An Introduction to Magic

[Rating]: 75 [Book title]: "Introduction to Magic" [Author]: Two Yuan and Five Cents [Type of work]: Fantasy - Epic Fantasy [Number of words read]: 9w [Commentator]: Wild Fishing [Introduction] "Magic science seems to have reached a dead end. We have exquisite industrial assembly lines and airships that travel thousands of miles a day, but our magic science has stagnated. Professor Kelvin pointed out that the edifice of our magic science has been built, and only a few insignificant dark clouds are left, but we don't feel it. Suffocation before the dark clouds overwhelm the city! Who will lead the future development of magic?" Li Li: "Shannon, Turing, von Neumann, Pythagoras, Euclid, Descartes, and Riemann guide us." [Impression of the work] "A language that is enough for magic, but a world that is not enough for magic." This book is definitely a hard-core theoretical school of magic fantasy. The article makes extensive use of molecular chemistry, aerodynamics, origin of species, interstellar civilization, computer principles and other theories combined with magic theory. It is a book suitable for party research and has successfully avoided the hot-blooded youth who like to fight and kill. After all, the protagonist of this article is a weakling who has traveled to the magical world and cannot make a small fireball, but he can shake up the academic world with his brains. At present, there are mostly academic discussions on language. The external environment, setting, and general background do not have a strong perception that this is a "magic world". The atmosphere of a different world is not strong enough, and it even feels that it is not much different from the real world. (Just changing the name of an institution of higher learning to the magical world, a subject that has reached a bottleneck has become magicology, a summit of academic experts that is no different from the modern world has changed the topic, and there is a large amount of theoretical knowledge in the modern world, which does not show the difference in the magical world. Although this sense of indifference can allow readers to quickly enter the novel.) However, this cannot be simply thought of as a novel in which the protagonist uses modern theoretical systems to improve or even subvert the academic world of magic. [Opening & Introduction] "If you ask the author to express the plot of the first three chapters in three sentences, what answer will the author give?" 👇The following is my perception. "The first three chapters are mainly about the male protagonist traveling to the heroine's backyard. The two discuss materialism, spiritual power, magic and other related issues, and the heroine goes to the city hall to apply for identification on her behalf." Removing the author's humorous language and the interactive discussion between the two, after the protagonist begins to recognize these descriptive languages ​​​​about the different world, it returns to the core of the novel [the plot]. Obviously, there is no plot development at the beginning. Although there are many conjectures that look good, after closing the book, such conjectures will be easily forgotten. What can be remembered is the [plot]. But obviously, these conjectures are the core content of this article and must appear. However, it is still recommended that the author adjust the priorities. First set up the event framework, and then supplement the theoretical system like filling in the content. The current plot is too weak. The flaw of the weak plot is that the article has no memory points. 👇 Next is the introduction with logical errors. Let someone who has never read this novel read this introduction and then ask them 2 questions. 1. Do you know what the core of this book is? (What story was told) 2. Can points of interest be extracted from this introduction? (Desire to read) (If you can't answer, you can correct it) The reason why there is a logical error is that only those who have read the introduction can perceive its essence by looking back. But usually the people who see the introduction first have never read the book. So it is recommended to modify it. (With modification comments ①. Regardless of the plot, start from the perspective of the protagonist: a young academic master in a modern higher education institution, how to travel to another world and run through the magic academia when even a small fireball cannot be produced. ②. Consider the plot, start with suspense: a single plot can be extracted. At the beginning of time travel, you will face the crisis of Venus approaching the ground. The earth may collide with Venus or Falling into the sun, how does the protagonist reverse the crisis ③. Directly reflect the main line: This should be simple, crude, and clear. For example, directly talk about the decline of magic, how the protagonist, the copycat, stood on the shoulders of giants and did xxx, xxx, xxx things, and explain a few highlights of the plot) Anyway, the opening introduction needs to be designed with great effort. [Rhythm] "Fast pace and slow pace go hand in hand. After riding the awning boat and then riding the roller coaster, it is exciting." In view of the academic discussion, this article should be regarded as a slow-paced