Ninja at the Top of the Food Chain

Popular science and imagination about Chakra: <1>A brief introduction to Chakra: the energy necessary for using ninjutsu. This energy is a mixture of physical energy absorbed cell by cell in the 130 trillion cells of the human body and spiritual energy experienced through cultivation and exercise. Elemental attributes of Chakra: fire, water, wind, thunder, earth, yin, and yang. It should be noted that the chakra created by a ninja before mastering the change of properties is propertyless, and the only ninjutsu that can be skillfully released is the three-body technique that does not require property changes. But it usually takes several years of practice to completely master a change in nature (Sasuke mastered the change in the nature of fire at the age of 7. During the Chunin Examination, he practiced the second change in the nature of thunder in one month and learned the ** Ninjutsu Chidori; Nagato even mastered six types of chakra property changes including the Yang attribute at the age of 10, and was proficient in thousands of escape techniques of the six major changes in nature. So it is so important to have a good family, good blood, and good teachers. Important! Civilian ninjas can't compare without plug-ins...) Generally speaking, jounin can master more than two types of property changes (chakra test paper is used to check which property change is best at practicing. It does not mean that you cannot practice other changes, but it is only half the effort. For example, the third generation Hokage has the attributes of earth, fire and wind, but he is proficient in all five attribute changes, created hundreds of ninjutsu, mastered most ninjutsu, and was honored as "Doctor of Ninjutsu"). <2> Regarding the discussion of special attribute escape techniques, namely blood successor limit, blood successor elimination, and blood successor snare (a certain organ of a ninja's body is different from the blood successor limit obtained by ordinary people): It is well known that when two or more changes in chakra properties are mixed and used at the same time, a new escape technique will be produced, and a very small number of ninjas can develop this new escape technique on their own. Once successful, this new escape technique will be recorded in the ninja's genes and passed on to the next generation through blood relationships (generally, techniques can only be inherited by blood relationships through genes. Usually, except for people of the same bloodline, others cannot learn it, and even using Sharingan cannot copy it). The currently known attribute Blood Release Techniques include: Blood Release Limits: Burning Release (Fire + Wind), Boiling Release (Fire + Water), Molten Release (Fire + Earth), Magnetic Release (Wind + Earth ), Ice Release (Wind + Water), Explosive Release (Thunder + Earth) , Lan Dun (Thunder + Water), Wood Dun (Water + Earth), Solvent Dun (Water + Earth), Steel Dun (Earth + Yang ), Swift Dun (Wind + Yang ), Ming Dun (Yin + Yang ), Penetration Dun (Wind + Water ); Blood successor elimination: Crystal escape (water + earth + wind ), Taiwan escape (wind + thunder + water ), dust escape (fire + wind + earth); blood successor snare (the power beyond the "blood successor limit" and "blood successor elimination", the fusion of the five elements or the seven Techniques generated by the fusion of all attributes): "Infinite Tsukuyomi", "The Birth of the God Tree World", "Rabbit Hair Needle", "Eighty Gods Air Strike", "Ten no Gochu", "Yellow Spring Hirazaka", "Ashes of Shared Killing", "Expanding Jade of Seeking the Way", etc. How to create a blood inheritance? First of all, we must understand the various attribute characteristics. Fire: High temperature, heating, etc., Can burn the objects in contact, and can make the objects burn; Wind: Sharpness, cutting, etc., Can cut off all objects, and can be attached to weapons to cause greater damage; Thunder: piercing, paralysis, etc., Added to metal weapons, will increase the lethality and electric shock effect; Earth: Thickness, defense, etc., Can change the hardness, composition, mass, and gravity of objects. Makes the body as hard as steel and as soft as clay, suitable for making earth walls to resist other ninjutsu attacks; Water: moistening, penetration, etc., Suitable for "form changes", with a high auxiliary effect; Yin, affects the soul, mind, and spirit. Special: shadow, etc.; Yang, physical influence, doubling, medical treatment, strengthening, transformation, etc. Notes: 1. Ensure that the number of attributes in the fused blood successor is clear. 