Konoha's Bizarre Adventure

I don't know why, but I don't like this "Hinata" less and less. Perhaps the image of Hinata in the original work is too profound. The "Hinata" in this book is like the fireworks bearing Hinata's name. There is always an awkward feeling when looking at her. It's like someone you know has been replaced by someone else. Although I can understand that it is possible to develop such a character in such a growing environment, I cannot accept it emotionally.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           being constantly cheated by people other than the protagonist, emm, is a bit unpleasant. Don't say things like "Can the heroine's cheating be called cheating?" Almost all novels need a sense of substitution. I don't know what other people think. "A supporting character is treated like a pig's feet" is a bit uncomfortable. Apart from that, it is very good in other aspects. The first night I read this book, I didn't go to bed until two or three in the morning. The author's control of the plot and fighting scenes doesn't look like a novice's. Keep up the good work!

Once upon a time there was a mountain, and there was an author in the mountain. I was washing my feet upstream, and you were taking a bath downstream! It's done, let's wash together! I don't know what else to say? I'm so panicked, I just want to be skinny! If the author can give me a good beating, I feel comfortable! 😌😌😌😌😌

Beer Bear: Kick and stare~~~~~Welcome to the first episode of "Konoha's Bizarre Adventure" extra segment "Ola Talk Show", where Ben Bear will host this segment together with this issue's special guest Mr. Hinata Miyuki. I'm so happy, isn't it, Mr. Miyuki. Yu Xing: Ahem, yes, it would be nice to have the opportunity to break the fourth wall and communicate with readers. By the way, our first step should be to announce the popularity voting list of this game, right? But are we actually doing a popularity voting session? Beer Bear: Yes. Yu Xing: Where? Beer Bear: In my heart, although I can't see it, I can feel the readers' love for the characters from their enthusiasm. Yuyuki: Is this the emperor's voting list? Then I will announce the popularity ranking of this first issue of the list. First of all, the first place is "Kaguya" with 7777 votes, the second place is "Hinata" with 4369 votes, the third place is "Bessie" with 2800 votes... Anyone after the fourth place has zero votes? No one cast any other roles at all? And what the hell is Bessie? ! ! ! ! ! ! Beer Bear: Other characters? Are there any other popular characters? How come I don't know? Miyuki: For example, the eldest young master of the Hyuga clan! Kaguya's master! Hinata-chan's older brother! I, the protagonist, am so useless! He's actually worse than a cauliflower head who only appeared in one chapter! Beer Bear: Ah, actually you still have a strong presence. Many readers have made comments about you. Yu Xing: Huh... That's great, what do you say about me? Beer Bear: For example, "This dead girl is so disgusting, please don't come and taint my little Tian Tian", and asked you when you can get a lunch and leave the show, and some people said that if you die miserably, I will give you a reward of 10,000 starting coins. Yu Xing: Are you all here to kill me? These readers really don't know what a protagonist is (tactical fallback). How can the protagonist be given this little money... Beer Bear: Wait a moment... I'm going to see if the starting point coin reward has been received. Yu Xing: Shocked! As the protagonist, I actually received my own death sentence in the extra chapter! And it looks very real! Beer Bear: You're kidding, how could you, as the protagonist, get lunch so easily. Yu Xing: That's it. Beer Bear: Your lifespan will be at least as long as that of the Third Hokage. He didn't receive a lunch box, so you definitely won't receive a lunch box. Of course, you might not receive a lunch box after he dies. Goyuki: Isn't the third generation's bento the one that will be revealed in the next chapter of the Chunin Examination! Could it be that I also died in the hands of Orochimaru? Beer Bear: Are you kidding, can Orochimaru's thing kill people? How could he, a great philanthropist, kill you? Yu Xing: So? Beer Bear: So you will die standing up with 267 stab wounds, 152 bullets, and 46 artillery shells. How about it, it looks like a very heroic death. Goyuki: Hinata Whitebeard? I am! Which of your words is true? Beer Bear: Of course it's not true. Is there something wrong with your brain? How can I write you to death? If I write you to death, wouldn't it be impossible to perform pleasurable torture? Yu Xing: Bastard... You can do whatever you like. I have no room to resist anyway. Beer Bear: Just kidding, this extra is actually written on a whim to celebrate the collection reaching the 5,000 mark, so just be happy. Yu Xing: Collect 5000? A lot? Beer Bear: Well, how should I put it? It took me 380 days to write my last fantasy book about a certain street-fighting devil. The total number of collections after the completion of 2 million words was 4623, but it only took me 20 days to write your book. The total number of collections at 120,000 words was 5000, which means the results were about 20 times better than the previous book. Yu Xing: Really, that means I am twenty times more powerful than your last protagonist? Beer Bear: That's not the case, because I think 4999 of the 5000 collections are all for Kaguya and Hinata. It doesn't seem to have much to do with you. No one would have any objections if you were replaced by a walking weed. Yu Xing: ... No, besides playing tricks, do you do anything else? Wouldn't it be good to read more books to enhance your literary literacy? Beer Bear: Do you think my literary quality is not good enough? Did you grow up watching the old man's "Hemingway and the Sea"? Yu Xing: Oh, obviously I saw you write "Kaguya Otsutsuki" as "Kaguya Otsutsuki", and then a reader caught you in the act, hung you up and slapped you in the face. It's pretty miserable for an author to be in your position. Beer Bear: .......... (Reaching out his hand to take out the phone from his crotch), hey, hey, are you the street devil? Have your four wives given birth? The vacation is over, come back soon for the second game, yes, yes, the protagonist of the second game has just been fired, Ben Xiong is going to throw it into the trash bin and delete it with one click. You should be more reliable and at least not complain about the author, so how about changing Konoha's Bizarre Adventure to you as the protagonist? Add four more harems for you? Okay, let's just say…huh? What's that sound over there? It sounded like a broken bone... The phone hung up. Beer Bear: What the hell, did your wife break your bones again? It doesn't matter anymore. And why are you shivering? Yu Xing:...... No, I didn't say anything. Long live the Beer Bear and long live the author. Beer Bear: Hehehe, that's good to know. It's almost time. Let's end this extra episode with the familiar ending song. Yu Xing: Ending song? Is there such a thing? Beer Bear: Yes, the opening theme of this book is "Hinata Miyuki gave up thinking" and the ending theme is "Kaguya-chan and Hinata-chan's Lily Paradise". Yu Xing: Why do the opening and ending themes seem so different... Anyway, thank you very much for your support! Beer Bear: Yes, everyone should support him more, watch every day and lose one... Sorry, I accidentally spoiled it again. Yu Xing:......

