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After reading it for so long, I wanted to write a few sentences. I read a pirated version, which made me feel a little guilty, so a small reward will make up for it. First of all, the author's writing skills are good, and the plot is full of twists and turns, making it difficult to let go of the book! But the plot is too depressing, and I feel uncomfortable reading it. I always feel that there is a breath of anger in my heart that I can't let out. First, the Four Swords of Zhu Xian give the protagonist confidence to a certain extent, but in the first 900 chapters, the Four Swords of Zhu Xian hinders the protagonist from becoming a Yang God. After becoming a Yang God, a huge amount of energy is needed to truly realize the Four Swords. Although it adds to the protagonist's background, it is more of a pity for the readers to abandon it without taste. . Second, the five gods, the protagonists, control various puppets of ghosts and demons in the world, but they have very little effect. The world is full of puppets of ears and eyes, and they are constantly being plotted against. The Li family is basically the puppets of the protagonists. As a result, they are plotted by the Li family again and again. These five gods and demons What's the point of all this? Thirdly, regarding the emperor's foolish loyalty, the author has always emphasized how deeply Yang Guang is grateful to the protagonist, so he must always protect Yang Guang. However, the protagonist's strength was given by Yang Guang. Which opportunity was given by Yang Guang? It's just that Yang Guang asked the protagonist to be appointed to the Treasure House Bookstore in the middle, which made the protagonist work hard for the emperor Fourth, the protagonist is mentally retarded and is always being plotted. Basically everyone can plot against the protagonist. Fifth, the protagonist's strength goes up and down. Sometimes a sword strikes the world, and sometimes a passerby can come out and make the protagonist miserable. The protagonist's strength is already the best in the world, but there are still many cats and dogs who can come out and point out the protagonist. Sixth, the protagonist is restricted by too many rules and regulations. You cannot let yourself be free. Although it is impossible to be free without restraints just like reality, it is too much in fantasy novels. Seventh, the protagonist is unclear about his cheap old man and is indecisive. Throughout the whole story, the protagonist's family has been pulling away from him, and the aristocratic family has been using his family to plot against the protagonist. I write so much just because I have better expectations for this book, but I always feel frustrated reading it. .

The main character is so strong. If you just push him over, it will be over. If you insist on making it so bad, Shimin will disgust you a thousand times. You, Shimin, treat you like your first love. You want to make the human race strong. If you want to make the human race stronger, it will be over. You have to hand over the power to others. You keep saying that you are the best master in the world, and no one dares to step on it. He who cares about this and that is too indecisive. You don't need to be a chess player, you can just be a table-turner. You can't keep your wife and daughter after playing so much chess. You have raised Li Shimin to be so strong, but he often steps on you. As a human emperor, he has no tolerance at all. There is no need to support such a human emperor.

It made me vomit blood. Abandoned.

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. I assume that I am the protagonist. He comes from the lower reaches of history and keeps sending treasures to the enemy. The enemy is ungrateful. Every time he goes against me, he always regrets it. It is exactly the same as the previous book. There is no sense of satisfaction. I am disappointed, disappointed, disappointed, endless disappointment. I will never get up in the morning to read your book again. I will never be disappointed again.

I feel that the role of Zhang Bairen is suitable for a loner.

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If Nine Lives persists, there will be fewer and fewer such books. They take into account the traditional fairy tales, but also have their own ideas and innovations, and their shortcomings are not hidden. Gods and immortals, the nine lives are well explained, from Shen Gongbao to Daomen. Nowadays, some books are really difficult to read. The world structure is difficult to attract people without the support of cultural background. They are full of loopholes. I don't know how they became popular. The names of various systems are vulgar and second-rate.

This book feels like the main character is a bit frustrated.

I've noticed a problem since I started reading The Legend of Shen Gongbao. The writing is very creative and exciting, but the main characters seem to be weak🐔, not in terms of strength, but in mentality. There is also a problem with the logic. Everyone knows that fate is being plotted all the time. They are plotted over and over again, but they dare not raise a gun to kill the enemy. They just tolerate the death of their wives. There are a few people who can surpass the protagonist in destiny, and they all live so freely. The protagonist seems to have no brain to think, and no blood. I hope the author will read more book reviews. Some opinions are purely personal expressions.

The author's logic is a bit messed up. For example, when Li Xiuning died, he said that he would die directly and not go to the heavenly palace. As a result, during the subsequent battle, Li Xiuning led his troops out again.

