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I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

It's good-looking, eh, the author's writing didn't make me feel impetuous, and the writing style touched my cute side. Come on. 😊

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

The novel is not bad, but the main character clearly intends to take care of his family in his previous life without being curious since he was a child, but he prefers to take risks and commit suicide.

Everyone is welcome to point out bugs and errors! Just leave a message.

Don't criticize the author, I think it's okay. Come on, I'm invested.

Crazy and forced foreshadowing is really embarrassing! ! And that wrench? Is it wrong for a very powerful surgeon to manifest a wrench as a supernatural weapon? ?

Characteristics of the male protagonist: 1. Reckless man. Many times, there were only one or two people who got by so recklessly. He did not make any preparations and did not report to his teammates. He can survive until now thanks to the aura of the protagonist. 2. Stupid, because he was "careless" and got into danger more than once and made no progress at all. There was no reflection afterward. He was completely unlike an adult. And Doubifeng's inner complaints are not at all relevant to this article, and some of the explanations are too wordy. The only advantage is probably that there are no messy emotional scenes.

The author has a problem, maybe. 1. All the supporting characters know about the extraordinary weapons, but he doesn't tell the readers, and treats the readers as idiots. 2. He only talks about the Gu family of the protagonist, but doesn't even meet him before going to protect the family. I think it should be Chapter 10, and the whole family of the protagonist should be dead. 3. The protagonist's ability is inexplicable. He just got out of the extraordinary weapon, and he didn't tell the reason why. 4. The detective,..., Haha

On the first day, I'm Allen, I think this thing is a little bit dangerous, I want to go and see it, ah, it's so dangerous. The next day, there was another thing. I felt it was a little dangerous, but I am extraordinary, so it was no problem. I wanted to take a look, ah, it was really dangerous. The third day. . . .

It's a relatively failed imitation. It says it's about being stubborn, but it flies up and down, seeking death everywhere. It's not happy until death. If the protagonist's aura is not forcibly turned on, the grass on the protagonist's grave will be more than ten meters high!

There are several pictures of what kind of weapon the protagonist condenses (✪▽✪), but they don't even mention it. The suspense is created just like Shi

What are you talking about? The author just told "The Lord of Mysteries" using his own understanding.

This author seems to be so confident that those who don't like swords and weapons will like wrenches🔧. All I can say is, it's so disgusting, I don't want to read it.

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. For example, extraordinary weapons are pointless to set up suspense. I haven't found what they are in dozens of chapters. It's so long that it makes people sick. This is not an acceptable point to set up suspense. This is the first time I've seen a novel that can drag out a weapon for dozens of chapters. Forget it, I'm withdrawing it.

