Lord God Picture Scroll

My thoughts are messy, so just write them down. Delete the post or not, it doesn't matter. 1. I was around September 2017, and I looked at the all-around designer. Damn it, it's been two years in the blink of an eye! ! I didn't feel that time flew by at all... At that time, I watched Sister Qing go from v1 to v5 in two or three months~Wow~I felt so stupid at the time. After all, the designer's first order was ranked tenth in 2017 at the starting point. 2. Of course, it's hard for me to get used to it as a reader who wanders here and there, and I stopped reading it later. But I look at the data. Sister Qing's journey has also been bumpy, from the first two novels in the new era, to the rise of designers, and then the decline in performance in the gaming era, and the rise of extraordinary players. Unfortunately, she finished the book in a hurry... Then there is this book, which is almost a completely new setting of her own creation, and the sense of separation from reality is serious. Compared with before, the results are also like collapse, okay, forgive me for using this word. 3. The author's mentality has collapsed now, at least on the verge of collapse. Pain, confusion, unwillingness... And, every day, I debate whether to be a eunuch or not~ Hey, just touch your head. Fortunately, the author is relatively mature and rational, so he will be fine after adjusting. No need to talk nonsense about how important mentality is. If you find it difficult, it means you have encountered a bottleneck. Climbing over means transformation and improvement. If you can't climb over, you will fall into the pit. 4, ——Why were you so popular before? ——Because the writing is refreshing. ——Why is it not popular now? ——Because the writing is not cool. The truth is that simple. Of course you know that Shuangwen has the largest market, but you still can't help but want to write something of your own. But the strength is not enough to completely translate what I think into words, or in other words, there are loopholes in the idea. And, guess what, is it for watching Western Fantasy or for watching Squid? To be honest, when you are not strong enough and want to make money, you should respect the market, follow the trend, and write about popular topics! Improve your strength while making money, and optimize and improve your ideas. Instead of going against the wind. Tietou Xiaohanhan. (Also, if there are some things that I like, I really can't cover them with something that the market likes???) 5. Although the author doesn't like it, I still want to give some practical suggestions. In my opinion, the main reason why the main god picture scroll has been put on the back burner is the subject matter! Secondly, the writing style, or the power of the writing, is not enough to allow readers to understand that completely unfamiliar world smoothly and without reading obstacles. (I'm just talking about the beginning) When describing the background, it is indeed too rigid, bland and boring, and lacks contradictions and conflicts. It wasn't until Chapter 4 that the main plot emerged, the Lord God's apprentice and so on. Why can't we get out of the main plot quickly? To put it bluntly, the writing is procrastinating and contains some meaningless details. The plot is not compact enough and the information is not straightforward enough. For example, when you introduce the background, suddenly the protagonist gets hungry and goes to eat, interrupting the narrative rhythm~ The beginning of Almighty Designer is very crisp and clear, with a strong sense of purpose. The writing is not that boring either. It is very simple to judge whether the text is lively or dull, that is, whether it can arouse readers' desire to complain. It can be seen that you are not sexy enough and readers don't love you anymore. The starting point now is to be lighthearted, funny and humorous. 6. How to solve the problem? Whatever is missing, make up for it. Stop trying this and that. If you want to work full-time, it's better to be more stable. Is there no cost to trial and error? If you don't have enough strength, you can't do it~ I think what the author should focus on is the writing power and character creation. Read those classic books several times and understand carefully why there is almost no nonsense, why the reading experience is smooth and the information is clearly explained, and why the characters stand out in a few words. Abandon useless things, highlight key points, and emphasize them repeatedly. Sister Qing probably likes "I'm a Big Star". This book is very good. There is also "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" which became popular some time ago. There is nothing to say about its writing style and characterization. Anyway, the writing and plot are really smooth. Read more, study more, and understand with your heart. 7. Even though the book is confusing, there is no need to belittle oneself. Most authors have their ups and downs. It's not scary to fall down. What's scary is that you can't get up, and you can't find the direction to work hard. You don't know why you fell... As an old author, you are not useless. You already have experience with long-form stories, so you still have the framework ability, right? As a result of my previous career, I am familiar with various settings and have some imagination. But there are pros and cons. If you know too much, you can't help but want to write private things. If you know too little, it's easy to follow the rules. 8, I seem to have written a lot of nonsense... Emmm~ Oh, to summarize: I suggest you write cool articles quietly, and don't think too much about everything. Just pretend I didn't say anything. If you want to make money, think about it. Get up and become a hero again. ——2019.09.03