2. Highlight one or several attributes and characteristics of the blood inheritance. 3. It is best to have a clear reference or accurately describe the characteristics. I will create a blood successor to attract others, such as: Jin Dun. Blood will be eliminated, wind, thunder and earth will be eliminated. The main attribute is earth, and the secondary attribute is wind and thunder. The characteristic properties used are: earth, most characteristic properties; wind, sharpness; thunder, piercing. It can cover the body with a layer of metal armor, ignore most ninjutsu strikes, and is immune to lightning ninjutsu (learn about the Faraday cage, but it is not immune to the high temperature generated by high-voltage electricity). Can create sharp and strong metal weapons and props. <3> Gossip, examination, and popular science: the origin of chakra (based on the official formula book "Book of Formations" and the setting of the comic, not the anime setting). The Otsutsuki clan, who came from a distant land (an alien planet), planted a sacred tree in the ninja world and left the tribesmen guarding the sacred tree on the moon. Most of the Otsutsuki clan left in the hope that they would come back to harvest the fruits of the sacred tree when they matured. Since the birth of mankind, war has never stopped. The "sacred tree" was not involved in the dispute, but has always been worshiped as a sacred pillar. One day, the sacred tree bore a fruit. Although people did not understand the meaning, no one dared to violate the ancestral precepts and touch the fruit of the sacred tree. However, Kaguya Otsutsuki, who stayed behind on the moon, came to the earth in order to obtain the fruits of the sacred tree after the fruits matured (stealing and stealing). After eating the fruit of the sacred tree, Kaguya became the ancestor of chakra, opened the Samsara Sharingan on her forehead and gained god-like power. She single-handedly quelled the wars in the world (ruling the world). Since then, Kaguya has been called the "Goddess of Mao" by the world. After Kaguya calmed down the troubled times, she controlled the world with one person's power, and became pregnant with two sons with "people's blessings" (the comic setting book "Book of Formations" mentioned that Kaguya was an ascetic, so she gave birth to a virgin). Kaguya gave birth to twins, Hagoromo and Hamura. The two children were born with chakra. And her children also spread chakra to humans (sowing seeds everywhere, all humans who can refine chakra have an ancestor). A few years later, the sacred tree transformed into the Ten-Tails Rampage (called by humans), but in fact Kaguya is the sacred tree itself. In fact, it is the return of Otsutsuki Momoshiki (the tree planter, the original owner of the 'fruit') that Kaguya feared to leave, so she is ready to concentrate her strength to resist. She used the "Reincarnation Sharingan" to release the "Infinite Tsukuyomi" on humans, which not only brought the world into the illusion, but also directly connected the human body to the roots of the sacred tree, directly using the power of living people. When the people trapped in the "Infinite Tsukuyomi" were absorbing the chakra, their bodies gradually transformed into white Zetsu. These White Zetsu were soldiers created by Kaguya for resistance. Human beings began to fear and awe, and the honorific title of "Goddess of Mao" became "Ghost" at some point. Kaguya didn't tell anyone what she was feeling, and her sons began to rebel against her for the sake of humanity, or for their own offspring. In the end, Kaguya was sealed on the moon. In order to guard the ten-tailed shell (Kaguya), the heretic demon, Hamura led the Otsutsuki clan to move to the moon. Hagoromo founded the Ninja sect on the earth to protect the world. At this point, Chakra has officially spread in the world. [Before the emergence of chakra, the world of Naruto or the earth had a power system. For example: samurai, onmyoji, witchcraft, senjutsu (yes, senjutsu is earlier than ninjutsu), etc., But they have all been eliminated and only the residue is left. Because they are more difficult to practice than ninjutsu, and the effects obtained are also lower (especially senjutsu, there is a risk of turning into stone if you fail to practice). ]

