Super Ultimate Enhancement

When I read Chapter 9, I found that the author's character setting was really poor. Let's not talk about the setting of the protagonist. The setting of the protagonist is unreasonable. First point, the protagonist's mother was kicked out by a big family, so as a person from a big family, the author did not write about the knowledge, background, and temperament at all. Instead, she wrote about the same mentality and knowledge as ordinary people in the city. I will not give examples. Second point, as a member of a big family and with a high bloodline (the author wrote this, I am not lying), he actually has no cultivation at all, which is very unreasonable. The article does not mention that the protagonist's mother's cultivation was abolished. Although I didn't read it carefully, I can still be sure of it, so it is a failure. You might as well just set the protagonist's family to be ordinary civilians, and then your character's setting will look very reasonable. If you choose to be a member of a big family and you can't express that feeling, it seems like a poisonous point. I can't comment too much. After all, I just read 9 chapters and I can't help but say it. Taken together, the plot is old, the character setting is poor, the plot is average, there are no highlights, and it is not attractive.

I can't stand these 28 chapters anymore and retreated. . I'm taking a serious look at your grades, waiting for you to poop

The author, who is a newbie, can't say anything. I'm a novice. Farewell.

I saw the content of this novel. The hand holding the phone trembled as he clicked on the comment. My typing hands were trembling and I clicked on the discussion area. The input method appeared before my eyes. At this time, I had a question in my mind: "Mom sells batches, I don't know if I should take it seriously?" Are you really an old author? The way the plot is handled. Describe the plot. Why is it so poisonous? It's easy for you to obtain the Poison King this time. Your novel is very popular. I didn't seem interested in other novels, so I clicked on them directly. When I read your novel, I really wanted to curse people.

The disgusting and vulgar beginning and plot made me almost vomit after reading this kind of content on Qidian. This book is suitable for listing on Chuangshi, and I decided to put it on the main website of Qidian.

I'm a Buddha. Although this book is poisonous, it has an inexplicable magic power that made me pass the test of the world of heaven and earth. Then I couldn't stand it anymore. I'll read it first. Occasionally reading poisonous articles that don't require thinking is also a novel experience.

I have been following this book for so long, and I wanted to give the author some suggestions, but I didn't know if I would adopt them, so I read the book reviews in general. It is nothing more than the following points. The first point: The character description is too serious. The old monster has lived a lifetime, gets angry at every turn, and is moved to tears by every little thing. Second point: The division of levels is seriously unclear. In the early days, it was only said that blood level can be cultivated faster. Later, I saw that level 9 cannot beat level 8, and level 3 cannot beat level 2. The third point: The IQ of the supporting characters is too low, and they can be easily tricked. The fourth point: There is no strict classification of the levels of items. In the later stage of writing like this, I don't know which item is good, and the price system directly collapses. Advantages: The theme is relatively new, with the power of blood and totems, etc. The enhanced golden finger is also good and rarely used. How to improve: Just change the map and re-edit all the background characters. For example, after this whole situation is solved, and then you think you are the best person, suddenly an outsider comes and instantly kills all the old monsters you thought before, and he is very young. You only know after you step out of this small circle. It turns out that this is the starting point of martial arts, it can only be regarded as an introduction. This place can also round up the trap of the old monster. The reason why the character is colorful is because it has been practiced for a lifetime and it is at the entry level, so naturally it has the character of a little gangster. Changing the map can throw away all the previous mess and sort it out again. It is best to re-list the martial arts level, equipment level, and price calculation before entering a new map, and then it will be reborn. Sometimes a good book may not necessarily be the best-selling one. Is the ultimate goal of writing to recognize the author's writing style or to recognize the story of a book? Summarizing some of the works of the great masters from the starting point, almost all of them recognize the author, so I think it is not important how you write it in the early stage. If you write it and readers like it, your channels will be opened, and then you can enter the master zone and truly write your own works. Come on 💪 I hope to see you in the master zone, and I will continue to support you.

I have finished reading more than ninety chapters. Overall, the beginning is quite vicious. There is a feeling that the whole world is against the protagonist (including the protagonist's mother). It is a bit depressing and makes people feel uncomfortable. Later, the image of the protagonist's mother was reversed, and it felt more appropriate. After reading it, the only memories left for me are the suppressed protagonist and the protagonist's mother who finally reversed her image. 😅

You are all wrong. The most important thing about this novel is to read the reviews. The sum of the reviews and the novel is what makes it truly interesting.

The author said that it doesn't matter what you say, you are just trying to criticize me, but I won't change it anyway!