The Origin of All Worlds Chat Group

Regarding novels or fan fiction, here are my personal opinions. The source is the beginning, the origin, or the starting point. The original work is the source, and fan fiction is the branch. Every beginning has an end. The end is the final chapter, and the final chapter contains everything. There is only one endpoint; all branches devour each other to become the final destination.

This book is pure self-indulgence by the author; it's a complete mess, leaving my mind a jumbled and confused mess.

Having just finished reading 100 chapters, here are my thoughts: First, overall it felt very boring. There were no interesting points, no touching moments, and nothing that made me want to continue reading; it was like a calm, still pond. Second, the content gave me a strong sense of déjà vu; I don't know if I'd read it before when searching for books online.

Having spent too long on Qidian, I now realize that the only ones who can be considered cannon fodder in novels are those who can create worlds, and only those who are basically omniscient and omnipotent can be considered bosses.

What's the point of having a main character like you? With all these limitations, you might as well not write one at all.

It's really not good. Xiaobing found the bugs but didn't fix them, instead trying to trick people. Does the author think it's cute? I think it's ridiculous.

You started writing and then you just let yourself go. Pangu only left a trace of consciousness and then disappeared. Gaia just popped up briefly. The chat group only consists of the protagonist and Xiao Bing. The world is just a game of life. And you can't even write a decent story. The further you go, the more chaotic it gets.

In the Lingxiao Palace, Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor gently stroked the twin swords, sighing, "When I gave you these natal weapons, I never expected you to improve them much... After all, you were just a straw sandal seller back then, with little money to buy materials." He gazed deeply at Xuande, realizing he truly couldn't understand him.

I couldn't continue after reading the first two chapters and seeing the female AI. Sigh, female AI isn't popular anymore. The personal system genre has been overused and become a breeding ground for systemic corruption, and now you're reviving it in chat groups.

The setting has some issues, author. The existence of Xiao Bing is problematic; hopefully, those plot holes will be filled. Also, the world-building is somewhat frustrating. I hope the author can address these issues properly and prevent readers from feeling unhappy, otherwise... It's all over.