A Passionate Rebirth in the Years of Youth

Some people couldn't stand it anymore. At the very least, there should be punctuation, especially in spoken words; at least add a quotation mark ("").

I couldn't finish the first chapter. The sentences weren't even separated. Even dialogue in an essay has paragraphs. Writing a book without any care is unreadable.

It describes the passage of time, but lacks a sense of era.

It's over a hundred chapters and there hasn't even been a single quotation mark.

The red envelopes were blocked; they were all snapped up in a second after I sent out a referral vote.

In the late 1980s, it was quite desirable for college graduates to be directly appointed as cadres and assigned jobs. Why wouldn't my father let me go? Back then, which city was the main player in that led to the establishment of joint-venture hotels?

Is this the ending? A waste of emotion with no beginning or end.

The writing style isn't great, but the content is quite realistic; many of the events depicted in the book actually happen. It needs improvement; hopefully, I can write high-quality pieces soon.

One chapter was enough to make me give up. I don't know how the story is going, and the lack of punctuation greatly affects the reading experience. I have no interest in continuing.

I really dislike Zhang Meng. I feel her romantic scenes are so forced.