The Long Fairy Road

It's good. I felt very comfortable after reading the first few chapters. I hope the author can keep it up. There hasn't been a good fairy tale for a long time. I invested in this book and gave the work a good review. I hope there will be more good-looking completed fairy tales in the future.

I think the author can write some joyful things to increase the reader's sense of involvement. Instead of always cultivating, people need to have something else. For example, in the chapter about the protagonist's one year away from home, you actually wrote that the protagonist met two monks, killed one, and then disappeared? ? ? Why do you have to write down some deeds you heard on the road, some happy things (the world is so big, there will always be ridiculous things), and the writing about the evil cultivators who hit the valley and entering that cave are too far-fetched, and there is not enough foreshadowing. Also, the writing by the follower so-and-so is not good enough. I can't tell what's wrong, but it's just a little uncomfortable. I think the author can make the new (background) supporting character who appears in the cave look like a clown, make some jokes for the protagonist, and then the supporting character will complain about him, nickname him, give the protagonist a vicious streak, or write something else interesting. The novel should be interesting (emphasis added), don't always write about upgrading and fighting monsters (boring). (Personal opinion...)

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I watched a few and couldn't stand it anymore. There's so much nonsense. The article on cultivating immortals is written in an indecisive way, and the love between children and children grows. If you don't even want a wife, are you going to be cheated on, or do you want to cultivate a relationship first and then be cheated on? If the protagonist dies, she will be a widow, and if the protagonist divorces her, it will be even more humiliating for her! Since we have agreed to get married, is there any point in pretending? If you want to write at a slow pace, you have to use a foreshadowing. The beginning is about ordinary things that ordinary people do. You have a little bit of the influence of the world of cultivating immortals on ordinary people. It is the same as our daily life. You might as well write history. If you want to write about masculinity, go to the female channel to write. Many people will like it. If you want to write about cultivating immortals, you are not decisive enough, have no scheming, and do not talk about chance. Who will read it?

I feel that it is really a pity that not many people read it, and no one came to guess my plot. After all, my book buried a few points and small details at the beginning, just in the first and second chapters. Let's get a prize here! When I wrote that plot, if anyone can guess it, I will be rewarded with 5,000 coins.

This writing technique is like forgetting the old devil.

Anyone who reads the book can leave me a message and tell me whether I am a weed or a poisoner, or something else. Please don't be stingy.

Why stop updating? It's on the shelves, and I'll be working full-time for at least six months. .

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The writing is good, but I think the plot...