The Substitute Messenger of the Pirate World

I think an author who cannot update ten times a day is not a good author. . . (.`ω´)

What does the stand-in messenger in Marvel have to do with you? Py

I haven't watched it yet, but I'll say something first. JOJO is a battle of wits, not unparalleled. Both the upright and the villain have online IQs.

She says she's a stand-in for office workers, but she's not Killer Queen

There should be only one stand-in, I hope it's not a bunch of stand-ins, otherwise I won't be able to watch it**

The author has something to say. I read this novel just to have a good time, but throughout the whole thing I only saw an office worker speaking the words of an anime character, which seemed to remind me of the time I watched Guilty Crown. I know you want to write your novel at a higher level, but your expression is inappropriate and sounds like a second grader.

Does anyone remember that Dio's original purpose was just the Qiao family's property?

If you plant one author, many authors will soon grow up. If you dare to stop updating, you will kill one of them, and if each chapter is short and weak, you will kill one of them!

If you can beat it, ripple, if you can't beat it, run away

Plagiarizing the original work, Luffy just became the protagonist. There is no story of his own 🙂 What a waste of writing

Daily introduction, daily introduction, I shouldn't have expected anything from this book

After reading some comments, I would like to correct someone's statement. It is not the perfect or super Ai Zhe red stone that can be used to become the ultimate creature, but the perfect red stone "Ai Zhe". Also, I hope it won't be written like an upgrade flow where the protagonist's enhancement or power is too appropriate. This is not only ridiculous but also very boring and cliched.

The setting of the substitute messenger is so awesome that it has been quoted in many works, although it is basically not a battle of wits type.

It feels a bit... A novice article... In short, write it well.

Author Are you a devil? I killed Keya as soon as I arrived.

I want to know if the avatar here is invisible to ordinary people.

I have added this book to my bookshelf three or four times, but I couldn't stand it until the fourth chapter. First, I encountered the plot and awkward dialogue with Weiwei. There is nothing wrong with adding a second setting to One Piece (Bounty Hunter Association). It just feels like the taste is wrong. I have read other Pirates fandoms and they don't quite have this second setting, so I feel It's quite strange. I don't know if it's influenced by other Pirates fans, but I feel that the plot of "Registered Bounty Hunter" is unacceptable. Because bounties are announced and rewarded by the World Government and the Navy, the plot of "Registered Bounty Hunter" always feels like there are multiple organizations in the middle. It feels strange.

Sometimes the male protagonist's speech is a little awkward, because he uses joking slang in the wrong place and makes random jokes. The author can look at those authors who use jokes more naturally and fluently for reference.

I like the settings and stand-in novels in Jojo, but I really don't like writing Jojo slang in novels. As long as the protagonist speaks Jojo slang at all times, I can't read it. Why is this? Is there anything the same?

I invested in a new book. I read one chapter and it was okay. I added bookshelf first and then read it.

Please let the author pay attention to typos, there are too many typos Shichibukai is not Shichigokai Kobra is not Kobra

Too much inner self-talk nonsense

Brother, is this too far-fetched?