It's so annoying, I'm so excited to see it

Sure enough, none of Zha Jiu's pig feet would end well, either as a punishment from heaven or as a result of karmic fire. In short, thunder from the sky and fire from the earth, 😜😜😜😜

To be honest, the more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel, but I also want to see if there are people who feel the same way, from Dingdang to Qiaoyan... Immediately, Empress Xiao, through the destined Chinese Valentine's Day (this is a bit obvious), the so-called evil star is like this! This reminds me of the Chinese heroes in Hong Kong comics. I watched the music of Tiansha Lonely Star that was specially composed today, and I really felt it. As the recent Ghost King said, it doesn't matter if you are strong, it will make you regret your whole life. Although I don't know how far along the book is, I wonder if there will be regrets in the end. Influenced by Jiumei, I also wrote a book. I hope all fellow Taoists of Xianxia can help me read it and give me some advice. Another fairy tale, which has tired everyone. If you can't push it, tell me and I will delete the post.

Please don't be so unreasonable, okay. This book feels so fucked up now. Can you be tougher for a while? 🙂🙂🙂

All kinds of abusers, those who achieve great things must work hard to train their muscles and bones 😎😎😎

Why does it feel a bit unfinished, it's just a battle with the gods until the end 😢😢

I want to say that destiny is the essence and movement. The water droplets falling on the soil are gravity and movement. The world of mortals is your own choice and the movement of matter

Jiumei, it's the end of the month. If you don't break the news, I won't give you the last two monthly passes even if I tear them up.

Let me tell you Jiu Mei, if you don't update it, don't expect me to read your new book. You have time to write a new book but you don't update it. Are you worthy of us?

The concept of this book and the setting that combines several worlds are very good, and they are well integrated without appearing rigid. The author's writing is also well-paced and he is considered to be an outstanding storyteller among many authors. However, I don't know why, the characters and context often conflict with each other, and the setting explanations in the narration are often contradictory to the actions, even in the same chapter. There will always be inconsistencies between words and actions. In fact, if you ignore these general plot developments, it will not be greatly affected, but it will really affect the reading experience, especially when reading dozens or hundreds of chapters in a row. I often skip the scenes and can't help complaining. I hope the author will have the opportunity to revise it in the future. I can't continue reading for the time being, so I'll step back for a while.

Jiumei adds more updates! Jiumei adds more updates! Jiumei adds more updates! Say important things three times!

If you keep looking at the browser, you can't see the comments there, but there are still many people supporting you. Although some people are maliciously trying to trick you, they are extremely rare.

Jiumei, you have to figure it out. The update is too slow and it looks uncomfortable.

I've read more than half of it. How can I put it? It's well written, but it's too frustrating. I want to give up, I have read so much, the sunk costs are there, and I want to know the follow-up. Be happy and happy at the same time (pain accounts for 80%). The protagonist has the embryo of the Four Swords of Killing Immortals at the beginning, which is pretty awesome, but he only masters it in the later stages, so he can't use it casually yet. The whole process seemed to be smooth sailing, and he was ranked number one in the world with countless trump cards, but in fact, he had never really defeated his opponent and killed everyone. So far, I have seen 70% to 80% of the time. There is not a single main enemy, even if only one can be solved What has been the routine? When you meet an opponent, you have a high chance of killing them directly. However, due to various reasons, you have a deeper plan. For the sake of the common people, you have to endure it. At most, a new BOSS is coming. It turns out that the villain's combat power has changed and only one or two have been eliminated. They have become passers-by. What's the point of crushing them all? Then there are all kinds of gentlemen who can bully him and rub him against the ground with their intrigues and tricks. When his relatives, friends, and lovers have suffered eight lifetimes of bad luck, there are a lot of hypocrites and villains who can't defeat the protagonist, so they use them to plot and operate, and they die with their souls scattered. The protagonist has the best strength in the world, but there is nothing he can do. Alas, he just holds it in, and allows a bunch of Xiaoxiao to jump around and test like crazy, but you can trample him to death, but no, I have big plans and big plans, and I can't lose the big for the small. The key is to hold back the big move and make a wave, but no, hey, I have big plans and big plans, and I can't lose big because of small things. This morning, Han Paopao's confusion of ideas and his demonic state of mind disappeared. The name Zhang Bairen is not called for nothing. In short, the plot and writing are excellent and it is a good book. However, if you have high blood pressure, heart disease, and a bad temper, please stay away. You may end up in the ICU after reading this book. Those who are prone to masochism are finding a treasure.

