Sage in the Dawn

First of all, let's take a look at the title of the book, Sage. Ahem, this sage is not that sage. Don't get carried away. It has no other meaning. The sage here is based on the general background of the book. I feel that it is biased toward Western fantasy. The story begins with the confrontation, dialogue and interaction between two big characters. You can probably guess that the protagonist will appear later... From here, it can be seen that the author is greatly paving the way for the background of the story and the development of the characters, that is, giving the reader a general impression. Foreshadowing is foreshadowing, and it also allows us to better understand what each character does, and the explanations are also very clear. For example, Karelina wanted to destroy the mage tower because she was forced by her late husband to have resentment in her heart, and she insisted on destroying the thing he cherished most. Won't make people feel out of place. It's just that this preparation is a bit long. I have been reading Chapter 5, which consists of five official chapters plus an opening chapter, but I was surprised to see the protagonist's appearance. Of course, this does not rule out the fact that the author has greatly created the atmosphere for the protagonist's appearance. I also prefer this kind of foreshadowing, but for a web novel, this would be a bit of a turn-off for readers. But, true fans are those who can keep it for themselves~ There is nothing to say about this. The general background is Western fantasy, as are the characters, and the writing style is also Eastern. It can be said to be a kind of fusion. As for the specific how and how well it is integrated, you have to go into the book and check it out for yourself. After all, everyone sees the same thing~ My opinions are attached below: 1. There are typos in some places, which affects the reading experience of new readers. 2. Foreshadowing is good, but moderation is also recommended. That's pretty much it. If you are interested in Western fantasy magic, you can take a look~

By the way, when I wrote this book review, it was my first time to read a fantasy novel. My understanding of fantasy has always been based on games and comics. The impression of splendid magic, epic customs, and fantasy worlds is roughly the same. My evaluation of this book is radiant, but radiant here does not mean the idiom. Brilliant means grand and rich, and radiant refers to two aspects. God, charm, is the content of the book. The author needs to create a fascinating worldview to allow readers to get involved in the story. At the beginning of the book, the author uses dialogue and explanation in parallel to subtly tell us how long people can live in the world he created, what a wizard is, and what this looks like. The reader will understand clearly. Since then, a roughly formed world structure has been formed; when reading with this structure, the charm of the fantasy world will continue to be improved in the story. Cai, Huacai, is the form of the article. I read the table of contents before reading, and saw that the short stories are arranged in an orderly manner in the same framework, forming a microcosm with common characteristics, which profoundly echoes the title of "sage". At the same time, the titles of each short story also have a neat and uniform form. It must be said that the author has taken great pains to pursue a refreshing look and feel. In addition, the author also uses epic scenes in the story, quoting ancient poems and allusions, just like Zhang Yimou's movie "The Great Wall", and the form is full of gorgeousness. From the author's sincere words to the readers, I feel that the author is serious about his work. I hope the author will continue to work hard, continue to grasp his intentional and unintentional charm, create a better fantasy journey, and write about the sage spirit in the dawn!

Come on, author, shout for you! 😆

The setting is good, but this style is not popular. Many readers don't like this style very much, because it will be very fascinating and the possibility of being addicted is higher.

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It took me a whole morning, about two hours, to read all the chapters. Let me tell you something about my age first. As a middle-aged man, the first fantasy novel I came into contact with was "Fantasy City". Unfortunately, it did not lead me into the fantasy world. What really introduced me to the fantasy world was "Bink's Magic" in the "Science Fiction World Supplement" that I read on the train when I was returning home during the winter vacation about 15 years ago. It was a bizarre world with all kinds of strange creatures. After that, I started buying "Fantasy World", but I was still not very interested in Kyushu. Later, I read many short stories, and my favorite was a guy named Phoenix. The one that impressed me most was "The Seventh Skull". When I was in college, I also tried to write some fantasy short stories myself. However, my descriptions were not successful and I only dared to post them on the school forum. Later I had to give up and write prose and poems to earn some royalties for the school newspaper. Let's talk about this novel again. To be honest, I am a person who is hard to get obsessed with but very easy to sink into. It is difficult to attract me at the beginning, but as long as I can endure it for a while, I will be addicted to it. The same can be said for this novel. For at least 30 chapters, I didn't remember two names. Of course, this is due to my own personality, and it slowly started to integrate into the plot later on. But what I want to say is that I personally don't like Western names, which is a little bit. When I was writing fantasy short stories, if it was Western magic, I would write the names more neutrally, such as Temuto, Zheada, and Amul. Of course, this is just a personal interest. So far, there have been several scenes in the novel. Well, except for the magic tower, the kingdom is not too bizarre. I don't quite understand who is the number one pig's foot. It looks a bit like multiple pig's feet, each with a large volume. It may be because I missed some plots in the early stage and will go back and read them when I have time. Okay, let's write this much first. I am indeed not the target group, so I have missed some links. Now I have to go to work. I will look back when I have some time.

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At this point in time, I don't believe that next month's number one fan will not be mine.

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As the old saying goes, the setting is good and the author is attentive, but the plot and description are really not suitable for online writing. If the author still wants to write a book, he might as well use this book to practice his writing.

The writing is okay, I hope the new book will support it.

It has been developing well recently, keep up the good work! 😁

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When I saw that the wedge had fourteen pages, I knew I was going to suffer. After one or two chapters, I didn't know what to say. I returned it and looked at the author's page. It's a new author. Very good. You successfully persuaded me to quit. I won't comment on the book before I've read it. I just want to say that new authors should not think too much. Stop ink and introduce gold fingers and pig's feet directly at the beginning. It is crude but effective. (This is the suggestion of the toad god and the thoughts of readers like me. People's time is limited and the opening chapter cannot attract me. It doesn't matter how exciting the rest is.)