Why is Hinata the heroine? This cp is a bit too much. If Hanabi is the heroine, she is better than Hinata.

If you are writing about stand-ins, you should write more about this aspect. You will know all the things about Konoha by heart, so don't waste (water) the number of words... 😅

Speaking of which: Konoha is really a weird place that has always claimed the will of fire. Every time the major families fight, they have to be purged by Konoha. And if it weren't for the Hokage series of geniuses, they would either be killed or hidden. This is really the will of fire!

I suddenly had an idea. The Senju clan did not disappear, but broke into pieces and entered families and civilian homes. This can not only explain why the Senju disappeared, but also explain why there are more and more geniuses in Konoha! I'm a genius! 🤓

By the way, don't you think physical skills are not very good in the later stages? Kai is the only one who is interesting, and the Byakugan is extremely weak, and there is no way to compare it with the Tsangigan or anything like that. Apart from the Goldfinger stand-in, what can the protagonist use to compare with others in the future? Is it better to use the Eight Gates to fight against the Earth Blast Star, or to use the 360-degree Byakugan to fight Susanoo? There is no way out if you specialize in the Taijutsu Eye Technique. To put it bluntly, if the Byakugan cannot be upgraded to the bells and whistles of the Tenseigan, then there is no need to develop the Eye Technique.

Uh, why is the pig's trotter substitute so weak when it comes out, and yet it has to grow slowly. Sasuke, Naruto and their substitutes are at full level as soon as they appear. It feels like the combat effectiveness of the supporting characters is forcibly increased in the later stage. . . 🤤

Tell me loudly, how many floors can a bag of rice carry? 7

I hope the heroine is not Hinata and leaves something for Naruto! My parents are gone, my protagonist's halo has been robbed, and my wife will also be robbed?

I originally thought that when two stand-ins appeared, the other one was delivering goods to the protagonist, or to Hinata. But unfortunately, the author didn't follow this routine, so the book became more and more exciting. Later, when Kabuto got half of the arrows and spread them on a large scale, I was still thinking that the author was causing trouble. Is this still the Naruto world? It wasn't until the Great Toad Immortal mentioned the double stars that everything connected together. There were only two stand-ins from the beginning! One is the protagonist's strongest stand-in, and the other is the courier's stand-in with unlimited abilities. It's simple when you look at it this way. The protagonist's stand-in is complete from beginning to end, while the other stand-in has indeed been broken into pieces and turned into countless stand-ins. So the question is, who ultimately has the managerial authority of the second avatar? Is it like a sacred tree that disperses all the chakra and then takes it back again? Is it like Yhwach who gives abilities to others and can take them back whenever he wants? So the final ownership of the second stand is only owned by three people: First, the courier, this guy is not dead at all. He will be resurrected when everyone's abilities are recovered. Or he was resurrected and regained all his abilities. Second, Kabuto, he probably already knows the ability of this substitute, and he is releasing it now just to recycle it and have more abilities in the future. Third, Hinata! It was only at the last moment that everyone discovered that abilities can be recycled. All those who have the ability to disperse the second avatar are eligible to compete for ownership. As long as they compete for supremacy, who is the real opponent of the protagonist in this book?

