There's a World in My Belly

What's the point of the supporting characters' attribute panels? We're focused on the main character; we can't remember the supporting characters' attribute panels, so why bother writing them down to pad our word count?

The second one struck me as a complete mess, with no order whatsoever.

It feels weird. If gods and demons are fighting, wouldn't the protagonist get a stomachache?

Another novel where the creator god himself intervenes and gets utterly crushed by the people of his own world!

I knew the book's style from those three golden chapters. A mastermind behind the creation, a protagonist with a goofy, unrealistic, and mindless imagination. I guess there are plot holes I won't be able to fill; the start was too awesome. The idea of ​​imitating and raising all of humanity... Well, that's about as imaginative as it is.

I've read many mainstream novels in the creation and farming genres, and while I like them, none of them really impressed me (including several major works, and this one isn't either). I think that after six years of reading, it's time for me to seriously write half a book (I don't know if I can continue writing, but I'll still keep going). Author——OAA

You've started off with a promise that's hard to keep up with. You might as well have gotten a system at the beginning. For the sake of your next game plan, all I can say is your excuse is lame. Starting with a system and a planet as a reward, and if the planet's deserted, just set it up as a game, and you're done! 😓 This is truly a game-disappointing start.

It's a mess, and my head is throbbing.

This is all a mess, what on earth is this?

The protagonist's character design felt too contrived; he seemed immature. By chapters 5 and 6...