The Origin of All Worlds Chat Group

Regarding novels or fan fiction, this is my personal opinion The source is the beginning, the beginning, which is also the starting point The original work is the source, and the fan fiction is the branch There is a beginning, and there is an end The end is the end, and the end stores everything The end is only There is one, all the branches swallow each other and become the final Just like ink drops entering the water will affect each other The ink becomes lighter and the water becomes black So, the reason why the woman in the fan fiction fell in love with the protagonist at once is very simple, so many branches have already spoiled her.

This book is completely the author's own pleasure. It is written in a mess. It made my mind confused and confused.

I just finished reading Chapter 100 and let me tell you my feelings: First of all, it feels very boring overall. There is no interesting point, no affectionate point and no desire for me to continue reading. It is like calm water with no ripples. Then there is the content, which gave me a strong sense of sight. I don't know if I have read it before when I was looking for books online. Another big problem is that the content feels incoherent and confusing. Anyway, I was confused when I watched it. Finally, I want to complain about the character Xiaobing. She makes me feel speechless. As an AI in the system, she always wants to cheat the protagonist's money. She does things without rules and is not at all what an AI should be like.

After staying at the starting point for a long time, the only way to read novels now is to make stars. Those are cannon fodder. Only those who can create the world are elite monsters. Only those who are basically omniscient and omnipotent can be considered a BOOS.

What is the use of your protagonist? All kinds of restrictions, just don't write them down.

It's really not good-looking. Xiaobing found bugs but didn't fix them, trying to trick people. Does the author think it's cute? I think it's very naughty.

Just let yourself go as you write. Pangu was gone as long as he was conscious. Gaia just bubbles up. The chat group consists of the protagonist and Xiaobing. The world is just a game of life. The story is not well written yet. The writing gets messier as you go to the back.

In the Lingxiao Palace, Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords and sighed: "When I gave you this divine weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a straw sandal seller at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials." He stared deeply at Xuande and found that he really couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could practice it to this extent, and you even have 90% of the power of Xuanyuan Sword!... Compared with Xuanyuan Sword, it is only a hair short of it!" Xuande remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish. "Amazing! Amazing!" The Jade Emperor exclaimed, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword?" Xuande was silent. He knows all this. "But..." The Jade Emperor changed the subject, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line!... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with five kinds of original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword." The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, the Hunyuan Flame, the Fengluo Flame, the Tianxing Flame and the Sith Flame... I have the first one, and the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang has it!!... Do you understand?" Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor coldly, and slowly said, "I have the last four... I only have the first one." The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is it possible!? Those four divine flames... How could he have them!? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the crystal flames?" Xuande nodded, "You're right, I came here just for the water experience!"

After reading the first two chapters, I can't stand the introduction of a female artificial intelligence. Female artificial intelligence is no longer popular now. The bad things played in the personal system have become a poisonous point in the system. Your chat group picked it up again.

There is something wrong with the setting, the author, there is something wrong with Xiaobing's existence, I hope to fill it up, and the world setting is also a bit unsatisfactory. I hope the author can help to make it better, so as not to make readers unhappy, otherwise,,, it will be over.