article. After all, it took a long time to open a magic summit. However, there are also fast-developing plots, such as the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, who are very good at blitzkrieg ⚡️ (The emotional line should not be the main line, so it doesn't matter, it even feels good.) However, after traveling 4.6 Billion years later, the heroine seems to have an epiphany and breakthrough (sigh again) For a moment, a person who doesn't have the aura of the protagonist, can't defeat monsters and upgrades to challenge the world, doesn't understand the language, and can't make a small fire, I'll forgive him because he made a Turing machine and got first-class merit.) After the breakthrough, I feel that the style of the painting has changed. There seems to be some shady story, or something, but I can't understand it. The plot of conspiracy started without any warning. (Confused face) This rhythm is wrong. Is there any way to save it by re-planning? (Confused face) 👇But there are still some places that can be saved (I would like to remind you of the over-described scenes below, and list a few of the author's own experiences.) 1. Chapter 4, pages 11-13: Description of campus environment 2. Chapter 5, pages 10-12: Dirty and messy dormitory 3. Chapter 6, pages 12-13: Yue Yue's office 4. Chapter 11, pages 2-3: The sea of elements Landscape (These can be highly compressed with less than 5 lines of words. Never exceed 1 screen, and a paragraph should not exceed 1/2 screen.) [Character & Language Style] "Assistant tenant, pretty landlord??? No, no, no, one A genius girl with incredible strength, a weak academic boy, a sexy lady who is a car addict, and a mentor with unknown sexual orientation and cuteness." No matter whether my above description is in line with the character characteristics that the author originally wanted to convey. But it can be said that every character in the author's works is not just a flat character, but also very three-dimensional. A group of people of flesh and blood. Characters drawn with multiple attributes can add points to the article to a large extent. Take the mentor Owen as an example. He is a big shot in academia. He looks like a man who can destroy the world with every move he makes. But in fact, he pursues retro trends, is obsessed with sexual orientation, eats at academic summits, and betrays students' lifelong events for a report (this bad old man is very bad). But under these attributes, there is a loving heart of an elder who cares for the younger generations. Then there is the language style. Apart from the lengthy academic theoretical knowledge, the daily life in the article is humorous. This is probably a novel that can switch freely between rigor and comedy. [Plot] "It is purely self-perception. What the author thinks has nothing to do with me." I said before that this is not simply a novel in which the protagonist uses a modern theoretical system to improve or even subvert the academic world of magic. I learned this from 4.6 Billion years of travel. Life on earth has experienced 4.6 Billion years of origin and development. The tenacious life has survived several cold winters until today. In the process, most of them were destroyed, but there are still a few who carry the burden forward. Nowadays, there is a crisis of Venus approaching in another world, and panic is spreading in the academic world. When destruction becomes an inevitable program that has been set, will all life passively wait in place for execution? "Breakthrough and uncompromise" seems to have become the theme of this article. Whether it is the bottleneck in academia or the coming cold winter in the evolution of life, it seems that it has not stopped several people from moving forward. I like this sentence in the article: Strong wind can blow up a piece of paper, but it cannot blow away a butterfly.

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The book is pretty good, but why are there so few people there?

I worked overtime until 12:30 in the morning before going home yesterday. I was supposed to finish a chapter, but I just couldn't stand it any longer. I'm sorry. . . Little cuties, if it won't be updated that day, don't vote. If you think the new chapter is good, it's not too late to vote. Two dollars and a half left with a feeling of guilt.

The book is quite good. I specially wanted to support the original version, but it is not on the shelves. I don't know how to support the author. Power generated by love will not last long.

More than 400,000 yuan is not on the shelves? The key point is that this book is okay, I can read it.

A new book club has been created, 712,903,149, or search for "Introduction to Magic Book Club". Interested book friends can come to discuss the settings, complain about the plot, find bugs and troubleshoot the group.

Damn it, I almost had a logical flaw at the end of writing, but luckily I quickly changed the published chapters. But don't worry, I only changed one word.

It is recommended to send an email to the editor. This word count is definitely enough to sign for comfort.

If the author is busy with work, just write slowly. Don't compress the daily plot. Just because there is daily life, this book is much better than other xuebawen.