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I'm speechless. There are so many Naruto novels, but there are only a few basic protagonists who focus on their careers and have a big picture view. In other Naruto novels, the protagonists are either collecting a harem or on the way to collect a harem. Ugh~ Think with your brain, don't think with your lower body. In Naruto's world, you still use your lower body to think. He didn't die quickly. He is indeed the protagonist.

The advantages and disadvantages are clear at a glance, the fusion of Naruto and the avatar, the protagonist's invincible avatar, the characters are not too OOC, and the plot is reasonable The disadvantages are even more outrageous, the double-travel setting, the avatars are scattered over a large area, the own avatars are all useless, and the enemy's avatars are more outrageous than the last. , Orochimaru's disgusting thing even arranged a requiem. The disgusting Kabuto is not happy at all. He is obviously a time traveler who knows the substitute but knows nothing about Jojo. The insect arrow intelligence is 0, and Orochimaru himself does not know. The plot of Naruto can be updated at any time according to the need to strengthen the enemy. I don't know the plot of the setting. Damn it. I don't put the reincarnation eyeworm arrow on my body and put it in the village every day for an ordinary person to watch. The stand-ins are all beaten. In the end, the big boss is Madara and Kaguya. Hinata was thrown into space and Kaz stopped thinking. The fuss has been going on for a long time. The stand-in Junchu only disgusts the protagonist and the readers. Killing Kabuto and Orochimaru is no fun at all. It goes back to the plot. What kind of rubbish stand is it? It's all rubbish below the sixth level of Otsutsuki. I'm really speechless. I really can't stand the last paragraph. It's too picky for readers.

Do you think it's a good idea to create an original Kirimura rebellious ninja? Do you think there is no ANBU protection next to Jinchuriki Naruto? Call you for half a day? It's double-traveling, and another time-traveler appears before it goes on the shelves. My dear, why are you screening readers before it goes on the shelves?

When I saw Chapter 79, I couldn't stand it any longer. Although the previous chapters were good, there were some minor quirks, but they were innocuous. Why is there another time traveler in Chapter 79? Is it double-traveling? People who are double-crossed are at least male and female. Why are you trying to steal your wife from this double-cross? I don't know if anyone else has time-traveled in the future, because this is the only thing I've seen. So far, it's double-cross.

Is it really a failure to write about another time traveler? Is there no need to write anymore?

Time travel through Master Hinata? The heroine Hinata? Wearing? No eye roll? Soul penetration? What about your biological sister? ? ?

The hodgepodge of Naruto and Jojo is really well written, but the poor results are indeed the author's work. The original setting is very interesting, but the whole double time traveler's rotten job before it was put on the shelves ended up not sending materials to the protagonist, but sending materials to Orochimaru. I guess there were too many abandoned traps, and the double time travel was too unpleasant. Even if he died, he would be very unhappy. Even sending a few insect arrows would be better than this, but the integration of the world view is very good, and there are no major pitfalls in the subsequent plot according to the comments. It is ruined by the double time travel setting.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I'm convinced and can't stand it anymore. I suggest you read the beginning of each short story and then search for the end directly, otherwise I'll bore you to death (ー_ー)!!

After watching so many times traveling as Hinata, why didn't I expect that the Byakugan clairvoyance + long-distance abilities are all for melee combat? Remote control is Hinata's destiny! The attack range of any bow will be much farther than that of flying knives and ninjutsu, right? If it's strong, it'll be covered by fire, if it's weak, it'll be shot at the knees with a kite. If you're close, it'll be defensive (returning to the sky) and controlling (pointing), but there's no solution. Even the King of Dance has to protect his knees!

Neji is gone? Are Naruto and Sasuke completely reduced to background? ? ? ? The Uchiha clan was destroyed without even writing about it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Dear gentlemen, can you read my book? Book Title: Naruto: Nobita in the Ninja World! Thank you all

The Rebirth of Waste, and a lot of bullshit 🙂 The content of 10 chapters, less than 2 chapters in total, is all data, and it is very frustrating. The author actually feels that the cheats are too powerful at the beginning. What should I do? Everyone has a body double, but what should I do if the body double can't compete with the male lead? Everyone is also growth-oriented, so that solves the problem. That's the author's thought, right? Will the problem be solved immediately? What do you mean, it's okay to hold back aggrievement? The male protagonist is also a grown-up person and will be as strong as them? Give the author a big 6

It takes a hundred or two hundred words to say a sentence. It feels like you are telling me why you need to eat. It's uncomfortable to watch.

The plot is quite boring The leaders of the Country of Grass are more interesting than this

New qd reader, aside from the double-traveling setting mentioned in other comments, this book is very interesting. Although there are bugs such as Kimimaro immediately using the Bokuman Technique, and the originality of the and double being able to blend into the human body, but the flaws are not concealed. Highly recommended, the double-traveling is just for those few chapters. Hinata is not Hinata, but she is not Hanabi either. She is Hinata who is doted on by her brother. It is normal for her personality to be different, and the real protagonist is Hinata, and the good guy is bigger than the protagonist.