Pirate Lord

I really like your setting, good subject matter. I hope you can persevere. There are too few sailing people who can persevere. I'm sorry, please 🙏🙏

Come on, recommendation tickets will be given to you and subscriptions will be given to you

Don't panic, take your time, as long as you don't watch too much and follow this pace, you will definitely become popular. Come on👍

Recommend tickets to you every day and put monthly tickets on the shelves

It's very well written. Come on, write slowly and don't collapse in the middle.

It feels like the author is downplaying the system. I could have looked at it just because of this, but now I don't see it at all.

What I want to see is a pirate, and then the male protagonist works everywhere. . . . The main content of Pirate Lord should be pirates, not working around

It's a bit like a running account, the creativity is very good, the various fantasy items set are also good, the author is really thoughtful. But the story is not good, so it can be read as an adventure diary. The plot and characters are very dry

Be innovative and creative, not routine and imitative. Downplay the strength training system. Downplay individual combat capabilities. Multi-racial civilizations compete for hegemony. The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. You can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, shrink and annex and conquer, form powerful vertical and horizontal alliances to attack far and near, and form a multi-racial sea, land and air alliance camp. Don't develop technologies like airplanes, steel battleships, and tanks. Airships are of limited use. Of course, the air force in the fantasy world must be dragons and birds. Just focus on artillery and steam engines, otherwise it would become a military historical novel. The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carriers, and sail battleships are not suitable for aircraft carriers. They need to develop steam engines or magical arcane power or sea monsters and ocean monsters as the power to pull the ships. They can carry giant dragons, giant eagles, and giant bats as bombers. The air force's technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. Not only the Western magical and fantasy race, Warcraft, mythical and legendary creatures, but also ferocious beasts, giant beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas and various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels for creative inspiration. Also, the worldview must have depth and impact. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.

There are almost no platforms of this type. If you stick to it, you will definitely gain something.

For what reason did the count imprison the protagonist in Chapter 1? If a viscount can be imprisoned by his superiors and his house confiscated at will, wouldn't all these nobles be in danger?

Read Chapter 170. At first I thought it was a pirate novel (robbery on business roads) with elements of pirates (treasure hunting) added as well as a chase. It was a good novel. And then, just built a tavern? After reorganizing Yama, we continued sailing and arrived north to Charms in Chapter 110. Complete the task (investigate the gold ornaments) and get the reward (a piece of wasteland) and then build the lord until chapter 170 The middle penetration event: the gold ornaments event (completed) (Cthulhu?). The magic crystal mine incident (ongoing) seems to be about to explode (the protagonist has a conflict with another lord). The Witch Island Incident (has come to an end for the time being) and the fighting was okay (to be continued) (why the witch chased so slowly and had no magic at all). The savage tribe, (temporarily peaceful), among which this tribe's "exorcist" weapon can easily kill the fishmen. Alien, (???????) The protagonist is in a desperate situation, I didn't dare to watch anymore after seeing this. First of all, the protagonist is really reckless, even if he doesn't feel very powerful. Then he got desperate and aliens came out! ! ! With a small amount of money, dancing on the tip of a knife is very exciting. Being in a desperate situation is more interesting with a little luck. The aliens take action directly... In the end, as the introduction of the book says, there are many elements. There was originally a main line running through it, and then it slowly faded away? ? ? (There are too many adventures to go through it, especially the intrusion of aliens 🙂) There are also game elements (side quests, professions or titles, levels, bonus points). Main line 1: Escape from Horgen 1. Escape from the dungeon 2. Get rid of Horver 2. Escape from Horgen offshore Main line 2: Become a captain 1. Own a ship 2. Hire at least three crew members Main line 3: Destruction of trade routes (destruction of trade routes × robbery of trade routes √) Main Mission 4: Pearl of the Orient 1. Arrive at Yama 2. Establish a blacksmith shop or dock ... (Chapter 80) Then there is no progress for the entire ninety chapters (in progress 😅) The author should give the stronghold a name, I can't distinguish Four places? One is Manes (magic crystal mine), the other is the stronghold (savage tribe), the other is Witch Island (with giant trees on it) and the other is the port of a neighboring country (trade) The author is digging crazy pits, small pits (murlocs, golems) Thousand-year-old Demonic Whale Gland), big pits (alien 🙂) are all filled in for you, some are filled in (murlocs), some are not filled in But it still feels good when you look at it, In general, it can be regarded as "food" (exquisite imagination)

This book is too slow to catch on. The title is Pirate Lords, but it's over 200,000 words long. Pig's Foot is neither a pirate nor a lord. The plot is too long.

The plot doesn't seem to flow smoothly, and I don't want the benefits I get. The foreshadowing is too deliberate, and the protagonist behaves in a haphazard manner.

I guess I died of it? ?

It feels good. If it doesn't crash and there are many updates, it will definitely become popular.

Prices are chaotic, a meal costs 60 silver coins; buying some food and things costs 34,000 gold coins

Any pictures of the pirate ship? Just thinking about it always makes me feel bad

The more you read, the more ridiculous it becomes. The protagonist's golden finger can completely become the world's largest supplier of ships and weapons, form the strongest navy, take revenge and dominate the world. As a result, he used Goldfinger to build a small broken ship and wandered around the world meaninglessly. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have died hundreds of times. Good golden finger, given to a pig

This is my first time giving a reward. Write well, come on.

I became a viscount and started to build the territory. It was so chaotic. Settings are broken

The protagonist randomly encounters sea monsters that defy the sky... How can merchant ships survive in that world? Aren't mortals afraid to go to sea?

I wrote it too hastily. I mainly focus on ships and naval battles, not on you taking risks and building territories on land.

Let me ask you a question. Although a viscount with a lot of money may not have much power, it is impossible for him to fail so easily. If he is rich, he will have an army and masters, but he cannot defeat a count. Moreover, if he blatantly attempts to seize the property of his subordinates, other subordinates will not react, and even the rabbits and foxes will not understand.

[Recommendation + Investment] "Pirate Lord" You still have 28 investments to make a profit! ! ! Everyone, whether you have fast hands or slow hands! ! ! Pirates + sailing + adventure + construction + lord + war + system + sea monster + technology! ! ! The subject matter is fresh, and it definitely has the qualifications to become a god!

How should I put it? If I had read this book ten years ago, I would have thought it was a good book.

Update, the author is great, the eunuch should also say something

Come on, author! Write slowly, don't rush

Shangxiang ing😭, what a pity for a good book

Is he a eunuch? I won't watch the eunuch anymore.