After being out of the trap for two and a half years, I feel relieved when I see everyone discussing that the plot is bad 😆😆

The protagonist's Immortal-killing Sword Formation is rubbish from beginning to end😒😒😒

The Yangshen of every sect and family has won your contract. You still don't use anything, you don't know anything, you only find out when something happens every time. The Zhu Xian Sword does not need to be used as a trump card, a part of the Sun Body is also used as a trump card, Nuwa's inheritance is used as a trump card, and the three graves are used as a trump card. If someone beats you up, you fight alone. If they don't form a team, you won't fight, right? You won't be able to sneak around and take care of them all? I inherited the same routine as Shen Gongbao, and the final ending is probably the same as urine 🤫🤫🤫🤫

On the afternoon of December 10, 2018, my name is Zhang Bairen. I was the governor of the Sui Dynasty and was known as the best person in the world. He held 4 Zhuxian swords and had 10 golden crows as pets. He was rampant in the world and no one could stop him. Today Emperor Li Shimin of the Tang Dynasty came to me for a fight. I know Li Shimin. He is a man who dare not take action when his wife is sleeping with someone, so he can hang and beat him at will. I'm going to wait until he's at his strongest to fight him. This is my pride as the best in the world, but I didn't expect that he would actually call someone else, and my woman would be eaten by someone else (bang crisp). I'm angry. , Prepare to use the Zhuxian Sword. I killed them all. Unexpectedly, a bunch of people came out and told me that I couldn't use it. Even if I was beaten to death, I couldn't use the Zhuxian Sword. Well, I gave up. Then I should be fine with pets. As soon as the pets came out, I regained my domineering power as the best person in the world, and then a bunch of people came out. The promised duel turned out to be me fighting a group of them alone. I found that I couldn't beat me, but they couldn't kill me either. I stood there and let them beat me. They beat me until I was tired of scolding, but they still didn't stop. Ah, finally they found out that they couldn't kill me. I thought the battle was over, so I was about to show off. I didn't expect them to be so stupid. Come up with a way. I'm disabled, and there's no other way. I'm going to run away. I'll write down all of them in a notebook. When they're dead, I'll go out and wander around. 😆 My name is Zhang Bairen. I speak for myself. I am the first man to be the best in the world.

Is there any book group? I have 15,000 followers. Can I join?

I have really read many books by the author, first pirated, and now starting from the beginning, written in 15 chapters from beginning to end. If there are not 50 chapters, it will not give you the end of the beginning, if there are not 20 chapters, it will not give you the end of the middle, and if there are not 10 chapters of the end, it will not give you the ending. This book is even more remarkable. From Sui to Tang Dynasty, Li Shimin took over 80% of the book. Now they are out of Kyushu! I don't dare to use the Zhuxian Sword Formation, and it won't be useful if it's not used correctly. This is the invincible sword formation from the beginning to the present. It is an invincible artifact, the incarnation of killing, and the way of heaven can't do anything about it, but it can't kill people. The Kind Sword Formation specializes in killing numbers, not supporting characters. Then the protagonist is invincible. He can't defeat someone else's idea or a special physique. Ahem, forget it, I can't kill Li Shimin, who has been written from beginning to end and can't beat the protagonist. Forget it, the innate god in the world in front of him, who was born and written about all kinds of things, has now been given an identity, the father of the innate god in the underworld. The innate god cannot defeat a strong man with a golden body. The gods of the wood and other things, the golden bodies of the murderers just bite directly, and outside the Kyushu, the gods of the underworld can't beat the golden bodies of the human race. And the book says they are extremely powerful. Then there is the Heavenly Book at the beginning, which is written and written. I don't know how many copies the Heavenly Book has become! The third ancestor became the first ancestor, and the Ten Golden Crows were invincible in the world, gone! The clone of the Sun Yuanling Heavenly Emperor is invincible and cannot defeat the Taiyin Fairy. The protagonist, in an environment where he is invincible, kills his own father, his own mother, and the whole family he raised. Well, then I fell in love with Li Shimin and had a biological son, who was then killed, and then a daughter was born. She was the kind of woman who was shy about men and couldn't move away when she saw a scholar, and then I was invincible in the world. Being popularized by all kinds of people, beaten to death by all kinds of people, or reincarnated, but still invincible, just like the emperor's dragon energy in the work. Others are afraid of the emperor's dragon energy, but the protagonist is not afraid, but no one else is afraid of the protagonist. If you have received the money, please seal me.