A great book that was put off by the title. This book would be more eye-catching even if the author had a novice name like Naruto: The Master of Time. If I hadn't specifically used keywords and filter conditions (number of words, update time, etc.) In the library to search for Naruto fans, I couldn't find this book. I don't really feel anything about the character named Yamanaka. But judging from this chapter, it seems that its existence does more harm than good. Its main function is to provide the protagonist with the secret of mind-reading. However, this source can actually be the relic of a dead teammate, so as not to always say poisonous in the comments. The flaws do not hide the merits. It is a rare golden finger that can make people's eyes shine without breaking down too fast. The battle looks quite enjoyable. By the way, is the author Jun the same Fengling Yueying who made the modifier?

To be honest, the writing is okay, but the golden finger is a bit poisonous in terms of time.

It's obviously a space system, right? Time is stopped by locking molecules?

Overall, this book is pretty good, keep it up!

Great support from the author, please keep updating!

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I like it very much, please give it a thumbs up, the author (´-ω-`)

Not to mention the heroine is poisonous, the protagonist is the most disgusting. It's extremely poisonous, even a novice would feel better looking at it than this. (The protagonist works happily with Danzo, promises to Hokage, and later takes Minato as his disciple and promises to Hokage, what should I do? Write Danzo to death. The heroine: Yuko is not lovable, Nonoyu has been with the protagonist for so many years, the two get along well, and when it comes time to talk about marriage, they just run out, see Guanghui throw themselves into her arms, immediately go to the gun, cuckold Nonou, and they have more than two people in a year He was busy fighting every day, but the protagonist didn't say a word to Nonoyu. In the end, the two women fought, and the protagonist took the blame completely, and never looked for reasons. Anyway, the mistress was over, and the original partner was sentenced to life imprisonment, and the biological brother was also imprisoned.) I really can't stand this kind of ethical drama. When I read the comments made by Naruto fans, I was disgusted.

