The Heavens Descend

Heizi's new book is finally out The original disaster made my blood boil with excitement, and it echoed back and forth, and most of the foreshadowing was recycled. It was fun to read, but not brainless! The current book is also a new pit that Heizi has been planning for a long time. I am really looking forward to it!

In the real world without human nature, separated by dozens and hundreds of meters above and below ground, humanity has completely disappeared. I think the official government at that time was no longer the official government now, and the people were not the same people as they are now. They were full of indifference, just like the black people in backward areas of Africa, without compassion. It's just a world separated by half a world and only a few floors apart. The former is caused by distance and the latter is caused by strength. This is a retrograde society. A world without benevolent leaders will be dark. I'd love to see if the author will write a protagonist who is complicit or indifferent after climbing to the top, or if he will write a protagonist who becomes stronger and changes the concept of discrimination between superiors and subordinates. Although the protagonist who chooses to change looks like a virgin, I think the world will be better with positive energy!

You probably want to write something like apocalypse prediction mixed with unlimited flow, but why is it not OK? Let's write it at the beginning. The most fundamental reason is that you do not have the communication model and position of the world's mature society to structure interpersonal relationships in your heart. As a result, what you want to write in your heart is not passed through the world society. I feel that you pushed the plot too fast and expanded the main plot too much. The first villain was not set up well, it was too open and open, and it did not have the mystery of the mastermind behind the scenes to attract people. The whole picture of the first layer was not unfolded at all. In fact, based on the first layer, 300 chapters can be entered. Let's talk about the development of life on the first layer map and the world settings. For example, evil gods, cults, and criminal investigation departments can all reveal their threads in it. Horse traces, there is no need to set the detection point so high. Just a so-so detection on the first floor is OK. You can also write down traces on the first level of what the outside of the city looks like to prepare for opening a new map and adding plots for reasons such as escaping and experiencing adventures. Fortunately, you have pushed through more than half of the seventy-odd chapters. The emotional line is also a cliched sympathy and love at first sight, and the villain's provocation makes Kizuna completely clueless.

Is this really the author of the disaster? This is why the level has regressed so quickly (⊙o⊙)! I was hooked after reading the first chapter of Disaster. As for this, I'm sorry<(_ _)>. Completely unattractive.

The first copy of The Arrival of All Heavens Swordsman Difficulty: Low martial arts Progress: less than one-fifth (about) Identity: secondary player (probably) Nickname, nickname! ! ! The latest and most accurate news Second copy of The Arrival of the Heavens Dragon Balls Difficulty:... Progress:... Identity:...

After finishing this book, I am still recommending investment, which is a shame.

All kinds of conversations with this cat poisoned me, and he slipped away

It's a pity. The writing in the early stage of "Disaster Is Coming" is really eye-catching. Although it started to lose control in the middle and later stages, overall it is still a good book that is above average. I hope you can stabilize your mentality and get back on your feet😡😡😡

After defeating the world's best martial arts tournament, Sun Wukong is only at the fourth level? Then Tian Boguang can beat the protagonist, is Tian Boguang also the fourth level? This level of combat power is a bit vague and hard to understand.

I'm going to go under the knife and you sue me for being a loser. . . . The framework must be well thought out, the map must be large, the character's ability must have an upper limit, and the end goal must be far enough away.