A Thousand Dreams Across Ten Thousand Worlds

It was good at first, but that woman showed up and force-fed her with poison. Forget it, there will be another one if this one is gone. I won't go.

After reading ten chapters, pretending to be cool with a boss of the same level is called pretending, but pretending to be cool with Jin Dan, who is countless times weaker than himself, is useless.

This novel is not good at all: 1: A saint always likes to show off in front of people in the golden elixir stage 2: It is said that the entire human race puts its treasure on the protagonist, but the protagonist just starts showing off and beats other sects. Not sophisticated at all. 3: After making other people's sect into a mess, others invite the protagonist to be the elder behind the scenes just like no one else. The protagonist agreed immediately. 4: For two attendants, I will keep writing about the inner activities of the attendants, and also write about the psychological activities of an idiot female attendant. 5: Someone in the sect said that they want to open the Xutian Palace, and they want the protagonist to go. The protagonist agreed immediately. 6: The ** female attendant said that she wanted to change and wanted the protagonist to take her there. That female attendant is in the same realm as a soldier, so what's the use of taking her there? The protagonist also found a bunch of people who had no excuses to take the beauty with them. 7: Since you have traveled so long and are already in the realm of saints, you know that you can travel, so you should probably have a plan. However, I have seen that so many protagonists are led by others. Wherever there is a fight, the protagonist rushes over and pretends to be a chicken when he hears the Xutian Temple is opened. 8: Does it mean what others say? He also said that if you cultivate to the realm of a saint, you don't need to pay attention to other people's conspiracies. After watching it for so long, I feel that the protagonist, a saint, is one of those golden elixir stage thugs. Wherever you point, hit an atomic bomb! These are so well written. If you delete this book review of mine, then I will post it every night to see if you are tired or if I am tired.

I feel that the world chosen in the introduction is very discouraging, and I am worried about whether I can control it. Mortal Stream is about ordinary people defying the sky, Zhe Tian is about being invincible, self-reliant and self-reliant, Mu Shen Ji is about daring to change the world and break the gods in your heart, Emperor Domination is about old monsters who are invincible and conquer the nine heavens and ten places. Let's talk about ordinary people's time travel first, and then go to Zhe Tian after the mortals who go first. First of all, there is a problem with the order of the Shepherd God. I don't know how the author dealt with it. According to my understanding, when a person who can travel through time goes to other worlds, he will first feel doubts, fear, and indifference about his own time travel, whether it is caused by human beings or his own talent. What's more, the protagonist is from the divine world and he is a saint and he doesn't know about other worlds. It's very problematic to first travel to a mortal and experience the world that covers the sky and then to the God of Shepherd. After experiencing so many worlds, the strong men and experiences seen can make a person in awe. How can you break the god in your heart if you let the protagonist go to the God of Shepherd? Besides, the protagonist himself is a high-ranking person in the divine world and has never experienced the life of an ordinary person. Let him go to Mu Shen Ji to help Qin Mu, break his superior class and reduce his own interests. This is a reason to persuade him to quit. Then he goes to Emperor Domination. This is a personal show of Li Qiye. You never know how many trump cards King Li has. World Lang may have misunderstood his own strength. Therefore, the world ordering and world selection in the introduction are very discouraging.

In other words, it's frustrating to watch. The protagonist doesn't know how to deal with these cultivators, and even all the methods he uses feel like they are mindless.

Why do you have to show off and slap in the face? Do you think this is better, or don't write it?

The first point of drug testing is that the training system is confusing and not concise and clear enough. Secondly, the protagonist does not know the plot and does not have a sense of immersion. What you read when reading fan fiction is that sense of immersion. If you write a book that does not even have this, how can you continue to read it? This is the most important thing. 80% Of the fan novels on the street do not know the plot. Thirdly, the character of the protagonist is okay. As long as your plot has a strong sense of immersion and the character is good, it will be successful. 80% The rest is writing and publicity.

The Luoyun Sect is only supported by the Taishang Elder? What the hell, this elder is in the incarnation stage, and there are only a few in the whole world. You tell me how hard it is, how funny it is.

A common problem among authors in the 10s was that they wanted to split a 3,000-word chapter into a 1,500-word chapter, and then add more points to create a new chapter. The key is to keep the beast of two chapters. A common problem among authors in the 1915s was that they would like to split a 2,000-word article into a 1,000-word article, and then add a chapter. The key is that it is still a beast of one update, and occasionally two updates. Look at one of the old representatives of old authors, Eagle At least three chapters a day, about 5,000 words per chapter, and basically 15,000 words updated every day. This is still the later stage. In the early stage, there were four chapters a day, and 20,000 updates a day. It completely crushed you, and there was no problem with the quality.

Chen Luo'er, if she's not the heroine, why would you write about her? Do all the women who appear have to have an affair with pig's feet? You wrote this with such emotion, I am really speechless.