Regarding the brainstorming about the power system in the middle and late stages, I think Mr. Feng, if you want to continue writing the depth of this book, we can continue to break down the power system in detail. First of all, I personally believe that cosmic energy > space power > natural energy of the ninja world > chakra system. First of all, the planet of the ninja world itself is full of vitality and has a large amount of extraordinary energy and natural energy with huge potential. This kind of energy had been developed and used by people on this planet before the arrival of Otsutsuki Momoshiki. Even the three holy places used natural energy, and the three immortals lived for at least more than 1,000 years. Then the Otsutsuki family, mainly Otsutsuki Tao, followed the strategy of Otsutsuki's planet and constantly searched for vibrant planets in the starry sky, so as to plant sacred trees and plunder energy. Here I may bring a little bit of traditional domestic metaphysical theory. Mr. Feng, you can refer to it. Of course, if you feel that my suggestions are inconsistent with your outline, you can ignore it~~ Continue: The planet's originally huge natural energy, as well as the complete and stable five-element cycle, as well as the space structure, were gradually eroded and destroyed by the sacred tree. When the sacred tree bears fruit, the metal, wood, water, fire, and earth of this planet have almost been dispersed into other attributes, and are almost not present in the Five Elements cycle (I will explain it later), and then the wood attribute is almost absorbed by the sacred tree. That's why the wooden shields in the ninja world are so powerful (in addition to their own natural energy and a large amount of vitality, they also It was almost completely plundered by the Otsutsuki family. Senju Hashirama should be the best natural immortal body in history, so he can understand and control the wooden shield in conjunction with the sage mode he developed. After all, only the Ten-Tails possesses the wooden shield besides Senju Hashirama) Then continue to talk about the space of the ninja world that has been destroyed. My personal theory is that the space of this planet is actually not as stable as before. After being eroded and plundered by the sacred tree, the space has become much weaker. Then combined with other explanations from Naruto fans that I have seen that are basically reasonable, the pure land is the space plundered by the sacred tree. And why can't all human beings who practice the Chakra system live longer? Moreover, after death, they are not really dead, but go to the Pure Land. Why is this happening? So according to my own reasoning above, chakra originated from the sacred tree. After the sacred tree plundered so much natural energy, it has the ability to build small worlds and small spaces: this point, whether it is the pure land, the sealed space, the spiritual space of the jinchūriki, especially the spaces in Kaguya's Tian no Gochu, I think they are all plundered from the ninja world. (Especially Kaguya's Heavenly Control, the ultimate ability of the Samsara Sharingan is almost equivalent to recreating a small world.) Therefore, my theory here is that all those who practice the chakra system have their souls linked to the pure land space plundered by the sacred tree. The soul does not reincarnate after death, and the ability of the reincarnation eye to control life and death is actually communicating with the pure land space. Then let's talk about the energy of Chakra. According to the original work, it is the combination of spiritual energy and physical energy. The spiritual power extracts chakra from the cells and fuses them together. And almost all the people in the original novel are short-lived ghosts, except for a few. Personally, I believe that chakra is a kind of high-level biological energy that can be quickly produced, but it is essentially far different from natural energy. Natural energy, whether it is the perception ability when the sage mode is turned on in the original work, as well as the natural energy that helps to recover injuries, and the longevity of the three great sages, natural energy is the original extraordinary system of the ninja world and the inevitable choice of the biological evolution system, similar to the aura in our novels. Then let's talk about why I am so repulsive to chakra, because the omnipotent cells and cloned cells will reduce the vitality and vitality of Luo Zige's cells, so in essence, all the behaviors of extracting chakra are shortening life span, drinking poison to quench thirst to gain temporary powerful power. Moreover, according to my previous theory, chakra is the power that has combined your own physical body and spiritual power. Then spiritual power is actually the embodiment of soul power. Therefore, after you die, your soul will be pulled into the pure land space by the chakra system. As long as you practice chakra, being pulled into the pure land space is almost irresistible. As for the Pure Land Space, it has been more than a thousand years since Otsutsuki Hagoromo took charge. The souls, spiritual power, and huge amount of chakra collected in it are too much. So it seems that only those who are reincarnated in the dirty land are unkillable and have almost endless chakra. This is all supported by Pure Land. According to the theory I mentioned earlier that the cycle of the five elements of the ninja world has been damaged, I personally believe that all five elements of chakra ninjutsu only use chakra to simulate and utilize materials in nature, and do not achieve the supreme power of the real natural phenomena in nature. According to what I said earlier, the metal and wood attributes have been almost completely destroyed, and the wood attribute has been almost completely plundered by the sacred tree and Otsutsuki's bloodline. So for metal, the five elements of metal overcome wood. The Otsutsuki family naturally weakened the metal and divided it into other attributes. Personally, I think it is the wind attribute. Why the wind attribute ninjutsu in the original book has a very sharp attribute, very sharp, suitable for cutting and restraining people with thunder attributes? In fact, the wind attribute contains differentiated metallicity, metal conducts electricity, and thunder attribute ninjutsu is not restrained but spread. Of course this is all my imagination. Then let's talk about other attribute escape techniques. I personally think that the Blood Succession Snare - Yin Yang, wind, thunder, water, fire, earth, combined with the basic material: Seeking the Way Jade, this power should be Kaguya's basic force to build the space in the sky. Because it is a weakened version of the basic material for building space, it restrains all seven-attribute shield spells. As I said before, the basic purpose of the sacred tree is to plunder the vitality of other planets and build a small world within the body. And because the Otsutsuki family has this power, they do not want other "untouchables" to have this power, so the Sage of Six Paths worked hard to use the space power that the planet has been destroyed and can easily borrow, and after sealing his own mother, he separated the "Yin Yang and Five Elements". Of course, according to Li Lin before me, this "Yin Yang and Five Elements" itself is inferior and has loopholes. Akai can break Madara's staff with one punch, and then Uchiha Madara himself can use the Senfa Arashi Shield Light Fang to cut the celebrity's black stick of seeking jade into two pieces. It can be seen that the seeking jade only restrains the chakra system (including destroying the soul body after the reincarnation of the dirty land, after all, as mentioned before, your soul belongs to the pure land after refining chakra), including destroying Minato's two hands. But the saury is not unsolvable. In fact, pure power can break it. In the middle and later stages, Luo Zi, who has a cosmic energy system such as strong interaction force, nuclear bombs, and electromagnetic force, should be able to easily break the saury without thinking. After all, natural energy comes from the universe, and the four basic forces of the universe are above all else.

