The Legend of Mortal Immortals

It's not good to read, it's very verbose, and all the explanations are very abrupt. The main character's name is used throughout the article, and no pronouns are used. It's annoying to read.

The heroine is very speechless when she keeps dressing up as a man. Since she is afraid of attracting prying eyes because she is too beautiful, why not just lower her appearance? Does it have to be transgender? Do you feel like the author is belittling women as a gender? And judging from the sword cultivator's reaction to the heroine's eyes, it is estimated that the sword cultivator will become the only one who can recognize from the heroine's eyes that the woman and man are the same person, right? This swordsman has such a strong sense of presence that he took a character script from an ordinary romance novel, which is quite satisfying.

After reading it, overall it's pretty good. The advantage is that the writing style is steady, the heroine is strong and determined, the proportion of male and female characters is reasonable, and the female characters are not deliberately stupid (I had no choice but to do this (ಥ_ಥ)). The female characters may not seem to be particularly outstanding, but they are very comfortable. However, there are also shortcomings. The retro style is not outstanding. It is basically the same as the alchemy flow and mortal cultivation flow that were popular a few years ago. There is no new idea. In addition, in the first map, the family power in the sect is too ignorant of the overall situation and seems a bit mindless. There are also some details that have little impact, which I won't mention. The summary is that you can take a look at it. I wish the author will write better and better I always can't say anything, but fortunately I was fooled and copied it in advance (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

There are more than 400 chapters in total, and the introduction says that you can skip more than 300 chapters... I'll just read the ending?

Congratulations on reaching Qingyun, come on!

Xuanqing in this article relies on taking pills to improve his cultivation. Isn't he afraid that his foundation will be unstable?

It's so good to read, but some of the comments are so malicious that I dismissed it after only reading a few chapters.

The author writes well. . Come on. . Waiting for you to finish!

The writing technique is too straightforward and lacks skill, and it reads very strangely. There is also a problem with the convenience of setting. Since the two levels are the first level, why does the middle level of the second level appear? Which stage of the Qi training period is this?

What is the *** of article 154? There are a lot of *** (blocked words) in the whole article 🤔

The writing can be more concise, don't use one sentence, and it's weird to use myself instead of me when talking to myself.

The heroine's cultivation level is all built up with pills.

Some details are very long-winded and unreasonable. Once you are reborn, you can tell at a glance which day you are back to. Don't write in the text that this is the day you were reborn into so-and-so. It's really cumbersome to watch.

Is Xuanqing a boy or a girl?