Konoha Ferryman

Well! The first 20 chapters are obviously very well written, but why...

I don't understand why you turned into a pirate in the end when you clearly wrote about Naruto? 😅

I finally read a Naruto novel that I can enjoy. Good cheers to the author💪

I think this is already very good. Come on, author.

I feel like I can still invest in it. I'm already going through the process, and it's stable!

Don't be emotional at the beginning, but you won't be able to do it later.

I regretted investing in it. The style was very stable at the beginning, and the image and character of the protagonist were unique in fan fiction. However, it suddenly fell apart at the end, the style of painting suddenly changed, and the imagination was too fast, and the gains outweighed the losses. What a pity.

I really like the protagonist who keeps being a coffin and slowly improves his abilities. When the protagonist participates in the plot after World War III, it always feels too abrupt. Wouldn't it be good to lurk and quietly strengthen himself? Why jump out and change?

The subsequent plot really doesn't fit the description of the protagonist at the beginning. At first, I probably wanted to set the protagonist up to be a ruthless person who doesn't say much, but later turns into a funny person who doesn't say anything ruthless. Moreover, the protagonists in these latest chapters are so scared after seeing nuclear bombs. . Aren't you afraid of death? . . The comment section is also very annoying. There is a troll who keeps posting comments in it.

The first forty chapters are amazing. After forty chapters, they become a dog-licker and nanny for four generations of couples, such as working as a personal consultant, making movies, and the three ninjas reunited in Konoha, etc. They take other people's shit and other people's ideas and ask for them crazyly. The protagonist is honestly enjoying it!

The beginning was good, but after returning from the battlefield, the whole style of the painting changed and turned into a happy one. Moreover, all the experimental materials, secret techniques, and hard-earned money saved in the secret room were destroyed because of the Nine Tails. (It felt like the author was forcibly changing the setting.) All the previous efforts of the protagonist were in vain, and then a new setting was created?

The introduction can be more concise. Thousands of people pass by in front of the store, I hope you don't get started. A coffin shop, how many people were sent away. Two words are missing, but it feels more powerful.

At first, I was following the dark style, but then I became more amused as I walked...

Thousands of people passed by the store, but I hope you won't enter. How many people can be sent away in a coffin shop. Isn't this bad?

Don't be a eunuch, it's quite pretty.

What you wrote was pretty good at first, but then you let yourself go? I thought Pig Knot was a rather sinister person, but it turned out to be funny later? 😆😆

I originally thought he was the Dark Hokage at this level, but in the end he ended up being a dog.

He died from the poison and took his leave. I couldn't help it when I saw him confessing to Minato and Jiraiya that he could kill people and extract abilities. Is this how the time traveler plays?

Thousands of people walked by in front of the store, but one person in the store was silent.

Does the author have a group, new book, or updated this book?