A Passionate Rebirth in the Years of Youth

I can't stand it anymore. I should at least have punctuation marks, especially if I'm speaking, I'd better add a " "

I can't stand it after reading a chapter. The sentences are not separated. Even if you write a composition, you will segment the dialogue into paragraphs. You can't write a book seriously enough that people can't stand it.

It writes about the years and lacks a sense of age.

More than a hundred chapters, not even a ""

There are red envelopes. As soon as a recommendation ticket was issued, all the red envelopes were sold out in one second.

College students became cadres directly after graduation and were assigned jobs. At that time, what city was the protagonist in that had a joint venture hotel?

Is this the ending? It's a waste of emotions without beginning or end.

The writing style is not great, but the content is quite real, and a lot of things in the book happened. There is room for improvement and high-quality writing should be done as soon as possible.

One chapter persuades me to quit. I don't know how the story is. The lack of punctuation marks really affects the reading. I'm not interested in reading anymore.

I hate Zhang Meng. I hate Zhang Meng very much. I feel that her emotional scenes are too far-fetched.