Grandmaster of High Martial Arts

In fact, this book is quite well written, but it feels a bit deliberately cowardly. Of course, you may feel that you want to set the character of the protagonist in this book to have an ideological standard of "I will not offend others unless you offend me", but you have to think about it first. The setting of this book is about martial arts, and using martial arts to enter Taoism. , Warriors must fight, and others have obviously provoked you, but you still think it's okay to endure it. After all, when writing novels, we don't have to follow real life routines too deliberately. Writing books is mainly for readers, and the author must be able to make the right amount of money whether he is writing a book part-time or full-time. You can change the character of the protagonist a little, make it stronger, and there is no need to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. Although this routine is easier to write, it is actually a bit uncomfortable for us readers. After all, in real life, you have to tolerate everything, and when you read a novel, you have to endure it again and again. It feels uncomfortable. Of course, I just have a few suggestions. It doesn't matter if you want to change it or not. I just found it very comfortable in the past and said that I would order it all. But if the protagonist's temperament is still concerned, I will abandon the book. After all, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. If some people like to watch this kind of cowards pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, I am free, but I don't like it. I am a straight person. If I think it can be done, I will support it. If it doesn't work, I will say it. It's your business whether to change it or not, and it's my business whether it's settled or not. After all, there are still few books that are both enjoyable to read and meet IQ, and old readers are still quite picky. If you look at my book review history, you will know that I rarely write such a review, which shows that I am quite optimistic about this book.

A reminder to the author. In fact, this book is already well written. Don't be too picky and make it worse later on. There are many books in Qidian that failed like this. The most important thing is to persist and ensure that the quality of the later parts is the same as the previous ones. There is no need to be too deliberate in pursuing the pleasure of pretending to slap someone in the face or something like that. Not flirting but flirting is real flirting. Come on, author, take care of your health.

To be honest, this book is not bad. I read more than a hundred chapters in one go, and then I felt something was wrong, so I read it from the beginning and found that the author had many problems in writing this book. Maybe I didn't speak well, so don't blame me. 1. At the beginning of the book, the protagonist is first given a rebirth trick, and then... No more. I don't understand the meaning of this rebirth. Let's talk about giving people a sense of substitution. This parallel world does not feel like there is any sense of substitution. Maybe the author has learned from the world's best martial arts. Although I have only read the beginning of the book, but I know that in the parallel world where the protagonist is reborn, there are great masters, horses, etc. Who have a strong sense of immersion, okay? This book starts with rebirth and then throws it away; 2. The protagonist is not easy to mix without being killed. Maybe the author also felt that the rebirth game is useless, so he opened a system kill for the protagonist. First, It can be purified, then transformed and simulated. In fact, the protagonist uses the purification function to purify the elixir, and then improves himself in various ways. The purified blood is easy to control. He can find the fragments to obtain source energy, and obtain the source energy through the fragments to purify the black and yellow alloys and azure alloys. These are all written in a very interesting way and are very comfortable to watch. The protagonist also He is not the kind of second batch of protagonists who are good at everything in terms of human behavior and logic. Later, he plans to open a shell company to clean up and purify the elixir... Then the author starts to let himself go. Some companies are taken over in one stroke, and some systems are kicked away. There are fewer and fewer scenes in the later systems, and the author writes with a stroke of his pen. The situation immediately began to turn... 3. In order to advance the plot and create conflicts, the protagonist was asked to break into "Xie Yu" and kill people. As a result, Xie Yu failed to kill and was killed instead. He couldn't help but was "digested" by the protagonist. There is no problem here. It can be said that "Xie Yu" is the introduction to the subsequent series of conflicts. First, his father takes revenge. The protagonist pretends to be Xie Yu and kills his father. Then his genius sister takes revenge. The protagonist is forced to be sent to another world. Then I really can't accept the plot. "Xie Yu" is not dead. The protagonist asks him to seize someone else's body. Then "Xie Yu" realizes the truth and makes a decisive decision for the sake of the righteousness of the earth. Determined to develop in another world and contribute to the earth (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻, are you going to date Xie Yu's genius sister later on as the protagonist? I doubt the author's intention in setting up the warrior at the beginning to be able to have three wives and four concubines. 4. This book was not well written until the protagonist entered university as the top scorer in the martial arts exam. Yes, including the freshman challenge that follows is very interesting, but I have always had a few questions. First, as the protagonist is the top scorer in the martial arts examination, why did he not choose the first among the three top martial arts schools in the country, but choose the third Jinwu, and then rush into the territory of Xie Xiaowan, who regards him as the enemy who killed his father and brother? The only thing is Xie Xiaowan's ruthless revenge, forcing the protagonist to run away to another world in embarrassment. Second, why is the author so anxious to change the map? Whether it is to let the protagonist choose another martial arts school to develop steadily for a while before facing Xie Xiaowan, or to let the protagonist and Xie Xiaowan fall in love and kill each other in the same school, it is best to let the protagonist pass? The system's various naughty operations make Xie both love and hate it. These are all interesting to see and can write a long and exciting plot. But why is the author so anxious to change the map? The protagonist was forced into another world within two days of entering college; 5. Just change the map and look forward to the protagonist's development. Then he came back and trampled Xie under his feet and humiliated him, and then I felt that the writing was a bit broken. The author introduced a new system of practice: White Immortal, Qing Immortal, Golden Immortal, Original Wish Pearl... It looked so familiar to me at first glance. The protagonist of the book seemed to be called Niu Youde... It doesn't matter, the writing is wonderful, who cares about you, copy of the text The leader is almost bald and he still becomes a great god, but the author brother, you are really a bit confused when you write this. The martial arts spiritual cultivation and soul cultivation, the protagonist's martial arts cultivation has not started yet, the soul cultivation has begun, and he has started spiritual cultivation again, not to mention the hammer here and there, the protagonist is very fast in spiritual cultivation, and then the author probably I also thought of the title of this book, which cannot let spiritual practice take over the main role, so with a stroke of a pen, in two sentences, the martial arts cultivator has reached the fourth level and is close to the fifth level... I don't know what the author's idea is. Anyway, I feel a bit broken. It's the same sentence. The author wrote it too hastily. If the protagonist is allowed to develop slowly on the earth, Attend classes in college and read books to supplement the basics, go on missions to catch evil cultivators, then go to the small world to experience it, and then participate in several major martial arts school challenges. By the way, the entire martial arts system will be expanded, the functions of the system will be expanded, and the protagonist will be stabilized to the fifth or sixth level before contacting other worlds to start a new training system. The whole book will be much more exciting at this point. I guess many people, including the author, are a bit scolded: I give you the pen, you write it! I shamelessly said: I can't write it, I have already written it. This thing is actually easier said than done. I tried to hold it in front of the computer for a long time and couldn't write a few words. So I can understand the author's hard work, but after reading the novel more, I can see some good and bad things. I hope the author can write better. In fact, the first part of the book is really good, but there are some shortcomings in the second part that make me feel angry.