Regarding the relationship between the Caged Bird Curse Seal, the Byakugan and the Reincarnation Eye. I have read a lot of this science and technology stream, and the Naruto fans who have independently developed the stream have combined their own ideas and come up with the following theoretical ideas. Friends who are willing to read it can discuss it. The Caged Bird was indeed originally a high-level bloodline seal created to protect Byakugan, but its initial function did not include the effect that the person with the total price could control the life and death of the separated family members at will. First, let's look at known history and intelligence. The Hamura lineage of Otsutsuki has been guarding the seal of the heretic demons and monitoring the entire ninja world since they immigrated to the moon more than a thousand years ago. Then why has the Hamura line been indifferent to the various melees of the Ninja World during the Warring States Period for more than a thousand years? Haven't they always believed that the so-called Ninja of Otsutsuki Hamura (Six Paths Sage) always failed? Why not destroy the Ninja World and rebuild it? Two reasons. 1. The giant Tenseigan has not accumulated enough energy; 2. The ninja world has the power to resist the Tenseigan and use the moon to destroy the world. I don't quite agree with the first of the two statements, because even if hundreds of years have passed, the Moon Otsutsuki lineage still doesn't have enough Byakugan and energy to operate the Giant Tenseigan? Impossible. So my idea is the second one. My idea is: The Hyuga clan in the ninja world at that time had enough power to stop the Moon Otsutsuki clan. The descendants of the original Ōtsutsuki Hamura remained in the ninja world: the Hyuga clan, like the moon Ōtsutsuki, all have ancestors (Ōtsutsuki Hamura). Detailed information about the reincarnated eye, which in my theory is the evolutionary direction of Ōtsutsuki's most primitive group of white eyes. But it is obvious that because of the continuous wars in the ninja world, the Moon Otsutsuki branch wants to destroy everything about the Sage of Six Paths. So they started the plan to plunder the White Eyes. The Byakugan of the clan on the moon was definitely not enough to separate the families and plunder the giant reincarnated eyes, so they came to the ninja world to plunder the Byakugan of Hinata's group. In order to resist the moon Ōtsutsuki's plundering Byakugan plan, the Cage Bird came into being. The earliest caged bird was not to control the life and death of the separated family, but to be destroyed immediately once it was plundered. In an emergency, the curse seal could be used to fuse the white eyes of all people with the curse seal to synthesize a giant reincarnation eye to resist the power of the moon Otsutsuki. The caged bird is indeed amazing and talented at first, and is indeed the patron saint of the Hyuga clan. But you also know that people's hearts will change. With the original version of the Caged Bird Curse Seal, the ambitions of the family heads in Hinata's area have become more and more inflated. They do not regard the other members as human beings but regard them as tools to fuse the giant reincarnation eye. So he began to separate the Hyuga clan and the Hyuga branch family. The Hyuga of his own lineage was the head family, and the others were branch families. And he tampered with part of the abilities of the caged bird, so that the caged bird, which was originally used to force the fusion of the giant reincarnation eye in emergencies, the crystallization of the wisdom of the ancestors of the Hyuga clan, and the protective umbrella of the Hyuga clan, turned into a vicious curse seal that could control the life and death of the branch family at will. At the same time, the clan branches of Moon Otsutsuki became increasingly fierce due to wars and disagreements, and had no time to take care of the ninja world. Therefore, the Cage Bird Curse Seal of the Hyuga clan continues until later - the emergence of the Hyuga Tennin. Hyuuga Tennin is a super master at the same level as Senju Hashirama, and at least he has the peak combat power of Chaokage. And why is he so fierce? It must be the reason for the Tenseigan. In my theory, Hyuga Tennin is a kind and compassionate head of the family. He looked through various information about the Hyuga clan in the past and discovered the original intention of the ancestors who first developed the caged bird and the sins of the head of the family who later tampered with it. So he stepped forward and evolved the Tenseigan after eating a lot of chakra (another evolution method of the Tenseigan in the original movie version) to protect the Hyuga clan from being bullied by the Moon Otsutsuki branch and other families in the ninja world.

Someone said this book is excellent? ? ? The character of the protagonist is completely rubbish. He is inhumane, has a bad temper, is a eunuch, is selfish, and does not have a strong heart. The strength gained by other people's efforts, you are a golden finger, and then look at everyone, he is not a human, he is just a pretender. His outlook is extremely evil. Who must be reading this book?

The author should stop writing emotional dramas and just kill off all the heroines.

