Advent Tablet

Oh my God, what kind of book is this? It's so good! It's just that the paragraphs in each chapter are too long.

The descendants in this book are so much like players, and adventuring in a different dimension is like playing an online game. For example, the protagonist's reading progress is constant every hour in the book. It is really the same as practicing reading and literacy skills in martial arts games. In reality, reading and understanding related things are fast and slow. When you encounter a problem and you can't figure it out by yourself, you may have to ask others for help before you can continue reading. How can this be done in a book?

The writing is quite good, but the writing style is not very good, like a running account, and the text is a bit messy. Maybe the author is used to writing from the frontier, and writes wherever he thinks. Overall, it is more like the feather people. The setting is good, but the look and feel of the writing is not comfortable for readers.

Build a character building This building is used to help the author come up with characters.

Just discovered this book and finished reading the existing chapters. It feels like the protagonist's profession is the "political commissar", a position unique to our army. Once the military and political forces are in charge, they can also do ideological work for the soldiers and recruit prisoners to surrender. Please reply if you feel the same 🪖🪖🪖

It feels too messy, with too many systems, and the protagonist's plan is not clearly stated.

Look how complicated this is! You also need to check out the settings specifically! There is no golden finger, the ordinary growth path of an alien. Nothing to feel.

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. There are too many professions and too confusing skills that I can't remember.

This specialty of not believing in evil set by the author feels too powerful! It feels like a combination of high-level unyielding, high-level independence, disobedience to discipline, disregard for gods, etc. The super national blood is not just one person, it is the super blood of all Chinese people. Subordinates have no respect for Shangguan, who should belong to the city god system, and think about how to make trouble. Common people are not afraid of facing immortals, but wonder if they can do it a few times. Why do they not believe in evil if they have such a strong talent?

The subject matter is good, the author's writing style is also relatively good, and it is relatively comfortable to read, but there is no key point overall. The author wants to add too many things, and it is too messy to read. I don't know what I am writing at the end. If I focus on a few key points of the pig's feet, the effect will be much better.

A good subject, but the author just pretends to be a eunuch. The three members of Yichun's family next door have become rich. Waste

Is the author still around? A pigeon or a eunuch?

My imagination is wide open but the text is too white

After reading the first volume, I was amazed by the setting. Although it was a bit dry and the dialogue and rhythm were not very good, the author is already very good as a newcomer. Don't give up. Write more and you can sharpen your writing skills.

{"NickName":"","UserId":300990062} You are wrong. When the ancient emperors started their businesses, everyone was enthusiastic at first. Only when they started to establish a foundation would they disagree. And those who jump out early are those who haven't thought clearly. Think about it, a person who praises the Dimensional Empire, as a Chinese, gave up everything to come in like an indigenous noble, and stayed by your side for so long, this should make him realize how strong he is behind him, right? When I was still home, I wanted to devour this city, but now I don't want to think about consuming this small second level. It works? Even if you don't eat, you still have it in the end. The old men can see it very clearly, so it's obvious. But why can't the political party understand this? Not to mention carpenters, doctors, and military households. Playing such dirty tricks must be political. I don't even understand this. Do you want to be the village chief? And what you learn at home is in vain! Asking knowingly. Besides, as a person who works hard like a monarch, what are you doing? These are just a few families, and you still have a clan in your hands. How about letting others let you go in this wave? They [family] are all thinking about digging bricks for you. How about a bigger team after you have the cornerstone? What about a larger appeal? . The article also points out that after reading a book about monarchs, it should be more difficult after that. The bigger the team, the more demands there are, and the more terrible it is to let it go. Wolf nature is not absolute, but if this shovel goes down, your current foundation will become private, and that is not causing trouble. It's rebellion, even if I don't think about it now. But everything belongs to others, what will you do in the future? What about combat? The family family will seek profit for the family and retreat. This is normal. But if the army belongs to them, another situation will arise.

Why eunuch 😢

I would like to ask if the author has suspended updates or is it a eunuch?

There has been no update for two weeks. What have you been doing lately?

I still like the male protagonist's gay friend route.

Hey, what a great book, what a pity, come and offer some incense 😭

So is the author a eunuch?

Updates have been suspended for one year If you don't want to write anymore, please click to finish.

I guess the author has forgotten this number.

Also, the authorities don't care about suppressing other extraordinary routes? ? ? Just because the name is called the Chinese Extraordinary Route, the officials don't care about it, but they also say that they also have the Western Extraordinary Route and suppress them in various ways.

I've read dozens of chapters, and the setting is good, but the protagonist sometimes behaves like a fool.

I saw the sword and left. The weapon of class 18 is the sword! Can't you play something else?