The Pavilion of Worldly Affairs

I couldn't tell if it was for male or female readers after reading it? The writing styles are different, haha. I'll see in a while.

Foreshadowing is secondary! The most important thing is that the story makes you want to keep reading. When your story can captivate the reader Let's reconsider the foreshadowing! Overall, there aren't any major flaws. It's just that the content isn't engaging. Also, avoid changing scenes too frequently, especially so! Define the main character clearly first, and don't make them seem carefree or frivolous. Physical descriptions are very important.

Without money, how can you become famous? To become famous, you need to find the right group—one group to criticize you, and another group to praise you. As long as your writing isn't bad and your plot is decent, you'll definitely become famous.

The writing is good, but I can't sit still and read martial arts novels slowly.

Didn't anyone mention the "King of the Opposite Sex" at the beginning of the first chapter? Starting with such a mistake will kill any desire to continue reading.

Go for it! 😁 Let's go!

With such poor grades, it's easy to see what's wrong with you.

The author wrote with great care and skill, reaching the level of martial arts magazines of that era.

It's well-written, with a good amount of text in each chapter. Female readers might need to pay closer attention, as the descriptions are delicate and the writing style is good. However, the sales figures are terrible. Keep it up, author, take it slow!

We have the same cover; look at my work.