Pirate: I Am a Celestial Dragon

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There are very few Pirates fandoms writing about Celestial Dragons, and even fewer have good writing skills. The author has done both, which is very good. The emotional scenes are not obtrusive, and they don't feel overdone (after that, they feel artificial and disgusting). It's not like some books where the whole day is about beating and killing! Any more would be boring. But I always feel that there is still a lack of passion. It's almost like the bloody battles that the original work must have every once in a while, as well as the description of each character's ideals, ambitions, experiences... Let me give you an analogy, such as getting Fishman Island this time. Whitebeard won't say anything, but Big Mom might come and grab it (this is what Big Mom did after Whitebeard died in the original). The reason is very good, after all, it is the only door into and out of the new century (the only one for pirates). Even without deploying troops, just deploying some spies can provide foresight. The strategic location is very important! Usually pirates don't dare to offend the World Government and the Navy, but Big Mom will never be afraid of the Celestial Dragons (the most important thing is that they are a little-known Celestial Dragons). Of course, aunt would not dare to come by herself, as she would have to guard against the other four emperors stealing the house, but there would definitely be no problem in sending a bunch of men to come! Then taking this opportunity, the protagonist can also pull the person out and run around. To be honest, I really don't have a deep impression of the protagonist's people and forces! A fight can create some excitement, and you can also describe his subordinates (Luffy, Zoro, Sanji, Nami, Chopper, Robin...) Now the main character is only a butler and the empress, and there are no images of them after a long time, okay? When talking about cross talk, you need to have someone to entertain you. The protagonist is always wandering around alone, without even a dog leg. Readers will definitely feel bored when they get involved. Let's talk about the original work. After a battle, the navy, the four emperors, newspapers... There were a lot of shocks and other different reactions. Readers will immediately get a kick out of it (the plot is cliche but it works), and the plot moves forward due to the reactions of different people. Talking back to the novel, if the protagonist (power) and the aunt (power) have a fight. You can show off the world (pretending to be awesome), or you can bring out forces such as the navy, world government, and other pirates to advance the plot, and it won't appear abrupt. The above are purely personal and immature suggestions, I hope the author will adopt them. What I said is wrong, I apologize first 😁

Friends, if you have any comments while reading the book, please leave a comment. Come on... Don't pity me just because I'm a delicate flower! 😁

I re-watched One Piece and I don't know what to say. The pirates under Oda set sail for their dreams. If you work hard to write a book, you will definitely succeed in the end. I hope that the next novel will be a long, slow-paced novel about working hard step by step for a dream. After all, the pace of life today is too fast, and fan fiction is too impetuous. Well, who makes it seem like people nowadays can reach out and touch the sky? In fact, in the world of chuunibyou, why do we have these realistic and dark things? To the Pirate King who pursues his dream.

Author, I'm here, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is very kind in the beginning. After a few pictures, he is just like the Draco. And as a Draco, I kneel down and lick Hancock and let her beat him casually. I am really sick to death. You still write about your sister, please don't disgust me. You have ruined my good mentality.

Why are there always so many two-dimensional salted fish authors? Is it the loss of morality or the distortion of human nature? Tch, as expected, the two-dimensional author Xianyu is the absolute justice.

The subject matter is quite good, and the writing is pretty good, but the plot is a bit hit and miss, and I feel like it was not written by one person. I was confused when I went to the Sky Island to play Elniru, and I was even more confused after the operation. Also, the character of the protagonist feels too much, and he feels even crazier than Luffy. Also, the ages are too confusing. One is 15, one is 17, one is an adult, one is 20, and there is no explanation of how long one has stayed in a certain place. It is too abrupt. The strength changes too quickly, and there is no description that makes people confused. The golden finger is too buggy. Filling pits has been well received, and all kinds of pitfalls of Tianlong people are eye-catching. Last point, please don't be too off the mark. To be honest, the blooming and random Xiuxiu fruits in Journey to the West are too embarrassing. It's like a person playing zz for fun. If these things could be changed a little bit, I feel like this book would be great.

There are very few people who write about Tianlong Ren and hope that they won't fail. Come on ＾0＾~, it's still very good now

It's unrealistic. To be honest, as a young loser in the 21st century, it's impossible for anyone to resist the temptation of the Celestial Dragon life. Let alone the Celestial Dragon, you can't resist the life of the rich second generation. You still complain about energy. The reason why pirates attract attention is because of all kinds of strange fruits. As soon as you come up, the Celestial Dragon will complain again and again, and your blood will collapse.

I hope the author will not change the ending of Whitebeard. Isn't it Whitebeard's own idea to die in the war on the top? Should Whitebeard be allowed to grow old and die in bed 😐

After seeing your update, I decided to invest...

Author Is the author gone😭😭😭

No, the author's price just happened to be the leave he took when the epidemic broke out. He must be in poor health. Oh, maybe he didn't hear it.

Brother, there has been no update for three months. This vacation is a bit long. And can you still go out now? You don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, do you?

If I only read the first few pictures, I would die laughing. Author, you have something.

Originally, this book was okay, but this complaint system really lowered the quality of the book, which is a taboo for anyone with a little bit of reading experience.