Hello dear readers, "The gods all say that tofu has a heart, because tofu brings beauty." (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)? ? ? I am the little brother who has been trampled by thousands of people and has a bruised nose and face... Zhuge's little brother. Book title: "Painted Scroll of the Lord God" Author: Qingshan Tzui. Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This book (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) First impression: emmm, it's time for the weekly game again. The theme of this book should be the main god theme that has been more popular recently. After reading the introduction, I feel that the story is a bit different from the previous main god creation themes. There are already many themes before the protagonist arrives. The former has created something of his own in this world, and with the arrival of the protagonist, he can only find his own way in a unique way. The writing style should be the normal style of this subject, and the sand sculpture players can experience the game in a fun way, and then the protagonist looks at the sand sculpture players in this world as a god (´▽｀) It is relaxed and interesting. Tasty. However, these are not the main points of this book. The real attraction is that the author of this book is actually a "girl"... Introduction: (emmm, the introduction is very confusing.) Jiang Cheng traveled to a world where he could become a main god and a reincarnation. , But found that the main god of this world is somewhat different. He can create a world of traps to imprison enemies, and he can also create a world of trials to enhance the combat power of reincarnations. The virtual world created by the main god is similar to the game in the previous life. Can I be a happy copycat? However, Jiang Cheng found that the previous time traveler had finished pretending. All he could do was to be original! - This is a story about becoming a creation god in a different world. Story style: logic + daily style + small fun. My name is Jiang Cheng, a time traveler. I ended up dying at my computer desk when I woke up. In this world, when my spirit reaches a certain level, I will gain extraordinary abilities. I became one of them. I took part in some kind of assessment from the beginning, but I originally wanted to live a leisurely life, but found that this assessment was an extraordinary start. Then, under the leadership of my teammates, I started my own path to become the main god and create my own world. Relying on them and my own brain in this chaos. A chaotic world! Live! Summary of advantages: 1. World view: a unique world. The world background of this book is similar to that of a modern city, but the overall background adds a lot of originality. So it looks very novel, and the distinction and treatment of extraordinary people and ordinary people in this background are even more interesting. I feel that this world is good. 2. Theme: A novel theme. Like the world view, the self has a theme created by the author. Although there are many places that we can borrow from other classification theories to restore it. But just talking about the main god flow, the original theory of the supremacy of the main god is removed, and then the status of the reincarnation is combined with the main god. . Let them become representatives of mages and warriors. This setting is very good. And as for the innovation of some plot details, it is mentioned in the article that different props are used to improve people's abilities. Although I can't say that the protagonist used a lot of brains when carrying out this plot. , But this novel setting is really good. The shortcomings are that the world view laid out by the author of this story is a bit big. So the whole book so far has a lot of settings in the early stages. As a result, the book feels very bland and lacks the excitement. . Although some combat aspects were added later, I don't know whether it was due to the influence of the early writing style or my personal problem. Story direction: As for the story direction, the protagonist has now opened up the Novice Village and started to go to the new world. With the news leaked from the protagonist's small organization, it can be seen that the protagonist's world is divided. There are many worlds. The protagonist should follow the plot, slowly increase his level, and rely on the golden light in his world to rise quickly, so as to contact a higher level world. Perhaps this whole world is the game of the Lord God? Recommended for the reader group, the writing style is recommended for those who like novel themes. The protagonist's IQ is online. In terms of subject matter, superpowers, main gods and reincarnations. Final summary: After reading it, although it is not as popular as the main god planning flow recently, but the theme setting of this book is really good. The protagonist comes to this world and is replaced by the captain. , And then the protagonist discovers his own golden finger during creation. This results in the protagonist's unique style and fighting talent. Then in terms of creation, the created world is used for various purposes from the perspective of the Lord God's creation, and then the reincarnation is the protagonist we usually see traveling in the world. So, although the writing style may seem too bland due to the setting issues in the early stage, it should be very perfect in the later stage. After all, the protagonist has become a mage in the battle and a fighter among mages. I am definitely not a coward in the later stage. I am also looking forward to their encounter due to organizational issues.

