Fantasy City Pagoda

I felt weird when I read Chapter 4. It was okay at first ╮(￣▽￣)╭ and it was quite attractive, but later on. There is a chapter that is densely packed with settings, and the fourth chapter is still setting up. The protagonist is all awesome. Anyway, I didn't feel that it was a stand-alone game. The protagonist's background is so high-level and he does all kinds of low-level things. In the fourth chapter, I had trouble with vampires twice. In the third chapter, I wanted to clean up the nearby vampires. In the fourth chapter, I was still grinding. Also, the author's description of his mother is very interesting🙄🙄🙄

The last book is Extraordinary. I set up automatic subscription. I haven't read it for more than a month. I just saw the background consumption record and the book has been lost. I will continue to support the author's new book.

I looked at the voting records and found that 22 days of voting × 5 votes = 110 votes

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Old readers come here to check in and have followed since the first book. Great support for the author! Review, those who report are all bastards (; ≥ Dis ≤)

I was a little speechless. I think the author's basic writing style is passable, and his ideas for writing books are not lacking. This mixture of the fighting world and the world view of the demon hunter is also very interesting. But this book is really getting boring the more I read it. Before entering V, it was barely better. After joining V, I felt that what I was reading was not a novel at all, but a story. Instead, I'm looking at an outline diluted with complaints and personal arguments. There are even many chapters where the author uses inexplicable explanations and discussions on some boring issues that have little impact on the story, and the whole paid chapter is perfunctory. Made me feel like I was being fooled like a fool. After looking at the author's writing experience, he has written several books. Why is it still like this? Although it may be a bit harsh, I still advise the author: If you really plan to make money by writing books. Please ignore the rainbow farts in your book club and book review section and get out of your comfort zone. Think carefully about how to write a novel.

The last book was so sad, and I still wanted to see where Lao Liupu was so big, and where the background and imagination were. Fortunately, this book is also a veteran, which is a consolation. Come on, author

It's too watery. The more I write about it, the more watery it becomes. I enjoyed reading it at first, but it became more and more painful as I read it later.

The structure is too loose, and you can't see through the hammers here and there.

Is Pig Knuckle a person who has lived for hundreds of years? After rebirth, my strength is not good, I know that the world is not normal, and I still perform magic rituals to death. I am still so stubborn that I perform it on the night of the carnival. The reason is that I forgot the date and was drunk. How can Pigfoot not forget who he is? What is the difference between this ability to commit suicide and those characters who die in third-rate American horror movies?

The so-called old guns are those second-rate men in Beijing who used to go to the artillery camp labor camp.

I like the writing very much, but I can't understand it more and more. The main line of the story is vague, and the narrative is too skewed 🙂 What's wrong with the author?

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. There are too many characters. I wrote a lot about important and unimportant ones, and each one is very long. I wish I could write an autobiography for each character. After reading hundreds of pictures, I feel like I'm lost.

This novel is so painful to read. . . . I have now read more than 20 chapters of the second volume, and I feel that there is really no theme, and the writing style is actually a little tiring, and as mentioned in the previous post, it keeps introducing the background of the world. The protagonist's style is very mature but not like a strong man. The tricks he uses do not feel like he has inherited the ability of the previous strong man (the previous one?). The upgrade is too slow. After reading this chapter, it said that the previous world almost penetrated the Marvel universe. Even though he is so strong, he is still struggling with daily life. . . The title seemed novel at first, but now I find that it cannot summarize the theme of this chapter at all, and there is no goal in even skipping chapters. How can I put it, this book is relatively unfriendly to new readers

I have always felt that it would be good for Lao Liu to continue writing the daily stories in the old book. The atmosphere of a genius craftsman with a little super power and full of life is very good. It feels a bit like watching the era of innocence and countercurrent. On the contrary, the plots of later science fiction films and TV works have not touched the plot (all kinds of people have been too miserable for the protagonist)

To be honest, the beginning is okay, but the writing becomes more and more confusing later on. There are too many characters and the most annoying thing is that the title is written directly into the text, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

I understand the truth, but why does the cover use the wizard's wolf emblem? Does this book have something to do with the wizard? Any reader can tell me, and I will consider reading it as appropriate.

I was completely turned off after reading the introduction. A mess. I was deceived by the picture.

It looks very awkward. Purpose, reason. There are no factors that drive the protagonist to do things. I just see the protagonist aimlessly getting involved in various things. There is no main line, and there is no goal. It is just the daily life of a time traveler who keeps doing things.

The author, I can't follow you anymore. I've finished the first book. The next two books are not as exciting as before, and the plot doesn't feel as smooth as the first one. It's not exciting! ! !

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like I have no outline at all. I can write whatever I want. I thought about it one by one, and there were a lot of bad sentences and paragraphs that I couldn't connect to, so I gave up. Not worthy of its name.

I hope the author will stop writing and start a new book. Instead of writing about Zhang Jinyang, let's have a new protagonist! If this continues, all the old readers will disappear!

First, the chapter names are too confusing. I feel it might be better not to use them. I have only seen such confusing chapter names in His Majesty the King's Once Upon a Time in the Spirit Sword Mountain. Secondly, the description of the protagonist's life is so seamless that it feels like there is not even a focus. After all, it is empty after the incident. There is no gap between each chapter. It is all up to the reader to segment it. It is really tiring to read, and the original interest in reading has been worn away.

After reading it for free, I bought dozens more episodes without giving up, but now I have given up. It is indeed a fun book! It's completely like a primary school student's writing technique, and it's like a first grader of junior high school!

Silly waiting for updates, thinking divergent. I have an expectation for Lao Niu, hoping to send him home. If there is a next book, the beginning can throw him into the abyss and become Baphomet. Then activate the flow of the heavens and add some restrictions that prevent the body from entering and exiting other planes at will, so that he can return to all homes when he is finished. _(:3Rz_

There is no priority. There are too many plots in The King of Fighters. There is no need to add water plots. It can be described from the perspective of a bystander. The mystery test is not deeply explored, and the later reading experience is too poor.

The introduction is not engaging. I can't tell from your name or profile what you're writing about, so I have no interest in getting into the trap.

Are there any better super power novels? Please recommend

What's going on? Haven't updated for a long time. Is it broken?

What's going on? I think it's interesting.