A Thousand Dreams Across Ten Thousand Worlds

It was going really well, but then that woman showed up and forcibly fed me poison. Oh well, if this one's gone, there'll be another. Gotta go!

After reading ten chapters, I realized that showing off to someone of the same level is considered showing off, but showing off to someone who is many times weaker than me in the Golden Core stage is nothing.

This novel is terrible. 1: A sage always likes to show off in front of those who have reached the Golden Core stage. 2: The entire human race has pinned all their hopes on the protagonist, but he starts by showing off and attacking other sects right from the beginning. He's not experienced at all.

The worlds chosen in the synopsis are quite discouraging, and I'm worried about whether I can handle them. "Mortal Flow" is about ordinary people defying the heavens, "Covering the Sky" is about being invincible and self-reliant, "Shepherd of the Gods" is about daring to change the world and break the gods in one's heart, and "Emperor's Domination" is about an invincible old monster sweeping…

To be honest, it was frustrating to watch. The protagonist had no idea how to deal with these cultivators, and his various methods seemed mindless.

Why do you have to show off and then slap someone in the face? Do you think that's satisfying? Or maybe you shouldn't write anything at all.

First, the cultivation system is chaotic and not concise or clear enough. Second, the protagonist is unaware of the plot and lacks immersion. What fans love most in fanfiction is that sense of immersion; if your book lacks this, how can you continue reading? This is the most important factor. 80% Of failed fanfiction works because the protagonist is unaware of the plot.

The Falling Cloud Sect is only struggling to stay afloat thanks to its Supreme Elder? What nonsense! This elder is at the Nascent Soul stage; there are only a handful of him in the entire mortal realm. You're telling me he's struggling? Are you kidding me?

A common problem among authors in the 2010s: they all wished they could split a 3,000-word chapter into 1,500 words, add a few more words and it would be a new chapter. The key is that they also update twice a day. A common problem among authors in the 1915s is that they all wish they could split a 2,000-word piece into 1,000 words, add a few more words and it becomes a chapter.

Chen Luo'er, why did you write her if she's not the female lead? Does this mean every woman who appears has to have a romantic relationship with the protagonist? The way you wrote the romance is truly speechless.