Meteorite

Although your writing is good and fluent. It is recommended to get into the plot quickly! Your books come in large chunks without any recognition. The ability to create suspense is not strong, and the ability to organize the plot is not strong. I just think that you are telling stories and storytelling, and you can just adjust yourself at any time😄🙂😁

After 10 chapters, why hasn't the protagonist's golden finger appeared yet?

In a post-apocalyptic novel, I feel that in the early stage, the main theme should be pointed out as soon as possible or the protagonist's advantages should be targeted to increase the sense of expectation. The character creation is pretty good, but the plot is a bit too abrupt. The sudden disaster and the plot of the supporting characters give people the feeling of living in the apocalypse for a long time, which is very awkward.