The Pavilion of Worldly Affairs

After watching it, I didn't find out whether it is a male or female video? , The writing style is different, hahaha, let's talk about it later,

Foreshadowing is secondary! The main thing is that the story makes people want to read on. When your story can grab readers, then think about foreshadowing! Generally speaking, there is not much poison. It's just that the simple content is not attractive. Also, don't switch scenes casually. Especially frequent switching! First, position the protagonist well, and the character of the protagonist should not be careless and cheerful. Appearance description is very important.

No money is given, what can you do to become popular? If you want to become popular, you need to find the right organization. One team of people will criticize you, and another team of people will praise you. As long as your writing is not bad and the plot is good, you will definitely 🔥

The writing is good, but I can't sit still and watch martial arts slowly.

Didn't anyone mention the "King of the Opposite Sex" at the beginning of the first chapter? Such a mistake at the beginning will make people lose their desire to read on.

Come on 😁 Ollie gives

With such poor grades, you can tell what's wrong with you, really

The author writes very seriously and at a high level, reaching the level found in martial arts magazines back then.

The writing is good, each chapter has a lot of words. For female readers, it may seem that it needs to be more careful and the descriptions are delicate. The writing is okay, but the results are too bad. Come on, author, take your time.

It hit the cover, look at my work.