Transmigrating with Green Mountain

The poems he wrote had absolutely no rhyme or meter. Reciting these drivel poems in front of the ancients was like showing off your skills in front of Guan Yu (a legendary swordsman). In today's terms, it would be as embarrassing as shouting in front of the nation's top artists!

The immersion was lacking, and it wasn't enjoyable to watch at all!

The Qin Dynasty arc was toxic, and the Zhu Xian arc was even worse. I thought it would be a satisfying read, but it turned out to be a story of protagonist torture. The first two worlds were well-written, but the style changed drastically in the Qin Dynasty arc, with the protagonist getting abused. It's definitely a case of a different character.

The author intended to portray the protagonist as someone detached from worldly affairs, unburdened by romantic feelings, transcending worldly desires, understanding the principles of all things, devoid of all emotions and desires, solely devoted to the Great Dao, a pure seeker of the Dao. While the idea was good, the writing lacked the skill to achieve the desired effect. It was more like an awkward imitation than a truly compelling one.

Too pathetic, shrewish, soft-hearted, utterly naive, can't resist women, values ​​women too much, has too many flaws, I advise against it.

What a perfectly good story, turned into something like some kind of evil or heretical tale. The protagonist even turned the beautiful Hua Qiangu into a pill and ate it. After seeing this, I'm never reading this dark story again. 😓☞ Dark-themed readers are welcome to read at their leisure.

This is ridiculous! Every time I see lines like "Cultivating immortality makes one oblivious to the passage of time," "Time flies, years slip by," "I don't know how much time has passed," or "How long has it been since then," and then the author suddenly says "Three days have passed without me even realizing it," I'm so embarrassed I could die. Does the author not know how to use these idioms?

To turn Hua Qiangu into medicine and eat her, to use a human to make elixirs—it seems the protagonist doesn't even consider himself human.

The term "top master" is used because there are no higher realms above it. But you have a whole bunch of realms above that, calling it "top master" is laughable! It's truly ridiculous. Even more absurd is that there's "peerless master" above that? What's the difference? Forget about these established realms; use your brain a little and don't just blindly apply them.

The protagonist is truly insane, exhibiting all sorts of madness, such as cannibalism, massacring cities, and destroying the world.