Shadow of Kirigakure

It is recommended not to imitate Chidori and Maruko. The protagonist's plug-ins are plot and three-tails. Developing water escape is the way to go.

I have always felt that Water Release is not weak. It would be great if we vigorously develop Water Release. Look at how powerful Kisame is!

I disagree with the two opinions written by the author in the first chapter. First, Terumi Mei's combat power is scummy, which made me laugh. The author gave an example of Terumi Mei and Madara being beaten to death. Darling, you let Itachi and Madara beat you, and Itachi also got beaten in the same way. It's not that Terumi Mei is weak, but Madara is too strong. Second, the strength of the tailed beasts is arranged according to the number of tails. The nine-tails is indeed the strongest, and the eight-tails is indeed the second, but There is really not much difference in strength between the other seven tailed beasts. I even feel that the first-tailed beast is third in strength (it has its own sealed chakra), and the seven-tailed beast I feel is the weakest. It only has phosphorus as its special ability. Moreover, the first-tailed beast can still improve its strength in the desert, and the three-tailed beast can also improve its strength in the sea. Only looking at the tails, only the nine-tailed beast can do as well. Who recognizes the other tailed beasts?

To be honest, I have always felt that Kirigakure is a pity. The number of blood stains is the largest outside Konoha, and the geographical location is good. If you enter, you can invade the land, and if you retreat, you can defend your country. Others may not be able to fight Kirigakure at sea. With such good conditions, the misfortune of the blood mist policy forced on him has disappeared. In the later stages of the plot, apart from the Mizukage, there is no decent master (except for the traitorous ninja). It is really a pity. Konoha should be about the same as Kirigakure if nothing else happens, because Uchiha and Senju seem to be gone, and the other bloodstains are really not that good. If nothing else happens, the Tenseigan cannot be opened. There is no decent one in Konoha. If the protagonist group had not appeared, the real Konoha would have been gone, and it would have been a disaster for the Third Generation and Danzo to join forces.

I have read a lot of novels, and whenever I go to Hokage, I have to get meatballs, including the author of this book. I think meatballs are awesome? Rasengan: Muji Ninjutsu, created by the 4th generation, recorded in the Sealed Book. Jiraiya, Kakashi didn't know if he could. Then, we need to know the environment in which Rasengan was created, because this technique fits the fighting style of the 4th generation, Flying Thunder God + Maruko. The question is, Jiraiya, why is it rarely used? Didn't you rub it when you beat Payne? Why? It's because it doesn't fit with Jiraiya's fighting style. Jiraiya's battles are almost all Ninjutsu Todoroki. In this case, why did the author sacrifice the near and far and insist on making Rasengan? The protagonist seems to be the limit of blood. Isn't it good to develop your own?

By the way, the protagonist seems to be a dwarf.

Tj, it's a pity, this is the first time I've seen a fanfic with Yagura as the protagonist.

Although I haven't read it, I still want to remind the author that there are only interests between countries, yes, only naked interests, so the protagonist should not do everything possible to kneel down and lick Konoha.

One recommendation ticket every day, why is it getting slower and slower? ? ? ?

Water Lord? Flat-chested little water girl? ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿)

Personal suggestion, just a personal suggestion. The author can add less emoticons. How can I put it this way? When I was in high school, I thought it was pretty good to read emojis. After I went to college, I found it okay to post emojis occasionally, but it seemed awkward to add a emoji in every sentence or two...

Looking at the title of this book, you can tell that you will 100% fail to sign the contract if you don't change the name.

The art of water mirror is really powerful! But it's also a waste of chakra

I just read it. The author wants to use water pressure. I wonder if you know about Water Prison Bullet and Water Prison Hall Mu (Kisame's transformation move, the real name has been forgotten.)

A bunch of words with unclear meanings, coupled with the occasional unclear sentences, make me, a person with slight obsessive-compulsive disorder, very uncomfortable to read. The most speechless thing about fan fiction is to add some unexplained oral habits to the protagonist.

The Perfect Jinchuuriki is basically not afraid of ordinary kaleidoscope illusions, right?

Damn, did you also post this book on QQ Reading? I have collected them all, I think they are very beautiful.

The strongest water escape in Naruto is definitely the steam power of Oni Langengetsu. It has high damage, high flexibility, great freedom, and fast speed. Plus Yin Escape Mirage. He is worthy of being the strongest Mizukage, with top-notch combat power at the "Kage" level, on the same level as the third generation of thunder and the second generation of fire.

At first, it looked a bit confusing, but it turned out that it was not a book from Konoha or something like that, but the result was indeed the same. Directly eunuch

It is recommended to change the title of the novel, otherwise it will be impossible to sign the contract. Cannot contain words like Naruto

I think puppetry is pretty good. In the later stages of development, a Gundam may be developed.

Before the protagonist leaves, why don't you give the third generation a secret about the dirty land of Yagura? It feels pretty cool.

Kidnapping children😏

There is a magical family Yuta can add to it

You might want to consider the second-generation Mizukage's explosive power of evaporation.

There's nothing wrong with this book. It's a human work that involves infringement issues. It's okay if no one sues, but if someone does sue you, you'll definitely have to play with it. As long as there is a relationship of interest, it will not work

It's a pity to wait for the new book