Pirate's Fire Phoenix

Come on💪

This reminds me of a novel in which the male protagonist's parents were killed by a killer when he was three years old. At four years old, he took revenge. At five years old, he taught a few top ten special forces soldiers. At six years old, he lived in seclusion and then finished spreading flowers. Is this what the author wants to write as well?

Let me tell you, I read a few pictures, and then I have two questions. The first question is that before Luffy was taken by Capra to meet Ace, I remember that Luffy had already encountered red hair and eaten a devil fruit. However, I don't think this was mentioned in the author's description, so Capra was taken to meet Ace? The second question is when Zoro went to the Isshin Dojo to kick the gym. Zoro seemed to know no kendo before kicking the gym, so he would chop at random. However, the protagonist directly took out three swords and handed them to Zoro. Then Zoro thought to himself: How could he know that I am a three-swordsman? I was a little confused when I saw this. I remember Zoro's three-sword style because he always challenged Kuina at the beginning and lost to Kuina again and again. Then this idiot thought that if he got a few more swords, he could beat Kuina! Later, I couldn't win with two swords in the two-knife style, so I held another knife in my mouth to form the three-knife style, instead of the three-knife style from before kicking the gym! As for why Zoro went to the Isshin Dojo, many netizens speculated that the idiot got lost. After all, he has the attribute of being a road idiot! The reason why the owner of the museum, Sarashiro, accepted this guy was because of his perseverance and unwillingness to admit defeat.

This is the most brutal attack I have ever seen on Zefa. He actually compared Spandine to Zefa 50-50. How much do you look down on the admiral? Has Zefa's combat prowess been reduced to the point where you can easily kill him? In addition, in the setting of One Piece, there seems to be only one type of phantom beast species. There is already Marco, do you want another phoenix? Also, Armed Colors can only be practiced when the body reaches adulthood. Luffy practiced Armed Colors when he was 18 to 19 years old. If you awaken the Visibility Color, it is almost the same. If you awakened Armed Colors before the age of 10, does it mean that the protagonist's body stops developing at 10 years old? When I was 7 or 8 years old, I could use the flying slash as my body template, and I could still accept it. But when I was 10 years old, I felt like I couldn't accept it when I was armed. If this continues, will I be ready to be the Yonko at the age of 15? Will I finish the 200,000-word book? It is recommended that you read the original comics carefully.

More than 40 chapters and over 50,000 words... I was shocked

If you have the phantom beast seed fruit and still use swordsmanship, you might as well not eat it. If you eat the animal type fruit, don't use the sword.

It's extremely poisonous. I personally recommend you not to read it. This person has never watched One Piece, and even if he has, he is not careful. He writes fantasy in the skin of a pirate. For example, the swordsman's realm cuts through iron, tyrants, diamonds, and everything. Damn it (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻I'm embarrassed to death.

I vomited when I saw the realm of kendo. It's too poisonous.

How old are you when your combat power collapsed too quickly? He can beat Whitebeard's son. Whitebeard's son has the strength of a general at least. And according to current standards, the Yonko's fight against the Shichibukai is basically an instant kill, and Kaido's fight against Luffy is completely wiped out by Thunderous Gossip. Age and strength do not match

You dare to write a fanfic even if you don't understand Pirates, **book

It's too poisonous. Brothers, I can't hold on anymore after trying all kinds of poisons. Come on, you guys.

This book is a pure white text, suitable for people aged 10 to 7 years old. If it exceeds the standard, please prepare 30 quick-acting Jiuxin Pills 😊😊😊 (Warm reminder: try not to scold the author, people will be angry too, just delete the comment 🙂 Then you will only be even more angry)

Daily Guide I'm really speechless

Other brothers have already mentioned some of the previous questions. Let me mention one more. The two swords of the Golden Lion are not unparalleled swords, they are just swords.

Let me first explain that Zefa lost his arm while trying to save someone.

Have you seen your various divine farmers tasting hundreds of herbs? Decisively persuade to retreat

I advise you not to subscribe if you have fully subscribed. This is the book I have spent the most on, and there is nothing I regret more than this.

His combat power has collapsed. He can beat Whitebeard II, but he can't beat Rao G. What the hell? Rao G is just a senior cadre in Brother Ming's hands. Brother Ming is almost as strong as a substitute general. Vigor, the one who uses the fluttering fruit, and the one who uses the stone fruit are almost at the level of a first-class lieutenant general. The others are at most the level of a major general to an ordinary lieutenant general. Whitebeard II's strength should be on the same level as Brother Ming

The overlord color and domineering energy can affect someone as strong as Yixiao. I laughed because the author has never watched One Piece.

Which anime is the cover from?

One chapter and five pages, are you kidding me? What is written, what, what and what ⊙∀⊙?

. . . . . This is too naive, right?

I guess the author is a pirate and has never read it.

Vegapunk's name is spelled wrong and I'm convinced 😅😅😅

Good guy, what you are writing is not One Piece. You are planning to write fantasy under the guise of One Piece.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong, all of whom are great swordsmen and compete with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

I recommend a non-toxic one, the god of the pirate world. Although it is still short, it can be there. Not the Holy Mother, not the follower of the ship, a fan of Enelu, not the original protagonist group. If you are interested, you can try it