after thousands of years of silence. The longing for the tribe I wrote in the previous article turned into a licking monkey. I was convinced by this plot. First of all, the background is in the prehistoric times. I said that seizing people's opportunities is a mortal enemy. You are supposed to prove immortality in the early stage of the full text. In order to prove immortality, how much did you pay for immortality? How much hardship did you suffer? Now that someone has stopped you from attaining immortality, you still start licking? To what extent do you have to have a distorted outlook on things to do this kind of thing? Protagonist: Dog-licking Monkey Supporting Role: Taoyuan, Daoyi Really, I don't think this book has anything to do with others, so you should put it on a female channel. I'm ready to be banned. Please let the management see this and ban me directly. Thank you.

After reading ten chapters, there are a lot of poisonous points. Didn't you think about it carefully before coding?

Alas~ The first thing I do when I get up at ten o'clock in the morning every day is to open my mobile phone with trepidation to read Taishang updates. It's like riding a roller coaster. The third chapter is the peak of excitement, and the second chapter is the trough of despair. I have been following this book since it started with over a hundred chapters, and you can't beat it every day. Jiu Mei, can't you come up with some exciting updates? 😭😭😭 School starts tomorrow and I won't be back for a month. My phone will be turned off. Goodbye. I hope I can save more when I come back. Come on Jiumei! Be strong! Wait for me to come back!

Really poisonous😓

Trash, Water King, a person who can be favored by the law can't practice, haha