Red Dragon Warlock

The author needs to proofread his chapter. There are too many typos and punctuation marks and it costs nothing. Why not add them?

Why is all the fighting spirit coming out? Isn't it the dnd we agreed on?

Aren't the magicians' spells self-awakening? How come it has turned into studying? Doesn't this make him a mage?

Lord of the Abyss is similar to DND. Although I really like the orthodox world of DND, Toril and Greyhawk. Of course, Golarion is also fine, but the others are also good.

The world view of the Lord of the Abyss is DND

In fact, dragon warlocks are all dragon descendants, the kind with dragon heads and scales. Even the most human-like dragon warlock, the legendary dragon warlock Scarlet Lady, has dragon horns on her head and dragon wings on her back. The warlocks themselves are descendants of legendary creatures, such as tiefling. He is a demon warlock, and a half-giant is a giant warlock. The warlock's spells and the wizard's spells are really two different things. The dragon vein warlock does not have the fireball technique, only the dragon's breath technique, which is the technique of spitting fireballs from the mouth. However, this is his talent. Those who do not follow the magic network do not need magic power, and it consumes physical strength.

This writing style makes me sick. Commas are more valuable than your life and you can't bear to use them? This is the first time I have seen a novel written like an expository essay.

The red dragon is roaring, author, be careful

Your writing skills make me feel uncomfortable

I've read the book, and overall it's okay. Although the plot doesn't have too many highlights, it doesn't have any bad points and the reading is smooth. However, the description of the battle scenes is a bit shabby (")~! Also, the main character, the Red Dragon Warlock, besides playing with fire, is also very powerful physically. Warriors are all capable of fighting and resisting, let alone Dragon Vein. A first-level red dragon blood warlock almost couldn't beat a first-level rookie female warrior who looked drunk. The author has completely lost the reputation of being a tall, rich and handsome master among the masters. Theoretically speaking, a master of the same level can be unprepared. It makes sense to be able to play more than 3 combat professions of the same level. Otherwise, the magician who only needs money and talents is in vain. How can the various bonuses of the rich and handsome man in the magician be prepared to play more than 6 combat professions? The main character is the famous red dragon magic in the warlock. At least it's not a problem for a warrior to defeat monsters by leapfrogging levels. He should be able to fight at least 10 monsters at the same level. In addition to the fire attribute magic, the protagonist can also learn the summoning system and the protection system. Why should he stick to other elemental magic in the evocation system? Don't you think it's silly?

I want to ask if you think the battle scenes are quite bad, just like children fighting 😂, you hit me and I will hit you.

I became a eunuch, because the initial order was 100:1, and there was a bit of a lag at that time. In addition, people complained and criticized me every day in the book review area. The key point was not that my plot was wrong, but that my world view was wrong, and Warlock should not write like this. In addition, I also know that my warlock has unknowingly become crooked and turned into a mage. Finally, when it was put on the shelves, I said I wanted to give up, and with this result, I just went back to studying computers and became a coder. I don't want to deceive you about perfect attendance this month and make you spend money, so I'll just go ahead and tell you the eunuch.

A bit bland and not exciting.

How should I put it? The system flow is boring and slipped away.

Aren't five-color dragons very low-level?

Give the author a supreme magic correction. You can associate red with the redness of all living beings. Thus concluded the Red Dragon. Become a magical red dragon warlock.

Su En Su En Su En There are too many names of the protagonists, it's so tiring to watch. We all know the main character's name, you don't need to stress it so much.

Neither Azeroth nor Cthulhu is DND? Can you tell me what you are?

Name: Suggs Sagyuul (Suggs for short) Age: 18 Personality: cold, fierce, straightforward, silent, kind-hearted Characteristics: dark golden eyes, middle-parted bangs, long black hair, one-eye scar (left by the demon lord) (bottom), the right hand is the demon lord's arm (with part of the demon lord's original power), the upper body is covered with a black coarse cloth windbreaker lined with a red thin windbreaker and a white short coat, gray-black armor is attached to the shoulders, gray-black boxing armor is worn on both hands, and the lower body is wearing slim-fitting black pants and gray-black protective boots.