Why can't I invest even if I read for 10 minutes? . Someone tell me!

To be honest, I wanted to write about martial arts, but in the end it was mixed with a plot that I thought was very interesting. The flavor changed from defending the family and the country to intrigues, and from a battle film to a palace battle drama. Martial arts is your own, isn't that bad? It just happened that he took the path of another world from the beginning. Especially after entering Wuhan University, this book is written about internal strife, and the abuse of the master is serious. The protagonist, to put it harshly, is running away to the wild world. The writing of Gong Dou is really exciting, but there is no shortage of this book. There is really no shortage.

I don't know, so a low-level person can take the body at will? Wouldn't it be enough to just seize the offspring of a big shot? The whole world belongs to them? Also, a country full of scum makes me wonder how the hell this country even exists? There are so many scum ahead! The simplest country that tolerates even the most basic sectarian opposition forces and retreats everywhere? Then this country has been destroyed long ago! From time to time, evil cults come out to cause chaos.

I want to know how many people have been persuaded to quit by this introduction.

Can you watch this thing? This is the first time that minions can take over the protagonist's body in the early stage. They can take over the body and the soul cannot be dealt with. Then in the middle and later stages, wouldn't the protagonist's mind be filled with the souls of the enemy? The system is useless. This is the first time that I have seen a system that does not even protect the sea of ​​consciousness. Is this protagonist not the one named Xie? The most disgusting thing is these women, the one surnamed Huang is snobbish, the protagonist can also have an affair, the one surnamed Tang asked the protagonist to be an undercover agent and still doesn't trust the protagonist? I think the one surnamed Tang is an undercover agent of a cult, right? Xie, this kind of unreasonable woman is the most disgusting. The character was set up several years ago, and she is still bringing it out now? At first, she was angry and unreasonable, but then she found out that her whole family was a cult, so why didn't she mess with the protagonist? Tang was also involved, so why didn't he mess with her? To put it bluntly, she was a bully and afraid of the hard. According to the author's description of the protagonist, she would never be killed later. This university is also awesome, with all kinds of students forming gangs, and there is no punishment for abolishing someone. If the top universities are like this, then other universities are not worse? If all students are like this, this country will never end?

The introduction is good, but the content of the book is so vicious that I couldn't even read through 10 chapters...

I'm so cowardly. I've obviously been able to fight, but I still have to use my full strength and get knocked down. It's so disgusting. The Five Tigers really can't stand it anymore.