I was looking for a book to read recently and came across this one, but I still couldn't get into it. The author has basically finished reading the first game article. Later, the extraordinary players only read half of it and couldn't stand it anymore. The reason is the same as this one, it has no flesh and blood. The whole novel seems to have a complete setting, but there are no descriptions that reflect the reality of the world, including environmental characters, etc. The text is empty, making it impossible to build a complete, flesh-and-blood world in the mind, and it is impossible to immerse the reader in the author's worldview. In addition, the meeting that was imitated in the early stage appeared quite abruptly. The Tarot in Mystery will have several very important functions. One is to fill in the background structure of the world, the other is to carry out the plot, and the third is to serve as a golden finger for the protagonist (behind the scenes manipulation + Connecting people from different regions, different identities, and different abilities), but I haven't seen the use of the meeting in this article Except for the protagonist, everyone else gave me the impression of just a symbol, not a living person In addition, the description of Goldfinger is particularly strange (maybe I didn't understand it) Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Let me just mention two points that I care about 1. After entering the inner world, the protagonist is at the crushing level of freshmen in all aspects (main god level, virtual world, mastery of the causal line). Even graduates are only one level higher than the protagonist. So how meaningful is the length of this academy? At the same time, as the elite seedlings of the reincarnation team who have faced the main god of the reverse species, they should receive more attention after entering the other world instead of being thrown into the academy for abuse. It's like a peacekeeper who gets second-class merit and is directly thrown into a military academy and starts from scratch when he arrives in China. First, this kind of torture scene (mostly a slap-in-the-face scene with other family geniuses later on) has become tired. Second, in terms of plot, it is not as exciting as the marginal world in Chapter 1. Life and death battles vs. School rape, it is obvious which one the readers like. The second thing is that I think the party scene could be better designed. So far, it feels too mysterious and too dramatic. If it is a "first generation" like Mystery, then there is nothing to say. But the protagonist is a "second generation" who relies on the same Earthling, which is a bit embarrassing. After all, if you have known friends for a long time, like "getting together once a week" is more frequent than friends gathering in real life. If you suddenly change people, the tone and habits will be different. In the end, it is a pity to use "amnesia" to eliminate other people's doubts. There is also an extra fanatical fan "Pirate", which is like forcing a cheat to make up for the settings Of course, old wine in new bottles is too common in online literature, but it does not mean that we cannot introduce new ones. The best way to inherit the settings is to make your own changes based on the original ones. For example, it can be like this, the protagonist becomes a new chess piece, and while the ability increases, the identity of the chess piece is further improved (the functions of the party are gradually restored, and the protagonist can add functions later). Finally, with the help of everyone at the party, when he becomes the initiator of the party, the functions are complete and further improved. This is distinguishable from the secret. On these two points, as an old bookworm, it may be too much. I hope the author will continue to work hard

A world with complete rules but no flesh and blood. After reading the latest chapter, we can see that Sister Qing has worked hard on the world setting, the differences in several sequences, creating the world, etc., Especially the setting of the world created by Liang An to save human beings in the world, the setting is quite brilliant. The rules are also one after another, very complete. (Actually, we have forgotten some very good settings.) However, when I try to imagine this world, I can't imagine what it looks like. Perhaps in the author's mind, the creations of the old era and the creations of future technology are organically combined, forming a very novel and gorgeous picture. However, there are very few descriptions of this kind of world filling in the article. The big scenery in the far corner and the details in the nearer corner. This new world is still a fog to me. I still remember one time when I was watching Lord of Friends, it seemed to be the third quarter. The protagonist had just gone to the cemetery and touched the misery and pain of a lower-class people in the era. On the way back, the brightness of an industrial city full of vitality in the era impressed the eyes of the protagonist and me. The contrast of the impact at that moment gave me many impressions of the world in an instant. Talking about this book, at least in these 10 chapters, I only saw the daily life of a combat academy, and the poorly written part of this kind of fantasy is indeed less attractive. I can vaguely feel the charm of the world under this rule, and I hope the author can help me understand this world clearly in future articles. Rua!

I have read every work of the author! I really like imaginative works~ For me as a designer, I have been stimulated by some inspirations several times! ! I hope the author will work harder to write a book, I will continue to read it!

