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I have reservations about the last paragraph of the introduction

The protagonist has no structure and only has a few dollars on his body. He doesn't think about making money and picks up girls. In his previous life, he boasted so much that he still cheated money with nothing. No wonder this book with 500,000 words has only 60,000 fans. The trust of readers gained from the first two books was completely lost. I originally thought that I would be able to reward dozens of dollars to support this when I saw it on the shelves, but I became addicted before I saw Chapter 20.

The writing is a bit scattered, there are too many branch plots, the heroine and her friends appear too many and too complicated, the ways of making money are not prioritized, and the story has no main line. Compared with the big rancher, the storyline is too different, the plot is not strong enough to attract readers to read, and the story becomes more and more white. I hope the author can relax his mind and conceive cleverly, reduce the appearance of unnecessary friends, increase the description of the warm family atmosphere, and clarify a main line of making money to describe in detail. Increase real inner experience. Thank you for your hard work.

I strongly recommend the author to read Chicago 1990. The plight of ethnic minorities, the way to deal with politicians, and the ways of the rich in the United States are all explained in depth. I think it will be helpful to you.

When I saw it on the shelves, I felt a bit boring. There was no sense of expectation at the beginning. The male protagonist's route was also very complicated, with no emotional line or conflict line! Even if I develop business, it's just a hammer here and there, and there's no main line for me to pursue! I also have little expectations for the Japanese heroine. I think even if you write about Madonna and Britney, I will still have something I want to read. Now, there is really no fluctuation. The original rancher liked it very much. Unfortunately, the author later fell into the current vicious circle. It seems that the middle books have been unable to get out!

Electrical appliance stores employ more employees so that they can have a political stance. The more people they employ, the better. It is best to go public and use it as a political umbrella. It doesn't matter whether they make money or not. The most important thing is to have security.

Which of the original owners sent Xiaotai as a nanny? Even if you get rich, participating in a business is fun enough. Until now, I carry everything with me

This is not the rebirth of Los Angeles, this is the rebirth of that small county in China.

I think it's not easy for the author. He can't write what he wants to write but can only write it down in one stroke. The ranch has been 404. Few people read fantasy. It takes time to grow. Which celebrity doesn't go through some ups and downs. Everyone can give more valuable opinions. Let our little mouse's wonderful writing bring a happy mood to every reader... ✊✊