Recently, I have a new idea. I combine it with other fans, natural science, biological science, and a little bit of the framework of immortality novels. I have a new point of view. Can you discuss it with Feng Shao? It is the so-called Senju Hashirama, why is the immortal body obviously not on the same level as others, not even Uzumaki Naruto. Why did Hashirama's cells in later generations become so powerful? I think, in the final analysis, it was because his sage mode was more advanced and absorbed enough natural energy to change the quality of his body's cells. First of all, let's take a look at the sacred tree. It absorbs a lot of natural energy from the ninja world, which is why it is so powerful. The origin of chakra also comes from the fruits of the sacred tree that absorb so much natural energy. Then to infer from here, Senju Hashirama's Sage Mode can be said to advance in seconds, so I think his body cells are very advanced, and his chakra is no longer ordinary chakra, but complete sage chakra, so Senju Hashirama's Sage Mode can be used anytime, anywhere, and advance in seconds. And because ordinary people who practice the sage mode can easily be corroded and assimilated into stone by natural energy and return to nature, and Senju Hashirama's cells are so corrosive, Senju Hashirama should have developed every cell in his body to assimilate celestial magic cells with natural energy, which is very close to the vitality of the heretic demon, which is the sacred tree. The immortal body of Senju Hashirama should be the improvement of the immortal mode of the three holy places when he practiced the immortal mode, so that his body is equivalent to integrating with nature. Of course, it is still a little short of the body of the heretic demon~~ This is also the most fundamental source of power of Senju Hashirama: blending into nature. So it's not actually how strong the wooden shield is, nor is Taiga's wooden shield. It's mainly because Senju Hashirama himself is strong. His cells, his body, have been developed close to nature. Using nature, Senju Hashirama's own body is stronger~~ If you follow other spiritual energy recovery flows From the point of view of the novel, Senju Hashirama has completed the evolution at the cellular level and has reached a higher level of life~~ It is equivalent to opening the genetic lock🔒 and assimilating the body and natural energy, which is why Senju Hashirama can be so powerful and create so many forests in Konoha Village. Moreover, it can also suppress tailed beasts without any thought - this kind of product originates from the sacred tree and is derived from nature. But to put it bluntly, it is still using natural energy, and it has not reached the level of harmony between man and nature. It's still a little short of the level of vitality of the Ten-Tails, the body of the sacred tree. It's very close, but it's a world of difference, otherwise it wouldn't be the same in the end. He was seriously injured and died after waxing~~ So I think Brother Luozi may have to be a non-human next. In the Naruto world, only by not being a human can you become stronger~~~ If we develop natural energy and integrate it with ourselves~~ We can develop it into the elementalization and naturalization of the body like the Thunder Fruit. This is also a new sublimation between man and nature, haha~~ Then it will be others' turn to study "Lelo Cells", haha, so funny~~

This woman Guanghui really ruins the book, Pigfoot is a lunatic, and his two women are also lunatic. There has been intrigue and intrigue all day long. Is this a palace fight scene? Just ask if the author can kill Guang Hui? What has become of good ninja literature?

To be fair, I read dozens of chapters. The protagonist is a very pure egoist. And the most important thing is that the protagonist is a mercenary with extremely rich combat experience, but the author's description is really useless. Then I have to complain about the protagonist's abilities. With this ability, wouldn't it be a good idea to learn 8 Dunjia? Don't think about learning some attribute ninjutsu that is a waste of time. With the protagonist's ability, he can learn the Eight Gate Dunjia in minutes. In a fight, open the eighth door directly and kill him instantly. Then resume. Why are you just thinking about getting a Dust Escape? If you take the Dust Escape Chakra and you don't have enough, you can go back after using it twice. Isn't this an obvious flaw? Moreover, the author's protagonist has too many character flaws. I always want to write that he is a visitor from another world, working hard for his own safety. But I didn't write this feeling at all. Forget it, I can't complain anymore. I have written so much but I don't know if anyone will read it or if it will be deleted. Sorry author. Suddenly I want to complain. The description of the protagonist is still not detailed enough, and the protagonist is a mercenary who has experienced hundreds of battles. What you write is a ruthless and equivalent killing machine.

I always feel that the author wants to write the battle scenes into a smart battle type. As a result, it feels like the protagonist, who possesses ninjutsu that completely transcends the world, is always restrained in various ways and forcibly increases the enemy's strength. It is obvious that the strength of each ninja village from the second generation onwards is completely a novice in the fourth battle! You can have ninjutsu to restrain yourself, but the time ninjutsu is a ninjutsu that can not be restrained, not to say it can restrain everything, but it is really difficult for the protagonist to use it in the hands of the protagonist.

The character of the protagonist is really awkward. You are a mercenary. It doesn't matter if you are dark, but you are aloof, cruel, suspicious, selfish, and self-centered. What the heck is it that he desires to destroy peace in his heart and likes bloody killings? The purpose of wanting to be Hokage is actually to drag the entire ninja world into war. Most people become mercenaries just because they are not adapted to peaceful life or for money. How can anyone become a mercenary just to kill people? Moreover, the protagonist is a knowledge-based mercenary who is a graduate student. Also, killing people and seizing treasures is straightforward. How can you kill one of your own and then confess on his corpse, "I don't want to kill you. For the sake of teaching me knowledge (soul searching), I will treat your family well." It's so hypocritical.