""：              +,:   Some daily plots are full of ups and downs and full of foreshadowing. Where can the subject matter be written like this? Qingjie has been stuck in the shelf time, and not everyone can just be stuck in the climax of the novel to write a thrilling battle In these ten chapters, the protagonist has done a lot of things. Maybe the narrative is a bit flat, and the relaxation is not particularly generous, but it is definitely not boring, and it definitely does not belong to a diary.            ,:    , The total of more than 20,000 words in the ten chapters is about the word count of a graduate thesis in academic circles. Comparing it with others, if you dislike the lack of plot advancement, think about how much water you put into your graduation thesis to make up the word count. If you think it is too watery, think about how much hair you lost in order to make up the word count and pass the review [If you are not old enough to write a paper or your academic qualifications are really good, or you don't need to write at all... If it doesn't work, just think about how long it will take to write an 800-word essay. It's okay to say that I'm a protector, it's okay to say that I'm a *** fan. Starting from the designer, I've always followed the original version and read it. Please take care of the author who writes the story seriously, for the sake of a better tomorrow for online articles.

Many of the settings in the front of this book are very different from that one =-= The sense of familiarity is very strong, but not exactly the same It's like this family planted square apples That family thought it was good Using the same method to grow square pears Tsk tsk. . . ———————— The previous settings are rich and complex It looks like an RPG game It feels like eating books and dying suddenly I don't know if the author can control it

After reading the author's previous three books, I felt they were okay (especially the Almighty one, which is really good, but it seems that I have written everything I can write about), so I continued to follow it. I hope the author will work harder (more updates will be added)

My liver hurts when I see the picture scroll 😅

I'm looking for a novel title based on a treasure. The protagonist travels to ancient times, a somewhat supernatural world, and describes the horror of the original owner's blank mind. The protagonist's golden finger is to eat. At first, he used a gold bag to hold medicinal tablets, and later he took pills. The novel should be serialized, with about 200 chapters.

Sister Qing, I suddenly have a small opinion That is, "The Lord God Scroll" can learn from "Minecraft" to allow the protagonist to build the world freely Or it can learn from "Doraemon Nobita's Kingdom of Clouds" "Doraemon Nobita's Clockwork City Adventures" I recommend Qingda to refer to these two anime movies, how about it? 😌😌😌😌😭

Come on, I will subscribe + monthly pass as soon as it is released

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Sister Qing, whether I can afford a book depends on your new book investment I have no money to eat, and my wallet is full of pineapples.

9 Recommendation votes have been cast 😁

Silent bb Does anyone think Sister Qing's all-around game designer looks the best? Why don't Sister Qing, when you get tired of writing, just continue to be Almighty Game Designer? We are willing to subscribe to that, and you see, for example, the Xiuxian chat group has more than 3,000 chapters and is still unfinished, so Sister Qing's novel was just over 1,000 years old and she gave up. It was too casual and irresponsible 😰. There are no new games on the market, so Sister Qing can slowly reveal the plot of the game ~ Just treat it as an urban online game article hehe.

Wait, the richest man in the world is also yours. No wonder it feels so appetizing...

Can't you just be your main god and create the world? The created world can also enhance abilities, so why do we have to end up in reality. This kind of construction-flow book is outdated, and in a virtual world, permission must be given face to face. It is really fake, and it is still wearing the cloak of the Lord God.

Woohoo, I'm actually working on emo for a book I wrote a few years ago, even though I know it won't work out...

It is a lie to say that you can use love to generate electricity 🙂

I wonder why MD saw so many eunuch books on the bookshelf today. Are you poisonous? If you can't insist, please don't write! Sorry! Readers have the most basic requirements for authors. Is it difficult to finish a book normally? If it's too difficult, don't write it! Gan

Will this book be updated? I've been waiting for a year.

I thought it was a good book, why did I get stuck?

It's really annoying. . . . I joined Xinshutou because of my trust. Then I joined tj very late and got no profit. More than 100 yuan was all wasted. I was really disgusted. Why don't you just say no if you stop updating for so long? Don't say anything. If you say it won't be updated, it won't be updated. I don't know what you think of book friends who support you. Aren't you cheating yourself?

Looking at the pace of updates, is it going to be over?

Why don't you rewrite a similar book? Although the plot structure of this book is not very good, I really like some of the settings. I haven't found a good main god farming article in Qidian for a long time. There are also some creation rules in Extraordinary Players. It feels like it should be good together.

I just hope that the richest man can continue to update this book after finishing it

I think this is the best novel written by Sister Qing and has the best setting.

Can I still wait for its update? QAQ