Harry Potter's Supreme Glory

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I have found that writers of fan fiction are particularly prone to making mistakes, because in order to be interesting, fans will add some original plots, and some will use characters or plots from other works, but I don't know why they just add villains without adding positive characters. The plot starts to fall apart after writing, either the protagonist is forced to cheat, or the villain is acting decently and has no ability to fight back. In the end, even the author himself does not know how to write it down, and it is either unfinished or a eunuch.

I have read a lot of Harry Potter series, and I like to read this kind of pig's feet in Slytherin. I really hate the kind of books that add Harry to his death after entering Gryffindor.

Miscarriage, still giving birth, Niubi

🐮B. 👴🏻I can't wait to keep watching. I can't help myself every time I update.

This awkward and unexpected emotional line. . .

I've given you all the monthly tickets I've worked so hard to save. Cheers to the author! ! !

Don't worry, if it's good or not, just give up after just a few days. That's not how you are aloof. I hope you can change it. It's already a bit broken. I don't want speed but no quality.

These emotional scenes make me emmm... I really don't know what to say about my mouth! !

Did the author read the original work carefully? The best score is actually A+! ?

I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics. Why did Hermione choose to be the heroine? Are all the other women dead? Or is it that without Hermione, the author can't participate in the main plot? Also, in his previous life, a man in his twenties and thirties was actually interested in an 11-year-old girl. Oh my god! ! This is raising a daughter. I think it's best if this kind of fan fiction doesn't have emotional lines in the early stage, otherwise it will be embarrassing.

? This shouldn't be a harem, right? I feel good about writing orders Hermione👌🏻

There should be Grindelwald appearing in the follow-up, right? After all, he was the man who made Dumbledore jealous.

A eunuch? I finally found a book with a Slytherin protagonist and a setting that I am more interested in. Some books will become eunuchs if you keep them.

The emotional line was handled really badly.

It would be better if Sirius and all the Gryffindors were dead.

Nowadays, I mostly use gift coins to read books, and there are very few books that I can read without gift coins. After seeing the update, I subscribed without waiting for the bonus coins. This is a good book.

The biggest problem is that pretending to be B is too blunt and too neutral. Chapter 7: Forced to go faster than flying or something like that. . Also system flow. . . The effects written by the author are also seriously disturbing.

Can I say that I didn't update it the same day I saw it? 😭😭😭 Finally, I saw the eunuch (?) I saw that day.

The emotional line at the end is so messed up that it makes me irritated.

... This is the most rubbish book I have ever read among fans. Where did the author find so many sailors...

Your introduction may be able to persuade me to quit. To make Dumbledore jealous... The protagonist is gay? Falling in love with Greenwald? Then your book should be placed on a female channel! !

How can I put it this way? This book is very good at writing about Hermione's emotional line. The repeated entanglements and estrangements in it are slightly sweet as misunderstandings are revealed bit by bit. But the author hasn't finished writing TJ. I really want to pick up the knife.

You can actually read so many chapters?

I was a little confused when I saw the back

How can I put it this way? This book has friendship, love, and family ties, but this is also the flaw of this book. It keeps making sense and makes it confusing. I can only say that the author's writing power is not enough. I think it is a pity that this book is too eunuch. In the love between Hermione and the protagonist, there is a connection between our true ideal and reality. Whether it is the "male bestie" phenomenon of a trio of male partners or the protagonist's dedication for love, the author has truly written a love into a **. To be honest, I have been abused to the point of being abused. This is also the success of this book. Here, I also wish the author can be with me People who like love and kill each other and spend the rest of their beautiful lives. . . .