Are you here to write about the old days? Are you no longer imitating the King of Soldiers style or the Good-for-Nothing style? Speaking of the bad genres, I rarely see works that can compete with the original genres, and successful works must be innovative. It's really not just casual steampunk with an inexplicable fantasy color, it's Cthulhu. Real works of this kind must have secrets hidden in history, the struggles and brilliance of small people, and the glory and darkness of big people. They must learn to reveal the extraordinary instead of using so-called extraordinary power to kill and pretend to be pigs and eat tigers. It is best to let us see the greatness of this era and the hidden crises within it. Using the protagonist as the point and the plot as the line, slowly fill this star sea scroll. Finally, let me show you the current Reading Network. Following the bandwagon: The story begins - the protagonist wakes up - takes revenge - becomes stronger - kills the enemy - provokes the enemy - becomes stronger - kills the enemy - repeatedly - invincible in the world (catalyst: woman, family, treasure, survive) Evidence of no plagiarism: Goldfinger is different) Follows the trend of fantasy: the protagonist wakes up - revenge - becomes stronger - kills the enemy - provokes the enemy - becomes stronger - kills the enemy - repeatedly - invincible in the world (catalyst: female) People, family, treasures, live) Evidence of no plagiarism: Goldfinger is different) Follow the trend city: the protagonist wakes up - revenge - becomes stronger - kills enemies - provokes enemies - becomes stronger - kills enemies - repeatedly - invincible in the world (catalyst: women, family, treasures, survive) Evidence of no plagiarism: Goldfinger is different) Follow the trend city: the protagonist wakes up - takes revenge - becomes stronger - kills enemies - provokes enemies - Become stronger - Kill enemies - Repeatedly - Invincible in the world (Catalyst: women, family, treasures, survive) (Evidence of no plagiarism: Gold Finger is different) Follow the trend of martial arts: The protagonist wakes up - Revenge - Become stronger - Kill enemies - Provoke enemies - Become stronger - Kill enemies - Repeatedly - Invincible in the world (Catalyst: Women, Family, Treasures, Live on) (Evidence of no plagiarism: Golden Finger) means different) Now come and follow the old days: the protagonist wakes up - takes revenge - becomes stronger - kills enemies - provokes enemies - becomes stronger - kills enemies - repeatedly - invincible (catalyst: women, family, treasures, survive) (No evidence of plagiarism: Goldfinger is different) This reminds me of the three major natures of human beings, and there are hundreds of Three Kingdoms games that have changed their skin but not their flesh for more than ten years. Reading is a very noble thing. People who are good at reading were respected by others in ancient times. Now, why do some people feel so unprofessional when it comes to novels? Why do people feel that novels can be on the same level as junk games (non-e-sports)? Is it caused by books such as One Hundred Years of Solitude, Harry Potter, Red Rock, and Four Generations Together? Or are you so-called authors who write books without using your brain, so which book became popular? Don't you feel ashamed when you see that (authored by so-and-so.) On the cover? Writing a book is never a happy thing, don't force yourself, this is not suitable for you, just like recyclable garbage should not be placed in the pond (it pollutes the environment and wastes resources)... (If this is a serious business, what will happen next is that those who used to wait and see finally understand the laws of the market, so they start to follow the trend shamelessly. And the amount, plagiarism and shamelessness of this group of waste are often amazing. ----"Trafficking Crime"-Three Days and Two Sleeps) Finally, all the above content has nothing to do with this book. Come on, author, don't be defeated by garbage, and don't belittle yourself and become garbage.

To put it mildly, the setting of the Lord of Mysteries that this book draws from is too rigid. Many paragraphs of content are more like forced explanations, which are a bit stupid. The book can actually be better. Don't worry about copying the setting, and add more other things to it.

In this weird world, the protagonist is too naive and not strict enough. There are too many questions. You must know that this is not the world of ordinary people. The more you ask, the more you will be exposed. The city government is not enough. Compared to the protagonist of Lord of Mysteries, he looks like a primary school student. It can kill you, but you don't even know how. 😥😥😥😥😥

The writing was okay at the beginning, but I don't know what the author was thinking about turning over and over the broken weapons to make things mysterious, which seemed very disgusting.

The sense of déjà vu in Lord of Mysteries is too strong. In terms of the world view and setting, I can watch it as a fan of Mysteries. However, the protagonist's experience, family, and how to enter the transcendent world are all too similar to Mysteries. I don't know if the author has any innovations in the future. Otherwise, it is better to watch Mysteries again.

The protagonist's brain is getting more and more exhausted, and the more he looks at it later, the more he looks like a **.

The weapon wrench has nothing to do with doctors, it's too childish

It's really uncomfortable to look at the names. Sometimes I use last name, sometimes I use first name, and sometimes I use full name. And then the names are all very similar. Every time I see a person's name, I have to look at it for a long time to realize who it is. It really affects the reading experience.

After reading Chapter 30, this pig's foot has no independent plan and follows the trend from beginning to end. Since in the extraordinary world, a brainless weakling wanders around without thinking about improving his strength, such people in movies usually don't live for ten minutes.

The plot is so similar to Lord of Mysteries, the routines are exactly the same

It's okay, but the plot development is too intense. It should be slowed down. It takes a few years to do what others spent a thousand years doing. Isn't it ridiculous? People are not smarter than you. At the end, the appendix is ​​gone. Some explanations are too redundant.

The writing is very practical, but I think the number of words is a bit short. It would be nice to have more words to show the characters individually or others. The mystery is slow, but this book is fast. This book can actually be written for a second part or something like that or a new character in the same world. I especially hope that the later stages will be slower.

I like this type of book A novel with clear logic