Super Ultimate Enhancement

I've read nine chapters, and I've realized the author's character development is truly terrible. Putting aside the protagonist's character design, even the protagonist's mother's character is poorly designed. First, the protagonist's mother was expelled from a prominent family. As a member of such a family, the author failed to portray her in terms of knowledge, background, and temperament.

I can't read any more of these 28 chapters, so I'm leaving. I've taken a serious look at your grades and I'm waiting for your smug response.

This is a semi-new author's work, a beginner's story, goodbye.

I saw the contents of this novel. My hand holding the phone trembled as I tapped the comment button. My typing hand shakily clicked on the discussion section. The input method appeared before my eyes. At that moment, a curse rang in my mind—I don't know if I should say it? Are you really an experienced author? The way you handle the plot. The way you describe the plot. Why is it so toxic?

The opening and plot are disgusting and clichéd; I'm sick of this kind of content on Qidian. This book is better suited for Chuanshu; it's destined to flop on Qidian's main site.

I'm speechless. This book is addictive, but it has a strange magic that made me finish the Heavenly Dao World exam. Then I couldn't continue. I'll just let it rest for now. Occasionally reading a mindless, addictive novel is a novel experience.

I've been following this for so long, and I'd like to offer some suggestions to the author, but I don't know if they'll be taken into consideration. I've read through most of the book reviews, and the following points are the main ones. First point: The personality color description is too extreme.

I've finished reading over ninety chapters. Overall, the beginning was quite toxic, giving the feeling that the whole world was against the protagonist (including the protagonist's mother), which was a bit depressing and made me feel uncomfortable. Later, the image of the protagonist's mother was reversed, which actually felt more appropriate. After watching it, all that remained in my memory was the suppressed protagonist and the protagonist's mother, whose image was ultimately reversed. 😅

You're all wrong. The most important thing about this novel is the reviews. The reviews and the novel together make it truly interesting.

The author says, "Say whatever you want, you're just deliberately trying to criticize me, but I'm not going to change it!"