Rebirth and Ascending to Immortality Step by Step

There are so many typos that the sentences are unreadable. After the heroine was reborn, her intelligence was not enough. Always treat people with the impression of past lives. That is, a book would end if it had a true beginning.

There are a lot of typos, and some sentences are confusing to read. Can you fix them? Will it affect your reading mood?

I suggest the author go back and catch bugs. There are so many loopholes, and some of them are inconsistent with the preface and the follower. I hope the author can go back and check.

The writing is not bad, but the words are too cumbersome, such as "I have been out for five days, and it is time to go back." If I insist on adding "self", the result is "I have been out for five days, and it is time to go back."

The plot is good, but the writing is a bit lacking

The writing in the front is average, and the writing becomes better as you go to the back. It's a pity that it ended too early. I originally wanted to reward the book while chasing it, but you ended it, eh eh eh

What a crappy thing to write, with a lot of typos and a threesome. The main character must be beautiful and must be liked by others.

In the ending chapter, Ye Tianbao and Ye Tianbei called Aunt Ye Tianling? Aren't they siblings?

Isn't this green liquid passed down from mortal cultivators?

It's well written and the plot is very compact. But there is a typo. The author should keep writing later.

The part where the green liquid appears has not been changed and is directly copied from "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality"

I read more than a dozen chapters and found many typos 😅😅😅

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

The frequency of repeating the protagonist's name is a bit high, at least in the first chapter.