I want to die laughing. It started with the King of Soldiers, the Special Forces. Patrolling in the African desert made me laugh to death. Patrollers in prosperous areas in Africa are not very regular. You are still doing it in the desert. Are you being treated in a place called the African Psychiatric Hospital? You thought you were a special forces soldier. Hahahahahaha. It made me laugh to death.

It looked good in the early days, with novel themes, but unfortunately it didn't do so well after taking power. It's obviously a world where great power belongs to one person, but you have to go the military route Most people watch Naruto to see the various weird and mysterious abilities in it, not to see the war. When watching Naruto fan fiction, we come to see how one person suppresses an entire world, not how to use it. The army pushed it flat, This should be the reason why this book is not popular. It is obvious that the writing style and the theme of revelation are not bad in all aspects, but it is a pity Even if you let the protagonist use time and space ninjutsu to develop "Buddha Kingdom in the Palm", "Dimension Dimension Travel", "Timeline Strike", "Erosion of Myths, Myths Are Immortal, I Am Immortal"... It all looks very interesting,

It was going fine until Yuzu came out, what the hell. It's good that you wrote a cold-blooded protagonist, but I can't stand it when you write a female protagonist. I've never cared about my younger brother, and I'm convinced that he's so kind to a woman.

1. I skipped all of Yuko's plot. Basically she just doesn't have the ninja talent, and she's not ready. After the incident where she deceived her teammate's teacher, she shouldn't be laughing like this. When you come up with the task, you should be able to clearly convince others that you are ready. You have understood the nature of a ninja and you are ready to sacrifice everything. The result was nothing, but it made me feel that her role was a bit bitchy, and I couldn't understand the showdown and cooperation between the protagonist and her at all 2. I thought that the protagonist would use the power of time to learn ninjutsu from his future self, but I misunderstood. The protagonist's strength improved so quickly that he reached chunin level in a few days.

After reading the first chapter, the protagonist is a mercenary, and the writing style is dark and melancholy. It feels like I am writing a new poem to express my sorrow. No matter how I read it, I feel uncomfortable. I read the book reviews and found nothing negative. Is it my aesthetic problem or have all the negative things been deleted?

A very rubbish book, very poisonous from the beginning

It's a bit toxic in the early stages... The first 80 chapters are written like the main character is like a robot, which feels very inhumane. From about 150 chapters on, it feels like he's anti-human. He kills people and steals spiritual transformations, but he still blames himself after that. It always feels like he built a memorial memorial for someone else.

Psycho, you are also a talent. You turned a good protagonist into a psychopath.

Finally, I want to say one more thing today. The reasons that allowed me to stay and read this novel are: 1. Brother Luo Zi's character is calm enough, and the subject matter is novel (time manipulation), and the plot time is relatively staggered to Naruto and Sasuke's second battle. 2. The supporting characters have their own stories, and they will not be as stupid/dead as the supporting characters in Shuangwen. 3. The original characters are actually pretty good, and Yuko's story is actually pretty good. I don't understand why there are so many people complaining about it? Personally, I don't dislike female protagonists at all. As long as Yuko doesn't get involved in classic poisonous plots, I can accept the story of Yuko and Luozi's leisurely daily life. And the foreshadowing of Yuko's abilities later is really great. I really hope that Yuko can be a good helper next to Luozi and help him develop ninjutsu! There are so many monthly tickets!

At best, this is a "novice novel". The true evaluation is that this is an "idiot novel". Idiots write for idiots to read, idiots praise after reading it

It's a rubbish book, worse than a novel. I gave it up after reading only two chapters... I could explain something clearly in one sentence, but it was a complete chapter. Although the writing style is acceptable, the procrastinating and long-winded style makes people irritated and does not feel satisfying at all...

The old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long.

Well, I've only read a few dozen chapters, and an idea occurred to me, so I dialed the last word and read the title of the last chapter of the finale—Seclusion. ? What ? , The protagonist, who is rational and lustful, finally lives in seclusion? ? ?